After Draco meets up with a feisty Ginny at one of Hermione's parties, he finds that he has a newfound desire for redheads. Now if only she’d cooperate…Category: Works in Progress
This made me laugh. That demand was so Draco: "I need you to set me up with the Girl Weasel." Classic, really. Well, I'll keep watching for more. Good luck.
Draco gets a letter from a 'secret admirer' and is rather... distraught.Category: Completed Short Stories
You should probably put a couple spaces between your author's note and the actual text of the story.
Also, I don't see Ginny sending something like that. Call me whatever you like, but smart girls don't send guys stupid, over-the-top love notes written on pink paper. Not if they're really interested. Be careful with your characters. It's easy to get caught up in the story and forget it's about two characters that we already should know quite well. Ginny isn't shy. And Draco isn't nice. Keep that in mind as you continue. Good luck.
Author's Response: Thanks for the heads up with the formatting, I didn\'t mean to make it like that. It\'s fixed now.
I agree and disagree with your comments. I totally understand about the characters havign a start in Canon, but I also think it\'s the author\'s choice to expand on that character however they like. I didn\'t write Ginny or Draco as they would usually be seen. I totally get that and eighty percent of it was intentional. Draco appears much nicer for the majority of the fic mostly because I have him talking to his friends and fellow Slytherins. I personally think that he is a very different person under that kind of situation. Now Ginny, is a different all together. You\'re probably right because she doesn\'t spend much time in this fic I didn\'t think of her very thouroughly, but then again I wrote the entire fic knowing she had written the letter. What I did try to do with her though was make her seem michevous and a bit of a prankster. She didn\'t mean anything in the letter, she was just looking for something outrageous to catch his attention. So that\'s my piece and I\'m sorry for rambling. I mostly just wanted to get that down for myself. I did have reason behind the mess. So thanks for your comments it helped me with the formatting and made me think about the characterization again. Oh and by the way, I know a lot of smart girls who have done stupid things for guys. Two of them are my best friends.
Narcissa Malfoy wants Draco married off-- and quickly! So, she chooses to send him to a date coach of sorts. What Narcissa wants, Narcissa gets! *Fun, fluff!*Category: Long and Completed
The idea is fun and original, but I do have a little bit of a problem with Ginny being a 'date docter'. It doesn't seem like the kind of job she'd take. But, Ginny can be portrayed many different ways becuase we don't really see all that much of her. It would be nice though if you would, somewhere in the story, give an explanation of how she ended up in this particular job. Keep writing.
Author's Response: I am glad you mentioned that. I actually had the same thought the other day. Perhaps someone will ask her, and we\'ll have our answer then. *grins*
So. This is moving along, nice and quick. But, It seems normal up to here, so it shouldn't be too much of a problem. Great fic, by the way. Keep writing.
Author's Response: Thanks! I am trying to keep it normal and fluffy ;)
So...is Narssica trying to set them up or just merly trying to let her see that she doesn't give up so eaisily?
Hehehe. You have me laughing as usual. And I enjoyed seeing Ginny in her less perfesional form. She seems to almost convert back to a school girl. Shy and almost coy, I guess. Very cute.
A rather cliche'story of truth or dare. Rated NC-17 for smut.Category: Completed Short Stories
That was fun, for sure. But, your "not for the kiddies" statement may have meant a little bit more if your user page didn't state that you, in fact, were still a minor. Sorry, but I thought I'd point that out. If you want to act like you're older, you're going to have to not give proof otherwise.
Author's Response: I\'m actually 17, but I forgot to update my bio. Sorry for the confusion, and I\'m glad you liked the story.
Fearing the loss of her father’s ability to walk, Ginny Weasley must find a job in order to pay for a surgery that can only be done by Muggle doctors. She’s quit her dancing lessons, cut down on her spending money, and stopped attending a small university just outside of her town. Helped by a friend, she was finally given a job, but with a catch. She must move her life over to Tuscany, Italy, and start anew as a famous designer’s assistant. Spoiled, bratty children, an insecure girl, two arrogant heiresses, one demanding boss, and an unexpected love interest all find their way into Ginny’s life. Will she take the plunge and endure all of this to help her father?Category: Works in Progress
I'd suggest spacing this out a little bit more. It's a litty dizzy all so close together.
And I'm a little confused because we keep meeting so many new people and being as bad as I am at names, I can't keep them as straight as I might like. If they're all important, then don't let me deter you from making your story complex, but if they don't serve any point past what we see upon first meeting them, you might want to trim down. Well, in any case, be careful to write down who's part of this and where and whatnot else might be important.
Keep it up though. I like this story. Really, I do, no matter how critical I might sound.
Author's Response: I sent the story the exact format I wanted it, I don\'t know how it got all mucked up. Anyways, I know there are plenty of characters, but it\'s anew situation, isn\'t it? I love my charactes, new & current, and you will, too. And don\'t worry, you\'re not critical. I appreciate the review.
Draco Malfoy smelled like citrus lemons.Category: Completed Short Stories
You know, I don't think I could do that: make a recipe relate to a story. Amazing job of that. Very original.
Six single people are coerced into filling out a form that searches for one's perfect mate. What if the outcome isn't to their liking... at first? This is my take on LOTM's YLC Challenge over at WIKTT.Category: Long and Completed
*Couples include Draco/Ginny, Severus/Hermione, Greg/Luna*
**Runner up for round six of the Endurance catagory on the Multifaceted FanFiction Awards** http://multifaceted.creative-musings.com/winners06.htm
Quick Hermione, aren't you. Lovely story. It's getting along very nicely. Keep it up.
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks Kisou! She\'s just... Cautious! More up soon!
Post HBP warfic. Can two people find comfort in one of the darkest times and places?Category: Completed Short Stories
That story was lovely. It has a beautiful feel to it, and the idea that pain can bring out real natures, real people like nothing else can. I think it's true. Thanks for that.
This is the story that was never told. Buried for centuries beneath the sands of time, the lives of the bravest knight of England and the fiery daughter of an Irish lord were erased from the pages of history. Finally their tale, the shared immortal promise of a love so enduring that it could break the boundaries of time, can finally be told. This is their story.Category: Works in Progress
Wow. This is certainly different. I'll keep a watch on it. And, by the way, I really like your characterization fo Draco. He's actually cold, actually evil (at least, so much as we can see) and I find thta refreshing, even if I don't really believe that's how he is.
Author's Response: i love my draco cold, cold, very cold...and hot. ;)
Draco and Pansy like to play games. What happens when a Polyjuice Plan goes wrong?Category: Works in Progress
Well, this is going to be interesting having one of them in school, one out. Can't wait to see how that works out.
Author's Response: They will all be out of school in the next chapter. I wanted to use the school to set up the background, and then I wanted to move on to them being grown ups. Thanks for the review.
That transition was amazingly smooth. And I want Ginny's shoes. I have a thing with bondage like shoes.
Author's Response: Shoes are one of the joys of life. They never get bigger and betray you like other body parts do.
Ha. I just wrote a review and sent it in, then realized it made not sense whatsoever. When I said the transistion was smooth I meant that your time jump worked really well. Sorry for being so scatterbrained. Good job on the story. Keep it up.
Author's Response: Thank you again. I understand the scatterbrained thing. It happens to me quite a bit. I believe that my brain has developed leaks. Do they sell plugs for that?
"That way, when their mothers asked them why they weren’t married yet..."
I did a double take on that. For a moment, I though we were featuring a Drac/Blaise scandal. Oh, my strange tzisted mind that a gay pairing becomes more likely than a straight one, even on this site.
Fun. Though, I don't think Ginny and Pansy would get along that well that quickly. But, of course, I this story seems to be one that doens't want to pull in the war too much, which is fine.
Author's Response: This is more of a romance/humorous fic. I find the war gets in the way of a good snog. Thanks for the review.
That is about as interesting a way as I can think of for one to apologize. Put away books. XD Keep it up.
Author's Response: Thank you . I\'m glad you liked it.
Nice. He needed that. Go Narcissa. Now I just can't wait for him to go to Ginny's house to see her framing the pictures and hanging them around the house, humming and dancing to the radio. What an ass he is.
Yeah for Draco. That was fun. Keep it up.
*Winner of Rainpuddle's Great Draco & Ginny Fic Contest 2006* Covert operative needed- Passport, intrigue and romance required; no experience necessary. Please enquire within.Category: Works in Progress
This certainly has a interesting feel to it. I don't believe I've ever read a Potter fic with a voice like this. Very original.
Author's Response: Thank you! Saying that this has an original voice is better than chocolate. *sighs happily*
Good job. I don't have much to say actually. Rainpuddle seems to have done her job, and you'Ve obviously done yours. Keep it up you two.
An invisible tattoo and a forbidden taboo will forever change the lives of two teenagers and the Wizarding World alike.Category: Works in Progress
The world was not written in black and white, but in shades of gray.
[Read&Review] (por favor!)
You know, I wanted to write this story. D/G and starting like that: "Run". But, I am such a perfectionist that it never saw the light of day and I don't know what happened to it. Well, thank you, anyway, for writing it. I makes me not mind so much that I didn't. And you're doing a much better job than I was, I think.
This is setting itself up very well. And your characters are all in tact. Good job. Keep it up.
Molly Weasley and Narcissa Malfoy find that meddling in their children’s lives can lead to unexpected consequences.Category: Long and Completed
Erm...can we say cheesy? I don't mean to be rude or anything, but I'm not sure that there's any other way to describe it. But I do like your idea, it just needs a little moe work on that scene. The Draco I know would't easily admit his feelings in front of Ginn, let alone Ron. And I don't know that Ginny would do so either. Just something to think about. Keep working on it, there is some really good stuff here too.
Author's Response: Well, I\'m sorry you didn\'t think the last scene was realistic, but it is amazing what people will do if they think they might lose someone they love. They might even say so in front of other people. Anyway, thanks for the review.
Sequel to Break in the sun (till the sun breaks down). For a few blissful hours, the differences between them did not matter. But as Draco and Ginny struggle with their budding relationship, they must soon discover that many things separate them still - family, friends and society as well as their own explosive tempers. The future they want for themselves comes at a price, and reconciling what they each want out of life is a challenge that might just break them apart...Category: Works in Progress
Hehehehe. That makes me feel really evil. Makes me want to, I dunno, stalk people.
But Draco, and his little gang obivously have a little bit of a problem. It seems to me, that they are, just like everyone else, completely blind to the wrongdoings of their families. The problem is that their families are not just annoying or stupid or whatever. They're killers. It's strange looking at it from their side. It makes you wonder which side you're supposed to be rooting for. I keep wondering that in this fic. Wonderful job. Keep it coming.
Author's Response: Thank you, I\'m thrilled about your comment. This is exactly what I wanted the reader to feel like - unsure what\'s right and wrong, and which side has the better arguments *g* I think most people are blind to the faults of the people they love, and Draco is no exception...or rather, he doesn\'t much care. Family loyalty is his highest priority, and of course that\'s rather problematic, with a man like Lucius. Ginny will definitely let him know what she thinks about his attitude, in the next chapter :)