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Real name: Jenna
Registered: Sep 03, 2008
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The Artist by CindaEdna    (Reviews - 101)

When a serial killer who leaves behind no evidence plagues Muggle London, Scotland Yard is at a loss. It's a good thing they have a wizard in their employ. Join the investigation and the race to find the butcher before he strikes again.

A Harry Potter psychological thriller. AU after OotP.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Action, Drama, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: Blood, Graphic Violence, Non-consensual sex, Sexual Violence
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 6 | Word count: 35258 | Read count: 12440 | Published: Jan 21, 2008 | Updated: May 18, 2012
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Reviewer: Autumnal Flower Signed
Date: Sep 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Red, White, and Black and Blue

I really like your angle with this, it's interesting seeing how the muggle and the wizarding worlds can interact. The brutality of your serial killer is chillingly written. As in the case of many of your reviewers I can't wait for Ginny and Draco to meet. Given Ron and Harry's reaction to him I can see that it will entertaining to say the least. You write really well an definitely leave me wanting more.

Author's Response: Thanks!  The next chapter is written, but my beta seems to be MIA so I'm not sure when I'll be able to post it (hopefully soon though).  Thank you for taking the time to read and review and for your kind words.

Reviewer: Autumnal Flower Signed
Date: Nov 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Second First Impressions

Wow, well done again.I was a bit put off by the beginning - seemed a little clumsier than previous chapters for some reason, can't really explain why. The DG interaction was great though, exactly the right sort of tone given the situation. I also really liked how you brought both stories together at the end - talk about drama!
Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I would agree with that.  I had a very difficult time writing the beginning of this chapter.  Their meet was written long ago, and it was difficult to edit something that I had read so many times.  I'm glad you liked it.  Thanks for reviewing and for your kind words.