Draco overhears Ginny giving a friend advice, that dating is just a game. He decides to try to play with Ginny.Category: Works in Progress
Amazing so far. I always find a confounded malfoy rather hilarious. It always good to give him a bit of a surprise now and again, he's generally so damn sure of himself.
Ginny gives up everything for one night of passion. Is it worth it?Category: Works in Progress
An interesting start. I'll definitely be waiting for the next chapter to see what happens :)
hmmm. interesting. It's entertaining how he managed to stumble across them completely by accident. And now he's too much of an idiot to run when that;s his first instinct. Though it really wouldn't be much of a story if he did that. I'm sure he'll change his attitude... good work!
Draco is very disturbed after hearing the rumors started about him and is seeking to confornt Ginny Weasley who started it. What happens next? Would they get together?Category: Works in Progress
A promising start. But you might want to vary your sentence structure. nearly every sentence in the first paragraph started with He, and it was quite distracting. But other than that, it was a good chapter :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I am indeed trying to rewrite the first chapter to reduce the length of the paragraph and some other modification. I will keep this in mind as well. Thanks again.
Ginny and Draco were more connected than they realized. Despite the things that work against them their lives are forever intertwined. This is the story of those lines, loves and losses. Part one beginning in their childhood with a forgotten promise.Category: Completed Short Stories
cute :) Though I didn't understand who fiona was. I got that he called Ginny "Mia" and that he was "Lucas" but I didn't get the fiona part. Other than that though, it was a good story and I thought it was pretty original. I'll be waiting for the next chapter! If you need any help with it I'd be happy to help out if I can.
Author's Response: I\'m sorry for the confusing Fiona name. The name should have been caught in the new upload of the story. Hopefully it is. Thank you for the review and the offer of help. I\'ll take you up on that :]
Yeah, if you'd like me to help just email me (ebrother@tulane.edu) or find me on AIM (bluspottedlizard) though the latter is probably the better bet, I haven't been checking my email as often as usual lately.
When Harry leaves Ginny for Hermione, Draco decides it's time to fulfill an old fantasy. Twenty five is a little old to experience her first one night stand, but Ginny thinks she can handle it.Category: Works in Progress
Really enjoyable, even if Draco was a bit of an arse at the end.
Author's Response: He isn\'t going to be warm and fuzzy in this fic.
It's okay, I'm still entertained when he's not warm and fuzzy. It's nice to see that fanfic isn't all the same once in a while and that he doesn't need to be warm and fuzzy to be in a good story :)
Author's Response: He isn\'t the nicest guy in this fic. He will evolve before the end.
Ooooo. I do so love Blaise. He seems to play the role of comic relief a lot, but he does it so well. He's a really good foil to your Draco. The best part was definitely when he smacked Draco for Ginny... priceless!!
Awwww. Ron's so cute. It didn't surprise me that he tried to vaguely salvage the books after he got over that spurt of anger. Seems like a very Ron thing to do... get really mad, do something and then regret it shortly thereafter. Good chapter, I loved the bits with Ron and Pansy. The admittedly few bits about Draco and Ginny (sadly separate for now) were good as well. I found it entertaining that it took Draco thinking about Ginny to put him to sleep.
Haha, yeah she should have left him bleeding in the hallway. He completely deserved it. It's entertaining to see him having all these not-so-suave-and-put-together moments. Go Ginny!!
Pig headed dolt indeed. Emma got it right. I'm really beginning to love her. The things she does to Draco are hilarious!
Were you demanding a clear ending to 'Interlude'? Then this is what you wanted.Category: Completed Short Stories
Amazing. And to think I was considering a nap. Definitely worth postponing my nap to read. Write another story? Anything would be lovely.
This is an alternative version of the Deathly Hallows, where Draco has joined the Order of the Phoenix. Being alone with Ginny while everyone else is out on their missions leads him to discover secrets held close.Category: Works in Progress
I have to say that my favorite part was when you said felon-tastic father. It definitely hooked me into the chapter out of pure hilarity. The rest of the chapter was good as well. Though if they were paralyzed, wouldn't they not be able to talk? Hmmm, I guess it could have been neck down or w/e. Were you just making a variation on Petrificus Totalus?
Interesting. It's good that you explained her wandless magic early on, I was wondering about it at the end of last chapter. Good chapter!! I'll definitely be waiting to read the next one!
"Did you just wake up this morning and make it your current mission in life to annoy the hell out of me?" Ginny asked tiredly.Category: Completed Short Stories
"Yes, actually," he said. "Damn. I've been found out."
hahaha. Pretty entertaining. A good, short thing to read before getting down to business and doing lots of homework.
Draco Malfoy watched Ginny Weasley for years. Now, ten years after leaving Hogwarts, he has his chance in the world of big business.Category: Works in Progress
Utterly, bastardly ruthless. And so well kept in character... good job!
A simple game in the Gryffindor tower turns into a complex heist, but in the end, whose heart will be stolen? DG with just a smidgen of BZLL on the side. Written hurriedly for Pud’s Great Draco & Ginny Fic Contest 2007. Crossposted at Fanfiction.net.Category: Long and Completed
:D I think I read this elsewhere before, but it was worth reading twice!
Post-DH. A look at Draco and Ginny's life post-Hogwarts. (With some references to the epilogue).Category: Completed Short Stories
Lovely. I liked how the story was fed along those articles. I think it worked really well.
“I know you,” she said softly. “I know that marriage is the last thing on your mind. I don’t want you thinking I’m dying for a sparkling diamond on my finger and happily ever after and all that.”Category: Completed Short Stories
“Don’t you?” he asked simply.
hahaha. I can see the expressions on the faces of the Weasley family if she ever mentioned how he proposed. Most of them probably wouldn't even believe it, which would be better for him. Cute little short story, with a funny little ending.
I look forward to seeing anything else you might write. Go write more new stories!!
Ginny Weasley wants to know why Draco became a Death Eater, and she won't take no for an answer.Category: Completed Short Stories
*inspired the fic: Who I Am.*
cute. It was definitely different. Good job though, I was entertained the entire time :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
In this spoof of Cinderella, Ginny is sent on Auror business to Draco's party in which he has to find a wife. He becomes entranced with the disguised Ginny, who finds she doesn't hate him as much as she thought she would… or at all?Category: Works in Progress
haha... "no chance of that." Riiiight. And of course, that's exactly what happens... eventually.
Author's Response: LOL. Well, you know Draco! ^_~
Hogwarts is closed, and the trio and Ginny are staying at Order Headquarters. Draco came one night, and has since became trusted—mainly because of Harry's word. With the trio always gone, Draco and Ginny remain. They become friends, even as Draco tries to fit in and Ginny worries about her weakening feelings for Harry.Category: Works in Progress
Unbeknownst to either of them, The Dark Lord sends Bellatrix and Snape on a mission to find and kill him.
Begins November of what would be Draco's seventh year at Hogwarts.
Good start :)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Hmmm. That's an interesting way to look at Snape I suppose. I'm generally a huge Snape fan, so I can't say I agree with the way you're portraying him, but I won't object either. It's an interesting take on things. I can't wait until they get that letter though. That will make for an entertaining (for me) meeting.
Author's Response: Well, this was written pre-DH, and it\'s better for the story for him to be evil. Thanks for the review, and I hope evil!Snape doesn\'t put you off too much!
nah, evil Snape won't put me off. It
ll definitely be a change from what I normally read. But change isn't always bad. In fact, when it comes to reading fanfic... a little change is good. Keeps me thinking about things instead of keeping me in my little rut where I only read good!Snape fics and such. I'm definitely going to keep reading... I quite like where the story is going so far. Good luck with the writing :)
Author's Response: Well, that\'s good! I know what you mean about reading strange things, because I personally got so bored reading my normal ships that I went a read all the rarepairs… even the creepy ones. >.<