COMPLETE! Strolling through Diagon Alley Lucius Malfoy comes across a little boy who could have been Draco's twin. Has his family tree been expanded, without his knowledge? Has Draco been keeping secrets? Or is he oblivious to the fact that he may have an heir?Category: Long and Completed
well I must say that it wasn't my favorite story but it did somewhat have a good story line. I think it would have been better if Draco would have played a less sappy roll and I cannot believe you didn't have him spank those children for their actions...that was what ruined the story for me, they seemed to get away with absolutely everything.
Author's Response: Thanks! What you have to remember is Draco is very new to this parenting caper. He has no idea what he\'s doing, but that will improve with time ;)
The newly weds return to Hogwarts to find privacy is hard to come by.Category: Works in Progress
mm, I think it was pretty good but I think it would have done better with more chapters and a bigger plot. You could have gone a long and excellent way with this story but what you showed was really good.
Author's Response: Thanks! You might have noticed that the story is incomplete, which means there\'s more to come :) I just need to find some time to write all my ideas ;)