Despite the fact that this story is on FIA, my favorite type of story still leaves the reader guessing until the end. What I mean is, I love stories where you read the whole chapter, knowing that Ginny is deeply involved with some man, but you don't know who that man is until the end. You wrote this perfectly and had I not known this was a D/G, I still would have been immensely satisfied with the outcome of the story. (sorry if that doesn't quite make sense).
I love how you were able to keep their emotions separate and distinct, easily delving into Ginny's psyche before jumping into Draco's thoughts and worries. I very much enjoyed reading this and appreciate any author's bravery and willingness to publicly post a story for anyone to read. Fantastic read, very well done

Every time I read the new chapter with this story, I love it even more. I was so pleased to see that you went the time skips route to where you are jumping back and forth between the past and present day. I feel that way of writing gives the reader more perspective and makes you anticipate what more will happen.
That being said, and my obvious obsession with this story, if you are looking to put out the next chapter sooner rather than later, I would be more than willing to be your BETA for a chapter or two. I only have one story on here but I am under the penname "Lucky Th13rteen" on ff.net and there are almost a dozen other one shots or stories on there. Message me here or there if you are interested, I would love to see your writing continued at your own pace rather than someone else's

Author's Response: Thanks! I would love to have another beta, but I think my fifth will be back soon, so no point in sendig it to you. I'll send you the sixth as soon as it's ready, alright? There actually is only two chapters left, fifth and sixth. I'll get in touch soon! Thanks again!