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Real name: Page McGivern
Registered: Jul 23, 2008
Membership status: Member

Reviews by PMCGIVERN

He Did Not Have To by eveil woman    (Reviews - 27)

One year after the final battle Harry takes off, leaving Ginny expecting his child! Fourteen years later, he returns to find Ginny has moved on quite easily, and Draco is the man his daughter lovingly calls Daddy!
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: D/G Offspring, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Lucius Malfoy, Molly Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 2 | Word count: 5242 | Read count: 2259 | Published: Jul 30, 2009 | Updated: Oct 22, 2009
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Reviewer: PMCGIVERN Signed
Date: Oct 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: How It All Began

Very nice. I think the line about side along apparition needs to be reworked - There were only the 2 of them in the elevator, why wouldn't it work? Maybe by saying no apprarition in the ministry building

Author's Response: I'm pretty sure that that was stated in the books somewhere. I think TOOTP, so I assumed everyone knew that! I know never ever assume, but I might go back and fix it.

Perchance to Dream by Eustacia Vye    (Reviews - 38)

Being selfish has its merits sometimes. Marcus Flint is selfish enough to bend every Death Eater rule to keep Katie Bell safe.

(Companion piece/sequel to Somnambulist)
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Other Characters
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Future AU, Hogwarts-era
Genres: Action, Romance, Smut
Warnings: Blood
Completed: Yes
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 6 | Word count: 22300 | Read count: 6878 | Published: Sep 15, 2009 | Updated: Oct 08, 2009
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Reviewer: PMCGIVERN Signed
Date: Sep 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Making Plans

Such a good story.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking it! I had a lot of fun writing it, and it was nice to finally give a sense of closure to "Somnambulist," since some readers wanted more in that 'verse. :)