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Dirty Little Secret by Pipperstorms    (Reviews - 40)

Each and every time I heard his knock upon my door, I used him in my own absurd fantasy, pretending, if only for the hours he was there, that I was in a normal relationship.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 2820 | Read count: 9862 | Published: Sep 25, 2008 | Updated: Sep 30, 2008
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Reviewer: slygal Signed
Date: Oct 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Used

Wouldn't it be especially bittersweet if after a few years, while healing a broken heart she seeks out the villa and finds her heart again? Ahhhh sweet dreams I have!

Author's Response: Ah yes, happy ending. Sadly, they don\'t always exist. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: slygal Signed
Date: Oct 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Addiction

Now I definitely think that she should find the cottage, Malfoy heir in tow to discover the spot his Mum and Daddy had planned to escape. Charlie and Severus are her only confidants and they help her thru her trying times of bearing the enemie's child.

Can u tell that I NEED a chapter for resolve?

Author's Response: lol sounds like you have it all planed out in you head ;-) That\'s the point of leaving it like this - lets you work your imaginative side. ;-)

June Fifth by antidote    (Reviews - 33)

Even as I gaped in horror, Ginny emitted a happy giggle, one that I had not heard in years. How had none of us noticed? How much more to their story was there?
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Hermione Granger
Compliant with: Fully compliant
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 2647 | Read count: 4113 | Published: Nov 13, 2008 | Updated: Nov 13, 2008
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Reviewer: slygal Signed
Date: Nov 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: June Fifth

so... it is kind of confusing first to figure out it is from Herm's pov but then if for years it seems that have passed with Gin having little relationship with her family how does the couple end up at Grimmauld Place for her to catch in the act?

Reviewer: slygal Signed
Date: Nov 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: June Fifth

so... it is kind of confusing first to figure out it is from Herm's pov but then if for years it seems that have passed with Gin having little relationship with her family how does the couple end up at Grimmauld Place for her to catch in the act? Also, for people who can speak no french, care to translate?

Author's Response: You're right, it isn't stated directly that it's Hermione talking, but with several references to her, I hoped to clear that up. The overall span of time that the story covers is from Ginny's graduation to the year of her 21 birthday. I, as a reader, enjoy pieces that make me think and fill in blank spaces with my own imagination, and I suppose that writing style eventually transferred to my work as well. The two phrases are "I will be in our bedroom," and "It's getting cold."

Reviewer: slygal Signed
Date: Nov 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: June Fifth

Thanks for clarifying that. I appreciated and really liked the piece. It is nice when it isn't completely spelled out for you. I look forward to more from you in the future!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Red-and-Gold Gloves by VickyVicarious    (Reviews - 26)

"Draco Malfoy is a widely acknowledged git." The discovery of an enigma.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1678 | Read count: 3211 | Published: Nov 20, 2008 | Updated: Nov 20, 2008
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Reviewer: slygal Signed
Date: Nov 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

THis is a fantastic peice of work!  I love how you are so detailed!  I could feel everything as you expressed it.  You have a definite talent. I can't wait to read more from you.

Author's Response: Wow, definite talent! Thank you! And you saying you could feel everything as I expressed it... well, that's what I was really going for, so that's especially great! Thanks!

Ginny Gets Her Man:Part 2 Draco's View by CCC    (Reviews - 14)

How does Draco feel about his impending nuptials?
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1163 | Read count: 2998 | Published: Feb 07, 2009 | Updated: Feb 07, 2009
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Reviewer: slygal Signed
Date: Jul 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Drakey finds the ammenities of marrying a Weasley pretty nice, I find them hilarious!  Hot Damn, I didn't even know part 2 was up til I got a notice for Part 3 which ISN'T up!  I love your writing! Glad to see it so humorous.

Draco's Defection by CCC    (Reviews - 58)

Ginny uses unusual methods to convince Draco to trade sides. (This is alternative Hogwarts era and takes place Draco's last year.)
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 3536 | Read count: 8256 | Published: Feb 13, 2009 | Updated: Mar 12, 2009
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Reviewer: slygal Signed
Date: Feb 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Naked, soapy girl in tub trumped... This is so creative!  Just when you think you've read them all you come up with something original again!  I love your stories.  Please don't stop!

My Evil Angel by starlit skyes    (Reviews - 22)

Ginny drew things that made her happy. Draco Malfoy was arrogant, beautiful – and evil. Ginny knew that. But drawing him still made her happy – because though he was cruel, she recognized, and fell in love with the angel...in his heart.

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My breathing was harsh, each breath ripping up my throat unwillingly.

"I tried my best. You asked me to hate you, and I tried my very best to," I said tremulously, my voice nearly incoherent.

What I had not said seemed to hang in the air, just as if I had said it: That if he asked me to love him, I would.

His eyes suddenly seemed to come alive, like melting pewter. They were burning with the emotion I had been fighting not to recall.

"But you know I never wanted you to," he whispered.

"I know."

Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 5722 | Read count: 5042 | Published: Mar 26, 2009 | Updated: Apr 15, 2009
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Reviewer: slygal Signed
Date: Apr 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

lemony delicious! 

Reviewer: slygal Signed
Date: Apr 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

lemony delicious! 

Author's Response: Hehe, thanks!

Not Quite an Affair by Rosalie    (Reviews - 522)

“You mustn’t tell them, Rose! Harry knows but Lily and the boys… you can’t breathe a word…”

When Rose Weasley went to her favorite aunt for advice on how to handle loving someone her family disapproved of, she never dreamed the older woman would have been able to relate so well. In the comfortable safety of her kitchen, Ginevra Potter told her niece everything and swore her to secrecy. But months later, when Ginevra notices that her daughter, Lily, is spending time with Scorpius Malfoy, Ginny realizes too late that the truth can never really be locked away. Children question their parents and their own identities and everyone must confront the past.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Other Characters
Compliant with: Fully compliant
Era: Next Generation
Genres: Angst, Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 32 | Word count: 108603 | Read count: 142267 | Published: Apr 11, 2009 | Updated: Dec 23, 2011
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Reviewer: slygal Signed
Date: Apr 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Advice and Answers

I really like the originality of having Ginny confess to a future generation. B ut since she is a Pooter there is no happy ending!

:(



Author's Response: Hey don't bail out on the happy ending idea yet... come on!

Reviewer: slygal Signed
Date: Apr 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Confessions

Ok, so he loves her.  But Draco probably does too.  HOw will this play out since Rosie is falling for Scorpius, obviously the two will meet again soon.

Author's Response: Did you think I'd write the whole story without including Draco? Oh ye of little faith... he's coming, eventually :)

Love by Pipperstorms    (Reviews - 20)

Here’s the thing about love; no one ever tells you the truth. They don’t want to ruin whatever childhood fantasies you’re going to concoct up in that ‘pretty little head of yours.’ No, no, see, they’re all much more sadistic then that. They would rather you find out later that all the dreaming you did was for nothing. Then that way, you can be just like them, and suffer.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1098 | Read count: 3442 | Published: Apr 13, 2009 | Updated: Apr 13, 2009
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Reviewer: slygal Signed
Date: Apr 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Trouble

Potter Stinks! (Or sucks in this case)

Author's Response: :-P Indeed.

Should She or Shouldn't She? by CCC    (Reviews - 19)

This is a drabble about a pivotal moment in Ginny's relationship with Draco. Guess which moment it is. Go on, guess.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Future AU
Genres: Humor, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 551 | Read count: 3527 | Published: Apr 19, 2009 | Updated: Apr 19, 2009
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Reviewer: slygal Signed
Date: Apr 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

And so it begins... And it's been a year?  Not like Draco to be a secret!

Let Her Go by Pipperstorms    (Reviews - 24)

This isn’t a fairy tale that ends happily ever after; at least not for me. You see, this is the story of how I, Harry James Potter, learned to let her go.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1538 | Read count: 3194 | Published: Apr 25, 2009 | Updated: Apr 25, 2009
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Reviewer: slygal Signed
Date: May 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: To Give Her More

I love reading your chapters!  You are so thoughtful in how you present the smalest things that mean little to some but are the finer aspects.  I really like how you made Draco a protector for her dreams and didn't paint him too heroic or out of character!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for your wonderful review! I'm glad you enjoy reading my stories :)

Of Draco, Ginny, and the Excessively Extensive List of Salaciously Sexual Euphemisms by Anise    (Reviews - 64)

Either Dumbledore’s assignment of Draco and Ginny as Potions study partners was perfectly innocent, or it’s all part of Voldemort’s cunning plan to spread nastiness, evil, and complete and utter un-niceness over all of Hogwarts by getting his sinister junior Death Eater heir-to-darkness a shagging partner to perk up the apocalypse to come. Ron is convinced it’s the latter, especially once he learns the shocking truth about Ginny’s cherry pie, Draco’s remarkably long, hard stick, and the Undershorts of Evil. This fic is COMPLETE!
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Past AU
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 4 | Word count: 17994 | Read count: 10547 | Published: Jul 08, 2009 | Updated: Jul 11, 2009
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Reviewer: slygal Signed
Date: Jul 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You are too frickin funny!

Reviewer: slygal Signed
Date: Jul 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ohhhhh put poor Ronniekins out of his addled mind!

Oh Baby! by whyevenbother    (Reviews - 97)

You thought taking care of a plastic baby was hard work? At least it wasn't magical. Hilarity ensues as the students of Hogwarts learn a lesson in responsibility through Dumbledore's new parenting project. AU DG with several other minor pairings.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Luna Lovegood, Other Characters, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 4 | Word count: 9570 | Read count: 4936 | Published: Sep 25, 2009 | Updated: Jan 08, 2010
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Reviewer: slygal Signed
Date: Sep 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

::giggling:: I can't wait to see the next installment!  This is definitely different. I love that she fainted after seeing the effect of her and Draco creating a "not-so-plastic baby"! Update soon! 



Author's Response: thanks for the review. I have already uploaded the second chapter, so hopefully it will be up soon.

Reviewer: slygal Signed
Date: Oct 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I am glad Draco is still arrogant, but proving to be a little soft concerning his son.

Author's Response: Draco is...something lol glad you enjoyed it.

A Night Forgotten by MemoriesFade    (Reviews - 49)

Ginny doesn't recognize the room she wakes up in. The same cannot be said for the man she wakes up next to. If only she could remember what happened the night before.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 17021 | Read count: 13587 | Published: Sep 28, 2009 | Updated: Oct 01, 2009
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Reviewer: slygal Signed
Date: Sep 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Lost

::blushing:: Peaches... Your writing is superb as always

Author's Response: Why thank you very much. I appreciate it. Would you like some peaches? ;]

Reviewer: slygal Signed
Date: Oct 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Discovered

I like that they are going on a date. Start fresh and find out who each other is... now.



Author's Response: It is a fresh start for them, plus they have the rest of the weekend. In my mind, they learned a lot about each other in that weekend before they went to face the chaos of the world.

To Tell the Truth (Version 2) by CCC    (Reviews - 15)

When someone spikes the pumpkin juice with veritaserum, secrets are revealed.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Luna Lovegood, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 3450 | Read count: 7615 | Published: Oct 04, 2009 | Updated: Oct 04, 2009
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Reviewer: slygal Signed
Date: Oct 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

As long as a Malfoy always gets what he wants there will be delicious fics like this to please!

Reviewer: slygal Signed
Date: Oct 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I wish she would have taken better advantage of him having to tell the truth. It happens so rarely!  But I admire his admitting he did it for her.

Torture and Treason by dragonsangel68    (Reviews - 24)

Memories are a special kind of torture.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 17792 | Read count: 5070 | Published: Oct 12, 2009 | Updated: Oct 24, 2009
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Reviewer: slygal Signed
Date: Oct 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I adore the fact that your stories depict the true nature of their personalities, yet allow them to see the best in one another. 

Author's Response: Thank you :)

Reviewer: slygal Signed
Date: Oct 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Hoo-fucking-rah!  You are awesome yet again!

Author's Response: Thanks!