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Hello! So there's not too much to know. Obviously I read fanfics, d/g being my favourite, but I'll read anything well-written and am a huge lover of banter and sarcasm.
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The Competition by katelyn_d_89    (Reviews - 264)

Ginny's late night visits to the kitchen lead to a potentially dangerous run-in with Draco Malfoy. Angered by his dismissal of her, she decides it's time to show him how the game is really played.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 23 | Word count: 50226 | Read count: 42133 | Published: Apr 04, 2008 | Updated: Oct 30, 2008
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Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Oct 31, 2008 Title: Chapter 23: Given Everything

ooooooh foreshadowing :S

that was a very sweet chapter :)
a couple of glitches though. you might wanna look it over a bit.

please update soon!



bee245

The Advice of Blaise Zabini by Citrus587    (Reviews - 54)

To this day, Draco Malfoy still cannot pinpoint the day when his best friend became a genius. Blaise Zabini, however, is most definitely a genius. After all, he gave Draco the best advice of his life.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 4 | Word count: 5758 | Read count: 15486 | Published: Apr 20, 2008 | Updated: Jun 08, 2008
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Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Apr 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Give Her Your Attention

haha thats great!:D

keep it up!:D



bee245

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Glad you like it!

The First Five Times by ticklemeemoscam    (Reviews - 40)

A short one-shot based on The First Five Times by Stars. Some smut, some one liners, and in keeping with the song, some sap.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 2784 | Read count: 3099 | Published: Apr 20, 2008 | Updated: Apr 20, 2008
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Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: May 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

that was great :D i loved the humour too :D



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Faerie Tales and Dragonflies by gidge_8    (Reviews - 200)

Light-hearted and fun. Ginny Weasley finds herself the target of a bit of manipulation while helping Narcissa Malfoy plan her 25th anniversary ball until mischief and a little mayhem land her squarely in a Cinderella situation. Romance abounds, with a litle help from the faeries. Winner - Best Portrayal of Ginny Weasley - 2008 dg ficexchange.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Lucius Malfoy, Molly Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy, Other Characters
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 14 | Word count: 61347 | Read count: 90878 | Published: May 21, 2008 | Updated: Jul 08, 2008
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Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Jul 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - The Grand Finale

:D:D:D

very cute!:D

glad there wasnt too much drama at the end :)



bee245

Author's Response: I needed just a wee bit of drama, or it would have been no fun. Cute was what I was aiming for, so thanks for letting me know I hit the mark. :)

Wishes For Your Soul by Lirie Halliwell    (Reviews - 170)

The idea of "renting" her soul out to anyone - let alone a former Slytherin nemesis - did not sit well with Ginny Weasley. But circumstances always tend to go askew and when she finds herself in a dire position, Ginny has no choice but to relent, accepting the deal and the seven wishes offered as payment.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger, Luna Lovegood
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Future AU
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 7 | Word count: 31950 | Read count: 41570 | Published: Jun 13, 2008 | Updated: Jul 22, 2008
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Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Dec 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: *** seventh wish ***

that's a great ending!!!! :D:D

lol I really really love this story. good job, and good ideas :D

hahaha I can't stop grinning lol :D:D



bee245

Theories on How Danger Finds Us by Alexandria Malfoy    (Reviews - 71)

Ginny's knack for getting into trouble follows her as she goes away for college, forcing her into a dangerous situation.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Other Characters, Pansy Parkinson
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Action, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: Blood, Character Death
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 8 | Word count: 29426 | Read count: 9028 | Published: Jun 15, 2008 | Updated: Apr 06, 2009
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Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Aug 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

AHH that's so cute :D

oh thank god there's no gareth in her future love life.....he seems a bit fishy to me....hmm....

update soon please!!:D



bee245


PS--- WOW that dress!!!:O

Author's Response: Thanks! ^^ I need to get all the fluff in now, before the actual danger happens. No; no Gareth in Ginny\'s love life, at least. Yeah, that dress is, like, mind-bogglingly gorgeous. If I could, I\'d *so* wear it at my own wedding.

Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Aug 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

ahahahahaha this is a great story!!

it is, and i say this at the risk of sounding like a fakely charming old lady, delightful ;)

really i was laughing the whole way through it :D

please update soon!!:D



bee245

Author's Response: haha. Thanks! No, you didn\'t end up sounding like an old lady. =D I haven\'t even started chapter 6 yet, but I\'ll try writing some of it tonight. Thanks again!

Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Mar 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

gah! finally, you update!! :D
not bad chapter. not much happened but it can move things along fairly easily.

I really like her outfits.

PLEASE PLEASE update soon with mooooore!!! :D



bee245

Author's Response: Yeah, not a lot happened in this chapter, but I just needed to get it out of the way. I really like Ginny's outfits, too. :P And I've already made progress with chapter 8, so I'll try to get it out soon! Thanks for your review. :)

Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Apr 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

oh WOW that would be a SICK date!!! :O:O

good update! :) I think the beginning was a bit too much info, but other than that, interesting take on dating advice :)



bee245

Author's Response: Yeah, I thought it would be pretty cool to have their first date in Vienna. :D Thanks for your thoughts on the beginning and thanks for your review!

Where I Stand by Adelagia    (Reviews - 431)

Hired by the Malfoys to manage their public relations after a bout of bad press, Ginny discovers that some relationships just aren't meant to stay strictly professional.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Luna Lovegood, Narcissa Malfoy
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 13 | Word count: 33728 | Read count: 92749 | Published: Jun 28, 2008 | Updated: Jul 20, 2008
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Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Oct 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Epilogue

YES!
perfect ending!!:D:D:D:D:D

yay!!



bee245

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Draco's Pet by CCC    (Reviews - 149)

Ginny wakes with no memory. Should she believe the blond man with the gray eyes? Why would he lie to her?
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Future AU
Genres: Humor, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 6 | Word count: 9983 | Read count: 17687 | Published: Jul 09, 2008 | Updated: Aug 26, 2009
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Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Aug 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

whaaa!!!:O:O

good story!:D update soon please!



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Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Aug 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

ahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
good! he's feeling guilty!

this is a really great story :D:D

PLEASE update soooon!:D



bee245

Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Oct 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

ooooooo getting tense!

she's very naive. i can't wait til she finds out what he did :D:D

update soon please!



bee245

Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Mar 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

smart girl!! :D I'ma sensin' some tension!

and I just noticed! it's like Hermione's thing with Snape in The Devil You Know.

iiiiinteresting....

update soon please! :D



bee245

The Rules of Engagement by dragonsangel68    (Reviews - 136)

After accepting a foolish dare at a party Draco finds himself breaking the very rules he set for his own self preservation, and his life has been irreversibly turned upside down. He knows what he has to do to restore order to his once carefree life, but finding the strength is a challenge he appears not to be able to meet.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger, Lucius Malfoy, Narcissa Malfoy, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 7 | Word count: 30139 | Read count: 39418 | Published: Jul 21, 2008 | Updated: Aug 24, 2008
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Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Aug 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: A Question of Sanity

aaaaaaahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!

this story is hilarious :D please update soon!



bee245

Author's Response: Thank you :) It will be updated soon!

Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Aug 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Epilogue

ahahahahahahaha!!!!!

that was really funny. great story! :D



bee245

Author's Response: Thank you :)

Contractual Obligations by gidge_8    (Reviews - 751)

Selling herself into a marriage contract, Ginny finds herself playing a deadly game, ultimately pitting her husband against her lover and a father against his son. Many twists and turns, depth and evil characters - and a long story of sweet and true love.

New! Epilogue is up! Yes, I know, the story has been "complete" for a couple of years, but this ending has been partially written for a long time and it ties up some loose ends.

Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Lucius Malfoy, Other Characters
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Non-consensual sex, Sexual Violence
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 32 | Word count: 165632 | Read count: 101823 | Published: Sep 05, 2008 | Updated: Jan 05, 2014
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Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Dec 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Facing the Morning After

yay! no more block!

good chapter. very bittersweet...
i liked her outburst very much :)

i can't wait to see what will happen!



bee245

Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, our favorite couple has gotten themselves into a right mess, and they both are a bit mixed up about it at the moment. I would be. Much to come, stay tuned!
Best Wishes
-G

Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Feb 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Suspicious Activity

ooooooooof that's one hefty chapter. well done.

oh man though during the whole beginning with the papers and the letter I thought she'd forget it there and that Lucius would find it :S:S I'm SO glad that didn't happen because this other confrontation was MUCH more interesting :D

quick note: with apostrophes, if it's a proper noun that ends with an "s", you still add another "s", unless there are many people or things by that name. so it'd be Lucius's. looks weird, I know....

anyways fantastic chapter :D great tension worked in :D I can't decide if Lucius is falling in love with her or not....


update soon please!! :D



bee245

Author's Response: Oh Lordy... grammar is going to be the absolute death of me. It's no wonder that it was always my worst subject. Thanks for the info, otherwise I never would have known.
Good catch with Lucius. BTW. :)

Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Sep 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Facing the Consequences

:O:O:O!!!!!!!!!!!
VERY intriguing!!:D:D

please update soon!



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Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Sep 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Anything but a White Wedding

lol yeah i was thinking about the whole muggle thing, what with the whole "i wonder how he knew my name was ginny" :P

and i actually really really like that she didn't get married to draco. it's a nice and refreshing twist :D

please update soon!



bee245

Author's Response: You can thank my beta for that addition/clarification. Thank goodness for betas... :)

Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Sep 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Newlywed

GO GINNY!

i think i like draco in this story.
not that i don't like him in others, just that he seems real in this one.
....not that he's not real in others....

do you understand what i mean?

lol probably not....

that's ok :)

update soon please!



bee245

Author's Response: In later chapters, he\'ll be very real. I sorta based his reactions on my husband in several key areas.

Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Sep 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Settling In

i think it's a nice development in the story.
it answers some small questions and that's always good :)

please update soon!



bee245

Author's Response: Thanks! We\'ll have more questions answered along the way, but each in its own time. Next update should be in a few days! I so appreciate you taking the time to let me know what you think.

Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Sep 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Hope in Diagon Alley

that is very sweet :) you can see him falling in love with her and I feel very bad for them :(



bee245

Author's Response: I\'m glad you see the sweet side. It is a very odd, intense mix and will continue to be. Love your reviews and feedback. Hugs!
-G

Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Sep 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Appreciating the Unusual

:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

THIS STORY IS SO GOOD!!!:D

i'm LOVING the tension :D

please update soon!



bee245

Author's Response: You think it\'s tense reading, you should have seen me writing it. :) The main reason Faerie Tales was so cute was because I needed to write something that was completely opposite of this story. Next chapter should be up soon, after a bit more review. Thanks so much for being such a wonderful reviewer.
-G

Reviewer: bee245 Signed
Date: Oct 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Desperate Measures

gah lucius you asshole!!!!:(:(:(
this is all very sad....
but very very good :D

please update soooooon!!



bee245

Author's Response: Sorry, can't update faster than about once per week. My husband actually likes to spend time with me. :)