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A Little Bit Of Christmas by Laura Laitaine    (Reviews - 55)

Christmas at Hogwarts. No one should have to be alone. Part of Draco/Ginny Ficmas 2003
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 5226 | Read count: 6760 | Published: Jun 10, 2004 | Updated: Jun 10, 2004
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Date: Sep 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: A Little Bit Of Christmas

Good job on this story! I just wanted to say that I liked your writing. The execution needs work--some of Ginny' s thoughts and the interaction between characters were cliched bordering on saccharine--but the writing itself was sound, and enjoyable. There's definite potential there, so keep writing!

Miles to Go Before I Sleep by Adelagia    (Reviews - 197)

Convicted and incarcerated after the war, Draco is unexpectedly given a new lease on life.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Other Characters
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 14 | Word count: 35401 | Read count: 59057 | Published: Dec 15, 2008 | Updated: Jul 17, 2009
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Date: Dec 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Release

I like it so far and I wanted to ask, is the "No touching!" thing from Arrested Development?

Author's Response: It is. I'm weak and couldn't resist throwing that in there! Thank you for reviewing. "No bees!"