Ginny Weasley is absolutely sure that Draco Malfoy is hatching a particularly evil plot as junior head of the Ministry Department of Culture, and that it definitely involves puppy-strangling, bribing officials, and consistently wearing trousers tailored very tight in back. Or at least it's a theory that makes sense when she's been surviving on two hours of sleep a night for far too long, and Draco keeps vetoing her sketches for the new marble statues at the Ministry fountain. But then Luna Lovegood gives her a potion with some very curious effects, and Ginny finds that she just may have to revise her opinions about those evil trousers...Category: Works in Progress
Oh my! Oh my! Oh my! I'm not sure I can even write an adequate review for this wonderful chapter. Draco's shift was....amazing. The inner conflict he has been struggling with for the past several chapters is intriguing. The range of emotions that you have had him display is remarkable.
This was indeed a hot, hot chapter. And I can't wait for Draco to do all the things he promised Ginny he would.
(Okay I'm probably the only person who while I thought this was hot and great and fantastic, am worried about Draco's mental health now that he has seemingly reverted back to the Draco of old and decided to take Ginny up on her offer and do what he's been dreaming about for so long.) I love this story; thanks for the quick updates and I can't wait for more.
Okay it took me a moment to be able to be able to type this review. No not because I didn't love it but because first I had to cool off because this was hotter-than-hot. The imagery was fantastic, hence why I had to cool down. Yes I admit it, I'm okay with a little bit (or a lot) of consensual tie-me-up-tie-me-down. And I loved his 'torture' of her; slowly touching her and making her beg, getting her ready to be able to handle 'a Malfoy trait'. I can't wait for the next chapter.
The second reason I had to wait was because I had to recover from my dizziness from the roller coaster of emotions. Ginny wanting him and seemingly fighting herself because she is wanting him even through the potion. None of the ever touched me....not my body, not my....Heart. AND DRACO!!! His battles with his inner demons; wanting her, wanting her to want him like he's wanted her and to beg him but not because of a potion; "just dream and dream of having me, knowing you could never have me, and you'll start to understand what it was like for me, wanting you" Him not wanting to really hurt her; making sure the ropes weren't really hurting her. Not thinking there is any good inside of him(I almost cried). I'm really hoping this ends up love (mostly for Draco's sake); I don't believe what Draco has felt for Ginny for ALL these years is just lust.
"Do you trust me?" “Yes,” Ginny said. Then she couldn’t quite look at him, because this felt like the most intimate thing they had shared yet. He’d had his hands all over her cunt and had made her scream in orgasm for him, and she’d had his cock in her mouth and sucked on it.....but when she told Draco Malfoy that she trusted him about anything at all, she could not look at him.> "Pretend that I’m as untouched as you, just for tonight, all right?” He reached up to stroke the side of her face. “Will you do that, Ginny? Pretend it’s my first time, too?" I love the depth of emotions you have put in this smutastic story. I love that Draco's jealous of Harry and that Ginny used it to her advantage. I also love how Draco thought out in every detail of how his first encounter with Ginny would be. This was a beyond wonderful combination of sweet and incredibly hot, hot, hot! Oh, and I have to mention I love possessive Draco “and now—now—you’re mine.” "this will shape you to me, Ginny, just to me, to nobody else in the world but me."
"That entire thing actually went into me?" {Laughing out loud uncontrollably} One of my favorite lines in this chapter.
Oh and the thought that after ALL that she had not been 'throughly f$cked'??? and there's more??? (Note to self-Must by more ice for the next chapter.) Can't wait for the next chapter.
Thanks for the crown!!! Can I please have mine with diamonds.
I spent all day trying to think about who was coming back. My first thought was Cedric; since he's a vampire he's not
dead and a lot easier to return than anyone else. Then I thought it might be moldy Voldy. Who I think told Draco all that stuff just so he would think he was evil and not capable of any good. I also think that's why Draco was so against shagging Ginny without her doing it willingly.
Okay if the 'cold ones' are vampires then there's a good chance that Cedric is coming back!right?? This chapter was really...sorta...creepy in a strange hard to explain way. It almost feels as though somehow they really did go back in time and somehow got stuck. What's strange is that the hotness of this chapter was almost overshadowed by the depth of the end. And where's the necklace??? Is that what Ginny was trying to remember or is she wondering if Draco used the potion on purpose?? And what's the significance of the necklace. And if so was the other potion given to her accidentally on purpose???? I am so hoping you are not slowing down on this. I am bursting at the seams with questions!!!
Okay I'm really torn; I feel so terrible for Draco because he seems so tormented and broken. But also I feel bad Ginny who herself is upset 'cause she's worried about Draco. I have to admit Ginny pissed me off when she wasn't listening to Draco. I know she was just trying to figure out what was going on Draco, but still. Thanks for still updating often. It makes my day to read this.
WHAT THE HELL!!!!!!!!!!!!!
How can it end like this. What happened with Draco and what is he so afraid of. My heart hurts for Draco :( I know it seems like he's being cruel, but I believe in him and know he's being so mean in order to keep Ginny safe.(At least that's what the voices are telling me)
My favorite lines of the chapter: “Looks like Miss Prim and Proper’s been knocked off her pedestal and came down with legs spread wide, doesn’t it?”
“I only have three words for you, Zabini. Hot pink balls.”
P.S. Potter's gay isn't he? and Creevy outed him 'cause he wanted to sample the goods and couldn't.
OH MY ACHING HEAD!!! So many questions. What is suspending Harry in the air? And who is Draco pleading with? See I knew he was just trying to keep her safe-not sure why. (Who or what is he protecting Ginny from?) And Ginny knew too-"You wanted to convince me that you really were jealous of Harry," she said slowly. "Didn’t you? No, you don’t have to say anything, Draco, and don’t bother to deny it—I know it’s true." He was in pain causing her pain. They have some type of soul mate connection going on that I love. And their dreams seem to connect them.
Felt sorry for Harry in this; which rarely happens. George or Ron...hmmm... who is the mystery man. It can't be Cedric can it?
I can't wait for the next chapter. I love this-the suspense, the romance, the fantasy of it all.
This was so good and there was so much in it I don't know where to start: Hmmm....let's start with Colin Creevy-kill him. And if he is part cat and has nine lives kill him eight more times.
Next, on to Ron-please can I slap the taste out of his mouth. I have three words for him-Narcissistic Personality Disorder. Wah Wah you lied to me, nobody told me, I want to protect Ginny. It's all about him.(Maybe he'll go to America and marry the Octomom and have a nice Narcissistic Life.
The next one to slap is that damn Hermione who really got on my nerve with her I-know-everything-holier-than-thou-attitude. She makes me sick. She always has to be right and twisted everything Ginny said around.
Oh and slap Harry too. Was there some reason he couldn't hear the other stuff Draco said to Ginny? 'Clueless, party of one!'
Yea!!! Cedric is here to help Ginny. Of course this chapter left me with some questions like: what is Cedric's debt to Draco and how does he know about what they are to each other?
The wow factors of the story-it wasn't the potion, Draco knew it and still tried to resist Ginny, Luna and Draco met every Friday to talk about Ginny.
Congratulations on getting your MSW!!! Here's a toast to you!!
So much intrigue and mystery in this chapter; the questions just keep on coming. I like your portrayal of Cedric. I think he's going go be great in this story.
So Cedric can read minds of a witch or wizard if the thoughts are 'extremely strong', is that how he knows how Ginny and Draco feel about each other?
My favorite line of this chapter- "Can't you turn into a bat or something?"
A somewhat confusing, yet interesting chapter. Who took Ginny up on her offer? Is she under an attraction spell? and if so who did it? If it's Hermione, Harry or Ron; please slap them and tell them to get a life. Okay, I'm the only person that hasn't read Twilight and the job recently has me too busy to even see the movie (which helps explain the late review), but why is Cedric/Edward seemingly so torn? Do I need to see Twilight to understand? Keep up the good work. Time to read the next chapter.
Ginny makes me want to turn into the cake Nazi-like from Seinfeld "No common sense cake for you!!" She doesn't trust Cedric but is listening to Nick, who is also a vampire. She thinks Draco will be happy to see her, I guess she has forgotten that he wanted to keep her safe.
Did she really hate Draco before she shagged him, or is she in denial.
I so love the part about the magic 8 ball and Walmart.
I loved that this chapter was ALL Draco/Ginny interaction. Some interesting things in this chapter. Draco remaining so cold about his feelings, or rather lack of feelings, for Ginny. Her Gryff spirit making her want to stay and fight for him.
Now that he has the 'Cuffs of Truth' on the next chapter should be interesting, especially since Ginny has to tell the truth also.
I feel quite torn about this chapter. I feel bad for Ginny because she's hurting so much because Draco won't tell her how he really feel. But at the same time, I think he's doing it to keep Ginny safe.
Two points I picked up on-1)She glared at him. “What’s the one question you’re not going to answer now, Draco?” He sighed quietly. “Whether I care about you or not.” >If he really didn't care for her, wouldn't he not have to use his
being an Occlumens to tell her his 'true' feelings. 2)Also at the end she said-“I take it back, Draco,” “I do hate you.” Pain flashed across Draco’s face, but it was gone so quickly that she wasn’t even sure she’d seen it at all. “Good,” he said. “You’re better off that way.” >Again if he didn't care why would it hurt him if she hated him???
Oh and please no comeuppance for Draco!
An interesting chapter. I'm glad we're getting some background information on what happened with that summer, the deal Draco made and how Cedric figures out in all this.
Nick is.....kind of creepy in a amusing and enchanting way. I look forward to learning more answers to my many, many questions. Update soon
An intense chapter; Draco being tortured and lying to protect Ginny. Ginny somehow
winding up in the past but at her present
day age and Draco, Voldie and the vampires seeing her. And Nick being his charming self- he's great by the way!
Ginny has no faith that Ron can with a campaign against Harry. However, Draco seems to.Category: Long and Completed
Great chapter. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this. Just wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying this. The dinner date should prove interesting.
“Don’t you have plans?” “They can wait.” Short pieces examining moments in Draco and Ginny’s unorthodox relationship.Category: Works in Progress
Cruel, that's what this is. I can't believe you aren't going to continue this story!! It is so good with the potential for a lot more. I want to know where this goes. And why is he wet? [I see Cho dumping water or wine on him when he calls out the wrong name.] :)
Ginny is shocked to discover just how different Muggles are when it comes to sex.Category: Works in Progress
Okay I think I'm going to really enjoy this story. The plot idea is very interesting and original; I don't think I've read anywhere else where witches and wizards use spells instead of actual sex. I can't wait to see how you develop this.
Author's Response: I agree with you. I really couldn't figure out why no one had thought of this plot idea before... I mean, if there is such a hoopla about pure-blood vs Muggleborn etc, then there must be a huge difference between the magical way of life and the Muggle way of life. I aim to showcase both the magical way of sex and, of course, Ginny, a pure-blooded witch, trying out the Muggle way. Anyway, thank you for commenting!
“What do you want, Weasley?”Category: Completed Short Stories
“You were listening to Muggle music?” she asked, wrapping her hands around the warm cup.
“Michael Jackson, if you must know,” Malfoy answered, rolling his eyes in exasperation, although his cheeks had an unexpected pink tinge. “Now, can you leave so that I can eat my pancakes in peace?”
A little tribute to the late King of Pop.
I smiled at the end of this. A wonderful
tribute to a truly gifted and talented man. Thanks for the cute story and the tribute.
Draco tries to take advantage of a situation he finds himself in, but he’s not really in any fit state to follow through.Category: Completed Short Stories
A pleasant surprise; I certainly didn't expect poor Draco to have his 'thingy' attacked. This was so funny and cute. Thanks for bringing a smile to my face.
Author's Response: Thanks!
The war rages on. Twenty year old Draco Malfoy is stuck at Grimmauld Place with nothing to do until Harry asks him to distract Ginny. Perhaps Harry should have been more specific about what he wanted Draco to do.Category: Works in Progress
I'm glad you found this one on your computer. I love how Draco is baiting Ron and especially Harry. I wish Harry had stayed on the step too. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Nineteen year old Ginny is stuck at Grimmauld Place with Draco. Boredom leads to interesting things.Category: Completed Short Stories
So wonderful! Sweet, fluffy and just a touch of smut. Whether it's a one-shot or a chaptered fic, I look forward to seeing what the plot bunnies have inspired you to write.
Author's Response: Thank you. My plot bunnies have become completely random. I keep trying to herd them in the right direction, but they won't listen.
Ginny is one of the few surviving Weasleys after the War. With little money to her name, she has been working a low end job at a nearby restaurant to pay for her Healer training. It's been a long four years, but she has finally made it and earned her license. Problem is: there's only one position available, and the very idea of it is appalling. Slightly AU.Category: Long and Completed
They're flirting, I'm so happy. I'm interested in seeing what the pensieve will show. (Thanks for the quick update)
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Great chapter. Yea, finally Draco admitted he is in love with Ginny. I wonder how long it will be before she realizes she loves him. I so love Blaise. Very Slytherin of him the way he tricked Draco into admitting that he loves Ginny. Now what will he do about it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Next chapter is on the way!