Draco and Ginny discover that the truth is a funny creature, especially when you can’t lie successfully.Category: Long and Completed
a nice relaxing afternoon with the best friend THAT LOVES HER! :D
cute chapter. crazy drama though lol, but it's interesting :)
god I can't WAIT until the cat's out of the bag :D
and I am loving your quick updates :)
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Author's Response: Ginny knows where she's most comfortable ;) Thanks!
lol finally someone tells them. great banter :D weird bet though haha.
update soooon please! :D
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Author's Response: Thanks! Someone had to tell them ;)
ha finally :D took them long enough ;)
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Author's Response: These things can't be rushed ;)
hehe...that was cute :)
their family's weird lol :D:D
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Author's Response: Thank you :)
hehe I'm liking the sentimental Lucius :)
cute chapter!! :)
thanks for the quick updates!! :D
bee245
Author's Response: Thanks! Lucius is just a marshmallow ;)
:D:D:D:D
that was a very, very cute ending :D
very fitting :)
well done!
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Author's Response: Thank you :)
*From the 2008 D/G Fic Exchange* Draco and Ginny compete against each other in The Pike – a professional wizarding tournament that’s also highly illegal. What’s even more illegal is the memory of their one night stand five years ago and how their leftover feelings confuse and distract them until the only left to do is to eliminate the competition.Category: Works in Progress
nice story! intriguing :)
update soon please! :D
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One-shot in which Lucius Malfoy must wrestle with his absent conscience concerning an upcoming attack on the Weasley family, thinking of one girl in particular and her relationship with his son. Ignoring his wife's threat that Ginny's death would destroy his only son, Lucius follows his orders and must face the consequences of his decision.Category: Completed Short Stories
so sad. so, so sad. the only note I have is that the ending was a little bit abrupt. just another sentence or two to make it a more complete conclusion. but all the rest was...so sad. my eyes welled up :'(
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Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I'll look more into that and see if anything new strikes me, if not it'll stay as is but I will definitely think about it.
Based on the poem of the same name. Draco hides Ginny in the country while he tries to atone for his sins. But what happens when Draco isn't there to protect her?Category: Works in Progress
it's turning out melodramatic. your prose is too casual to be putting in lines from the original ballad in it, like the "ghostly galleon" stuff. it's out of place. and at points you have waayy too much information, like with how Ron broke. the story's about Ginny and Draco, and you don't need it unless Ron's going to be the Tim of the story, in which case why would her own brother give them away? unless he had a fit, where he didn't know what he was doing and so on....but even then I'd think it'd be too much. sometimes simplicity can be more powerful than graphic descriptions.
I think the biggest problem is that you're trying to adapt the story to the ballad, when you should be adapting the ballad to the story. for example, they don't have to have red coats. they can just be an "ominous cloud of marching blackness" or something I dunno. use your literary license :)
good luck.
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Ginny blurs the lines between fantasy and reality.Category: Completed Short Stories
Very beautiful. I lovelove the 'perfect metaphor' line. I love how you didn't just focus on stereotypical things like his appearance but also the WAY he does things...
Lol you just made all lovesick over a fictional character :D. Congratulations.
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Once upon a time there lived a princess. She lived in an odd-looking castle far away in a land called Ottery St. Catchpole with her father, the king, her mum, the queen, and her six older brothers, the princes.Category: Completed Short Stories
haha that's really cute! :D
I like that you didn't break the "good sir knight" and "princess" stuff anywhere. very, very cute! :D
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When Ginny wins a bottle of Felix Felicis strange things happen. (This is set in Hogwarts era, but it's AU. We'll assume Slughorn still works there.)Category: Works in Progress
oh that bastard!!!! :O but holy crap he sounds hot.
great story :D I love the prose. very clear and to the point. funny :)
update soon please!! :D
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LOL!! that's so great :D:D:D
hahahaha I love his possessiveness. I'm curious as to if it's an act or not :D
update soooon please! this story is really funny :D
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lol...kind of weird :P cute though :)
update soon please! I'd love to see where this is going :)
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WHOA. draco back OFF!!
wow he's starting to sound creepy lol.
however: "Pansy waved at her with one finger."
that's just plain awesome :D
update soon please!!! I need to know what's going on in his head! :D
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gasp! she's in trouble. very interesting update. the only criticism I have is that it's all happening very fast.
anyways, update soon! :)
i can't wait until he turns back and they're already bound :D THAT'LL be very good :D
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AHH well I can't say I didn't see THAT coming :D
nice addition. the only thing I can say is that you can take your time with the plot points. it's a teensy bit rushed. I'm wondering if it's just so you can have this back story and now you're going to get into the real problems?
either way, update soon please! :D
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gah! well I'm glad he's pretty much back in character. good job keeping the obsessiveness in the transition.
update sooooon please! :)
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Woooo that's great! I love the subtle moments of doubt and the consistency of both their characters. Good stuff :D
Update soon please!! :D:D
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woo! I must say, I love this Draco. much cooler than the weird obsessed one. much more conflict than just "he's a crazy stalker". him speechless at the end made me giggle with glee :D.
update soon please! :)
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Draco and Ginny compete to be the highest bidder for a portrait of a little-known Italian potions apprentice.Category: Completed Short Stories
**Winner of Funniest Fic Overall and Favorite Line in the 2008 dgficexchange.**
very, very cute!! :D and very funny! lol I really, really enjoyed it :D
I liked them both too, and you pulled off the anger without sounding corny, so good job! :)
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Ginny drew things that made her happy. Draco Malfoy was arrogant, beautiful – and evil. Ginny knew that. But drawing him still made her happy – because though he was cruel, she recognized, and fell in love with the angel...in his heart.Category: Works in Progress
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My breathing was harsh, each breath ripping up my throat unwillingly.
"I tried my best. You asked me to hate you, and I tried my very best to," I said tremulously, my voice nearly incoherent.
What I had not said seemed to hang in the air, just as if I had said it: That if he asked me to love him, I would.
His eyes suddenly seemed to come alive, like melting pewter. They were burning with the emotion I had been fighting not to recall.
"But you know I never wanted you to," he whispered.
"I know."
ooooooh very goooood!!! :D
I wasn't a huge fan of the beginning but I really liked the interaction between them. poor girl. but it sucks to be him too :(
update soon please! :) I'm very curious to see where it's going :D
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Author's Response: Ooh, thanks! :D Yeah, I guess the beginning is sort of ... confusing. I'm glad that you felt it for Draco, too – It really does suck to be him. *nods knowingly* So anyway, I'll try update soon. Thanks again! ^_^
While at the Ministry’s Auror training academy, Ginny Weasley and Draco Malfoy learn that being friends might be harder than being foes. Or, “And that’s why you don’t teach your worst enemy lessons.”Category: Long and Completed
I strongly recommend expanding this story if you can. it's very good and I was so surprised to see that it's finished!
anyways, very cute :)
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It’s a well known fact that Luna Lovegood believes in many ridiculous theories, such as the existence of strange creatures that nobody else seems to be able to see. But when one of those creatures comes to life before her very eyes, a new quest is formed, and she sets to work trying to discover what to do along with two very unenthusiastic people: Ginny Weasley and Draco Malfoy.Category: Completed Short Stories
lol! very cute :D
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“You mustn’t tell them, Rose! Harry knows but Lily and the boys… you can’t breathe a word…”Category: Works in Progress
When Rose Weasley went to her favorite aunt for advice on how to handle loving someone her family disapproved of, she never dreamed the older woman would have been able to relate so well. In the comfortable safety of her kitchen, Ginevra Potter told her niece everything and swore her to secrecy. But months later, when Ginevra notices that her daughter, Lily, is spending time with Scorpius Malfoy, Ginny realizes too late that the truth can never really be locked away. Children question their parents and their own identities and everyone must confront the past.
very good!!! :D very very intriguing and I'm am loving the tension :D
update soon please!
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Author's Response: I will, I promise. Thanks so much!