COMPLETE! Strolling through Diagon Alley Lucius Malfoy comes across a little boy who could have been Draco's twin. Has his family tree been expanded, without his knowledge? Has Draco been keeping secrets? Or is he oblivious to the fact that he may have an heir?Category: Long and Completed
Love the story, but one thing that I had to point out-
“Monsieur Malfoy, êtes-vous prêt à commander?”
“Mr. Malfoy, you are ready to command?”
There were a few other errors I picked up on as well, but that was the funniest. Keep writing! (Not this story. This story is finished, but ya'know... just in general.)
Author's Response: Thank you! Believe it or not, those translations were actually done by an actual French person (as in native speaking), so I don\'t know what went wrong. I\'m still writing! The sequel is coming along slowly, but surely :)