Yo. I like to read and write Harry Potter fanfiction. I also like reviews, and try to respond whenever possible.
Love can never be wrong.Category: Completed Short Stories
Ohmygosh, how sad, and how beautiful! You did a great job with this.
Draco and Ginny had a messy break up after Ron found out about their secret relationship. Each is trying to forget the other with little success. In the meantime, Draco is having an identity crisis about the war and where he fits into it, Narcissa is making trouble and Sirius is trying to keep her under control and out of Lupin's trousers.Category: Long and Completed
I've only read half of it, since it's so long, and I don't have time for more now, but I just want to say, I'm in love with it, so far! So well written, so damned sarcastic, love it love it love it. I'll be back to finish the rest ASAP
When Ginny isn't at St. Mungos, she's out hunting wealthy, single wizards... her favorite pastime. However, when one silver-eyed wizard refuses to give in to her irresistible charms (and retaliates with charms of his own), she does everything she can to ensue that she wins the game.Category: Works in Progress
Hey, how come you never updated this? It's really good! It's a different, interesting premise. I'd love to see what happens next....hint,hint. LOL.
Who knew happily-ever-after could have an expiration date? New beginnings are hard, but when they happen in the middle of your life, they're infinitely more so.Category: Works in Progress
I really liked that first chapter! Very cool stuff, nicely written. I like Ginny's narrative.
I only wish you could have described them physically...I dunno, like, when she first saw Draco again would have been a good moment to note how he had changed from the last time she'd seen him. I'm obsessed with details and descriptions, so maybe it's just me. Either way, excellent job.
Another fantastically well written chapter. I'm glad that Draco has long hair! Yay for long-haired!Draco!
I'm loving it, but I can't enjoy it so much...I have this sense of foreboding...why is there only one chapter left, and it feels like this fic is just starting...Could it be that you've forsaken it entirely? :(
Aw, that's too bad. And a preview of "future chapters", too. You're just evil. >:(
Ginny shows up to Draco's residence claiming she is done with their years-long prank war and would like to call a truce. Secretly, she has no intention of allowing Draco to get away with his most recent prank and is determined to get even through good old fashioned blackmail. Draco, on the other hand, has plans of his own.Category: Completed Short Stories
I've spent a good part of my morning looking for this fic so I could recommend it to a D/G virgin, and I'm so glad I finally found it! I read it over at the fic exchange a while back, and I'm pleased to note it's as good as I remembered it was. Excellent characterizations! You have the banter, the chemistry and the sexiness that makes for irresistible D/G. Nicely done! ^_^
After losing Harry, Ginny must learn to let go of the past and begin to live again. Before she can be free, she has to let go of a memory from her childhood that is haunting her life. Even with his diary destroyed, he still holds sway over her life and heart, leaving Draco as a pale second to the cruel beauty that is Tom Riddle.Category: Works in Progress
This is written for those who wanted more of my one-shot. Now you can have the tale from the beginning.
I really liked this first chapter. It was a very interesting start. Your style of writing is very rich in description, but doesn't feel loaded with words, as can sometimes happen when you give a lot of details. It's just easy to read.
I empathized with Ginny and enjoyed your description of Draco very much. Nice start. ^_^
Ah, I'm in love with this story, and with your writing. ^_^
I love how easily you switch from one perspective to the other, and how layered your characters are. Beautifully done.
Ha! I had a silly little smile on my face, and I didn't even realize it until I stopped reading just now. Loved the interaction between G and D! It's all so superficial though, I can't wait to see what happens when their inner demons start to slip out.
Author's Response: I often have that silly little smile on my face when I'm writing. I'm happy that was translated to you.
I'm glad they worked it out! It was kind of a stupid fight, anyway, and was easily resolved. I'm enjoying this story tremendously, and I think you've done a great job, but I have one nitpick.
I'm not sure I agree with one aspect of your characterization of Draco, and it's his willingness to commit so quickly. Even for a normal couple those first dates are filled with uncertainty, and people dance around the fact that their starting a relationship. Draco has said "our relationship" several times, and it sounds like he's totally open about wanting something serious, almost naively so. For someone as fiercely independent and enigmatic as Draco, it seems odd that he would be so forthcoming as to surrender to Ginny so easily. You might argue that they both know what they want, but still, Draco would seem to me like the type to be reluctant to put a lable on things so early on. Even if he did want her for something permanent, the relationship would start without him actaully SAYING so several times. I dunno. It's just my perception of things.
But anyway, like I said, it's a wonderful story, and I am enjoying it immensely. ^_^
Wow, this was an odd chapter. First off, I hate you just a little bit for not letting your faithful readers peep at Draco and Gin's first time together. Not everyone's comfortably writing smut though, I understand that, but with your writing skills I assumed I'd be getting a beautifully written scene. You've documented the nuances of their connection so well, that I feel kind of left out...
Whatever, I don't want to crush you under the weight of my expectations. :)
Stil, what I referred to as odd is this: it seems sort of disconnected from the previous flow of the story, after having been devoted exclusively to focusing on the G and Dness without a mention of Tom Riddle, to suddenly have him come back so strongly.
The flashback of the end of the war, and I assume, Harry's death, also seemed out of place. I understand that you're trying to take the plot in a new direction, or maybe the direction you intended all along, but it just seems kind of abrupt. I think it wouldn't have seemed so if you'd gone back to G and D at the end, in a present time normal scene.
Anyway, I hope you realize I'm being specific in my reviews because I love your story, I'm not trying to be nitpicky and obnoxious!
I think you're a fantastic writer. ^_^
From your chapter notes it seems you're not a regular updater, though, so I guess I'm glad I got to read this far, and can only hope to have a speedy update. ^_^
Ginny makes a brave attempt to get on with her life after she splits from Draco by going on a date with Oliver Wood, but finds it's not as easy as she hopes.Category: Completed Short Stories
That was awesome!:D I loved it! Nicely done. ^_^
Category: Works in ProgressDavid Malfoy and his twin sister Diana have a serious problem. After one of their parents' many heated rows, Draco and Ginny Malfoy part. It's worse than ever. Everybody is talking about divorce and even their elder sister has given up hope that their stubborn parents will ever get together again. Diana and David decide that there's only one way to save their parents' marriage: Magic! But something goes horribly wrong and David is transferred to the year 1997, while the seventeen-year-old Draco takes his place in the future. Now it's up to Draco to save his future marriage with the help of his daughters. Pre-HBP!
Gah, honestly, I have such mixed feelings about this. It's well written, and the plot is very different from any D/G I've previously read, so I really like that. Also, I like the personalities you've given Draco and Ginny's children, especially the fact that the oldest is like Lucius, and the youngest are twins.
BUT, I just can't reconcile with the fact that Ginny would just leave her kids like that, without saying goodbye, without explaining anything to them, even by owl. Divorce is not something light, and when a family breaks up, it's always the kids that suffer the most. I get that Ginny's trying to teach her husband a lesson, but she's doing it at the expense of her children! She's a HORRIBLE mother, and incredibly selfish! I just can't empathize with a woman like that. I find myself wishing that Draco meets someone else and forgets about her, and another woman gets to keep her family! I'm so angry at her...
I guess that means you're a good writer, that you got me so riled up,ahaha. But yeah, I hate Ginny. Sorry. :(
I already received another review which said that the reviewer hated my character's personality but loved the story. I know this is a story about selfishness (on both sides, by the way), a very damaged marriage and to people who've not been good to or for each other in the past. But I wanted to keep them in character. I didn't want the Malfoys to be good and Ginny had to live with this cold family and husband for a long time. I don't want to say what she's done is good, but what I want to say is that it's understandable that she flees from the Manor even from her children, because her children want her back and therefor they are on Draco's side. And she doesn't want to give in this time. So... the children know where their mother is, and they (and Ginny) know that they can come there anytime. Perhaps she just waits if they actually do. Read on and you'll find a lot about them you'll hate. But it's their character ;) (in my fiction)and it works.
When Harry leaves Ginny for Hermione, Draco decides it's time to fulfill an old fantasy. Twenty five is a little old to experience her first one night stand, but Ginny thinks she can handle it.Category: Works in Progress
LOL, this story is great! It’s so funny and just…clever. It is so Draco to advise Ginny not sell her engagement ring before having it appraised! And Ron’s “Pansy, are you lost?” Heheheheh.
The school uniform fantasy was hilarious, and the phrase “I’m a Malfoy, I’m always in charge, especially when I’m naked” was just priceless.
The ending was harsh, and so well written, I could totally empathize with Ginny’s anger and disappointment, despite the fact that you didn’t actually say she was angry or disappointed.
Nicely done! This was my detailed review of the day, LOL.
That was cheating. I don't consider it a real chapter at all.Much too short, not enough D/G. It was well written, and the moustache part was pretty, so I guess I forgive you.
Ginny and Draco fight about where to spend Christmas, but something deeper seems to be causing problems. Can their marriage survive?Category: Completed Short Stories
“He watched her face transform as Vulnerable Ginny became Extremely Brassed Off Ginny. Her eyebrow went up. ‘You’re doing that intolerable git routine you’re so good at’ she drawled.”
That was so sweet! Ron was hilarious!! Loved it. I loved how you characterized Draco. Nicely done.
Author's Response: Thank you! I think Draco would be a rather sweet husband, if a bit oblivious sometimes. :)
DH SPOILERS!! Three years after the war ends, the Malfoys are trying to make up for their past. What happens when they find out they have more to fix than they thought? And how exactly are the Weasleys involved?Category: Works in Progress
I LIKE it. Very nice. I like the little AU world you've set up here. Draco is likeable, Ginny does seem pathetic, but at least she's witty! Nicely done.
Author's Response: Thank you!! I know they seem a bit AU now. Trust me both of them are still there real selves, with my little spin of course. Keep reading, hopefully chapter three with be up soon!
Every day Draco and Ginny take walks. Even though they are physically apart, those are the only times they share.Category: Completed Short Stories
Gosh, how sad! That was very well written,nicely done.
A short one-shot based on The First Five Times by Stars. Some smut, some one liners, and in keeping with the song, some sap.Category: Completed Short Stories
LOL. That was pretty cool. I loved the sarcastic banter between them, and the obvious chemistry.I only wish that you would have given more strong indications that after this fifth time things would become emotional between them. It's obvious they're going to try, and it's obvious they'll have more sex (the title implies there's more "times"). But I really don't get a sense that they're going to make it, and it's kind of depressing, cause I get the feeling they're going to keep using each other, just cause they won't know how to break certain patterns.
That could have been corrected with adding certain scenes, or even a line, that suggested he wanted to just TALK to her, for once, or be in her company without using her body...know what I mean?
Either way, I'm not saying it's not a good fic. Quite the contrary, it's fantastic, and the fact that it made me depressed shows your writing is pretty good. (Really, there IS a compliment in there!) The setting is certainly a clever one, and I liked especially her relationship with Blaise. I get the feeling that if it doesn't work with Draco, she'll have him to fall back on.
Nicely done!
Hired by the Malfoys to manage their public relations after a bout of bad press, Ginny discovers that some relationships just aren't meant to stay strictly professional.Category: Long and Completed
LOL. Great start! I'll be back for more when I have time.
Author's Response: Thank you, come again! :)
Selling herself into a marriage contract, Ginny finds herself playing a deadly game, ultimately pitting her husband against her lover and a father against his son. Many twists and turns, depth and evil characters - and a long story of sweet and true love.Category: Long and CompletedNew! Epilogue is up! Yes, I know, the story has been "complete" for a couple of years, but this ending has been partially written for a long time and it ties up some loose ends.
It was SO Draco, the wizard disguised as a Muggle! I realized it when I read about his thoughts of being free, on the money he had saved. Mwa hahaha!
This story is very well written, I'm enjoying the D/G. I hate that Lucius is such a beast, because he's one of my favorite characters, and it sucks to see him be so physically cruel to a woman, but I understand that it's necessary for the plot to work.
Draco is being haunted by an unknown admirer. How will it turn out? Companion piece to "Parchment Pieces".Category: Completed Short Stories
Yay! I'm so glad you've posted these here. Reviewers here are the best. ^_^
Thanks for your compliments! :D
You already know how I feel about your two fics, so I'll say no more, except: KEEP WRITING!
~Rowan
Even as I gaped in horror, Ginny emitted a happy giggle, one that I had not heard in years. How had none of us noticed? How much more to their story was there?Category: Completed Short Stories
Hey, that was very nice. Beautiful story! I love the way you wrote Draco. ^_^
My only complaint is that you didn't offer translations for the phrases in French. Fortunately my grade school French got me through those, but I'm sure there are people who were left in the dark, know what I mean? You could insert them in your end notes, or even in the story, with Hermione translating to herself. Just a thought.
Anyway, nice job.