I am convinced, now, that every single fairy tale I was read as a child was completely worthless; Fate never intended for me to have a happy ending.Category: Completed Short Stories
*sequel to Scream*
I don't see why this story has so few reviews.
This one made me cry, which is tough for a fanfic to do. Pregnant? Really? *sigh*
Does he continue to watch her until she dies? I can't decide if I think it's a punishment for him, or a gift...to see her going through life, but never be able to help her again...punishment, I think.
Author's Response: It's kinda like a back handed compliment isn't it? Thank you for the review!
"It's not better to have loved and lost, Weasley. No matter what they tell you."Category: Completed Short Stories
Wonderful story.
The only not-great thing:
The sudden shift from serious to playful at the end of the story was kind of disconcerting. One minute Ginny's comforting over the betrayal of his two best friends, and the next she's flirting with him; it threw me a little bit.
Other than that it was great. You captured the characters very well, and told the story very succinctly, which a lot of authors seem unable to do.
All his life he has acted as if he had all the choices in the world, as if time itself asked him before it dared to move. But the truth is he has rarely ever made a single decision. His life has been preplanned since the moment of his conception. From the very day Draco was born, his freedom was striped from him, and his life laid out like a road map before his eager silver, eyes: something to be studied, learned, and excepted as truth.Category: Completed Short Stories
I really want the reality to be him happy with Ginny, but I honestly think that the reality is him being tortured...it would make sense that his mind goes to happiness with Ginny in a time like that....
I don't know though. Your stories always make me think...
Author's Response: Thank you, I like it when people are left thinking. It is up to you to choose what is truth here. But yes, when people are in physical pain, they often go back to a happier time in their lives.
In her sixth year a mysterious condition renders Ginny Weasley unable to touch the opposite sex. What happens when Draco decides to challenge her illness? Sparks of denial and attraction will definitely fly.Category: Long and Completed
wow, I can't believe there's only one other review on this story. I loved it. It was tied up nicely at the end and didn't leaving wanting (too much ;-D) more. Wonderful!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Draco Malfoy is tired. Tired of having his life dictated for him. Tired of the pressure he feels to take on the Death Eater lifestyle his father wants for him. No one notices that Draco is unhappy, though. No one, that is, except for the one person he doesn't want around.Category: Long and Completed
So I know this is a D/G fic, but I just have to comment on one of the lesser characters--I love the way you characterized Luna. Too often she is used purely for comic relief, and it's nice that you've given her a perceptive personality under all the Looniness.
Author's Response: Thank you!!!! I always thought Luna would be really hard, but once I started writing her, she fit in so well with my personality that it was actually really easy! I'm glad to hear that people like her... means I'm doing my job! Lol!
As each of us die we leave behind glimpses of our lives that linger in places we have been. Those memories, those pieces of our lives, are the most powerful form of magic. We ourselves are not important. It's what's inside of us. What lives on when we are gone.Category: Completed Short Stories
*is dumbfounded*
Whoa...this was really powerful. It was an original concept, and very well constructed. Way to go. :-)
A poem inspired by Ginny's love for Draco, about her feelings for him remaining strong after his passing-away.Category: Poetry
Wow. I don't usually like poem fics, but that was really powerful. The last stanza especially stood out to me as very indicative of their relationship. Way to write a good poem--it's gough to do. You've made a believer out of me, though :-D
Author's Response: Thanks so much! ^-^ You're my first reviewer, and I'm really glad it's a positive response! Keep a lookout for more! :D
A short poem about the outside world affecting Draco and Ginny's relationship.Category: Poetry
Once again the last stanza was amazing :-D
I really like the concept of this poem--most fics allow them to be together, and they stand strong, and fight adversity etc etc, but realistically (as realistic as fanfic can be), it would be tough, and could they be strong enough...? Hmmm. *rubs imaginary beard thoughtfully*
Another great poem! Keep up the good work :-D
Author's Response: Awesome! :D I appreciate the insight, and you are right, realistically, this could happen.
Thanks so much!
In the midst of war Ginny and Draco stumble upon a love story so beautiful and terrible that it can only be true. How can they learn from it in order to keep history from repeating? Or are they simply doomed to run around in circles forever?Category: Works in Progress
Whoa...consider my mind blown :-D This is a fantastic beginning--one of the best I've read.
I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!
Whoa...consider my mind blown :-D This is a fantastic beginning--one of the best I've read.
I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!
Author's Response: Wowww thank you so much! I really appreciate that!
I hope I can continue to please in the coming chapters. Exposition is always so slow, but I have so much planned! :)