I've only read 3 chapters (stupid history article), but I already REALLY like this story. It's quite funny actually, because it has some elements that I usually detest in D/G fics, i.e, Draco being out of character, or the friendship and romantic relationship moving to fast, etc. But in this story, it just WORKS. I keep thinking, why do I like this story so much? Then I realize that despite some elements that I usually dislike, the elements that are found in this story that I love greatly outweigh the negatives. For example, your amazing ability to story tell, your vivid character description, and overall consistent flow of writing. Congrats, and I can't wait to read some more once I'm done this stupid article... :)

Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! That's a great compliment. It's funny that I didn't really realize how OOC Draco was being until half-way into this story but its so true. What can I say? He just became that way, lol. Good luck with your article!

This was great. So twisted and dark..I can't choose a side, but really, that just adds to this story. I can't get over how fantastic this was. Really well-written. But for curiosity purposes, what happened to Ginny? Did she as well die in the process?

Hi there!

I'm currently on chapter 7, and plan on reading the rest later, but I really like the direction in which this story is progressing in.

Firstly, I really enjoy the intertwining of narration and the character's inner thoughts in the non-dialogue parts of your chapters. It isn't a first person story persay, but it still manages to give the readers a little insight on the thoughts of the characters.

Moreover, your writing is very fluid and not choppy at all. Occasionally, there are some dialogue lines that seem unrealistic (meaning, I can't imagine anyone actually saying them), but they really WORK with the style of your story. I had an example, but now I lost it lol :P Just know that it works and I love it ;) :)

Once I read the rest of the chapters, I'll make sure to review again. And reading your story motivates me to finish my next chapter, so thanks for that as well :D

Imaiya

P.S Sorry I didn't reply to your question about my username in my response to the review you left (which again, was extremely sweet

I really thought this was fantastic. It made my heart all warm even though it wasnt heavily based off of romance. *favourites*

Author's Response: Thank you. I liked him being vulnerable and then seeing the bright side again.

Wow, that is one twisted story (in an excellent way, of course). I feel terrible for Harry, and I actually want him and Ginny to be together. But of course, the story just wouldn't be what it is without Draco and Ginny ending up together like you have written. Other than that, extremely well written, fluid, and descriptive. Congrats. :)

Author's Response: Thank you. Harry is supposed to be sympathetic in this fic. Draco wins in the end. We hope for the best for Ginny.

“It’s a feud, Hermione, you wouldn’t understand. Your parents are dentists,” Ron said in a moody, world-weary tone.

HAHA love it! This is brilliant. Really well written, and very humorous! I look forward to reading more of your stuff :)!

Imperfect, devastating smile.

That was a great line, it really stuck with me. You've done a great job here! Sometimes it was confusing...but in a good way, because I don't think this piece is meant to be crystal clear...alot of it is left to be interpreted by the reader. I really do hope you write more :) Great job!

This is great! I really enjoyed reading it :) Great job, I look forward to reading more of your work!

hmm, I felt it was a bit strange how Ginny started off dreading her mission and then two weeks later, was sympathizing with him. Nonetheless, you're a great writer and this was a really enjoyable read :) Nice job.

Author's Response: There's nothing like forced closeness to make you rethink the prejudices you've had about someone. At least in this case, because Draco wasn't anything like what Ginny thought he would be. :)