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Millions and Millions of Malfoys (And One Very Sleep-Deprived Ginny) by Anise    (Reviews - 401)

Ginny Weasley is absolutely sure that Draco Malfoy is hatching a particularly evil plot as junior head of the Ministry Department of Culture, and that it definitely involves puppy-strangling, bribing officials, and consistently wearing trousers tailored very tight in back. Or at least it's a theory that makes sense when she's been surviving on two hours of sleep a night for far too long, and Draco keeps vetoing her sketches for the new marble statues at the Ministry fountain. But then Luna Lovegood gives her a potion with some very curious effects, and Ginny finds that she just may have to revise her opinions about those evil trousers...
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 38 | Word count: 185356 | Read count: 62318 | Published: Apr 27, 2009 | Updated: Mar 07, 2010
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Date: Mar 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Wow. Phenomenal story that had me incredibly confused (in a good way) up until now-ish when the plot is amazingly coming together. Again, wow. Please update soon!

ps. I adore the insanity of Nick and the fact that he is constantly eating some type (though sometimes...unusual) food :)

Author's Response: Yes, it's coming together at last!! I just kind of see Nick always snacking on something while watching this entire drama run its course.

Reviewer: maximumtrouble10 Signed
Date: Mar 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

So good! Very intense. And no more updates for a while? I may die of suspense! :) I'm a little confused--maybe I missed a story, but who is the Q mentioned in the author's note? The flashback works really well, finally connecting a lot of loose ends/questions I had (esp. about Ginny not remembering anything about Malfoy, the potion [btw, Luna is so sneaky!], the long wait between D/G, etc), though this chapter made me think of even MORE questions :). PLEASE update soon!

Author's Response: Q= Star Trek/ Next Generation's Q. And all questions will hopefully be answered. I will update as soon as possible... ;)

Seven Deadly by VickyVicarious    (Reviews - 74)

Ginny Weasley and Draco Malfoy are on a downward spiral, religiously speaking.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Other Characters
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 7 | Word count: 10953 | Read count: 24938 | Published: Dec 03, 2009 | Updated: Jan 11, 2010
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Date: Dec 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Envy

I love this story! I think your idea of having Ginny and Astoria actually be friends is really creative, and I don't think I've read that idea before. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! I don't really know where I got that idea, but I'm liking it the more I think about it. ;)

Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes by like a falling star    (Reviews - 5)

A series of D/G drabbles revolving around these delightful treats! Each stands separately.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Other Characters
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1016 | Read count: 2687 | Published: Mar 07, 2010 | Updated: Mar 08, 2010
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Date: Mar 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Love potions

I like the idea, though maybe you could come up with some outrageous/typical-Fred-and-George names for the potions, candy, Wheezes etc? Please update soon!

Draco's Dangerous Dilemma by Anise    (Reviews - 1418)

All Ginny wants is to get the upper hand just once with drool-worthy hunk of man candy and callous playboy Draco Malfoy before he moves on to his next careless conquest. So how did this simple plan lead to time travel, nefarious plots involving the most infamous whorehouse in the wizarding world, and the teenaged Draco’s achingly sweet, chocolate-flavored kisses? Even Draco Malfoy was innocent once, as Ginny learns all too well…

Chapter ONE HUNDRED EIGHTEEN Quote of the Day:

THE LAST CHAPTER

The minutes ticked by, long enough for Ginny to know that against all reason, all common sense, she still wanted impossible things from him. But she would leave. Even after today, even when her body ached from him and for him, when she could feel that he had begun to shape her to him, she would turn around and leave him. I will, I will, she thought.

“You don’t understand,” said Draco.

“Oh?” Ginny said stiffly. “At least he hadn’t touched her, she thought. She would not be able to find the strength to pull herself away from him, and she knew it.


Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Lucius Malfoy, Luna Lovegood, Narcissa Malfoy, Other Characters
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Action, Angst, Horror, Mystery, Romance, Smut
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: Yes
Series: Ever Since Draco and Ginny: Reflections on Their (Un)Natural History
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Chapters: 118 | Word count: 575068 | Read count: 257167 | Published: Mar 19, 2010 | Updated: Dec 03, 2011
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Reviewer: maximumtrouble10 Signed
Date: Mar 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm so excited you started another (fantastic) story! I can't wait for the next update (hopefully soon!)!

M

Reviewer: maximumtrouble10 Signed
Date: Mar 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Aww...poor Ginny (for Dean's desertion) and lucky Ginny (for being with the deliciously chocolaty Draco)! And is Tom the same person who used to work at the Leaky Cauldron? Or is he some deity like Nick? And how does Draco know him? Good relationship or bad? And why is Draco attracted to Ginny right now? Does it relate to the time travel mentioned in the summary? Does Draco (or Ginny) have supernatural powers? I have so many more questions too! Please update soon--I can't wait for the next awesome chapter :)

Reviewer: maximumtrouble10 Signed
Date: Mar 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Thanks for answering some of my questions and for the update! And who is Marie? An alias that Ginny told him when she somehow traveled to the past? (sorry, I'm kinda stuck on the time travel theme :) ) I'll limit my questions to just those two...for now :) Please update soon!

ps. Love the "innocent" plot bunny of doom with basket of Easter eggs (and maybe candy too :) )

Author's Response: I can't tell anybody who Marie is yet, but there are many mysteries yet to be revealed. ;)

Reviewer: maximumtrouble10 Signed
Date: Apr 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

The dream that wasn't a dream...and I'm guessing Draco's laugh at Marie hints that Marie is Ginny? The fact that you didn't use italics makes the story better because then we REALLY don't know how to differentiate what's dream and what's reality. Please update soon!

Reviewer: maximumtrouble10 Signed
Date: Apr 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Mmm. The mysterious crates that I don't believe for a second are property of Blaise.

I really like the fact that Ginny isn't so irritated with Draco that she becomes a complete whiner and abandons all of her morals. Is this "deep vein of fairness" eventually going to lead her into some actions/decisions that she'll regret?

I can totally imagine the subtle elegance of Malfoy's apartment and how it kinda reflects his personality:impeccably clean, tasteful (with some moderateness but still enough size to demonstrate the luxurious life of the Malfoys), handsome, and with a hidden secret at the center that he's trying to hide. Maybe I'm stretching too far...

Anyways, please update soon! I was so excited to see that you had updated AGAIN today!

Reviewer: maximumtrouble10 Signed
Date: Apr 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I love Zenobia Smith! She totally shut Astoria down in witty, cunning way. I actually had to look twice though, because I thought initially "Zenobia" was "Zacharias". :) How did you come up with Zenobia's name ?

Draco's reaction to Astoria is excellently described--I could tell through his actions (rather than you explicitly saying) that he doesn't really care about/is tired of Astoria.

Speaking of which, is this new plot element the involvement of Astoria (potentially with Draco)? Or the nosy Rita Skeeter and the importance of the press/media?

Please update soon! Can't wait for the next chapter :)

Author's Response: I liked the idea of the Smiths giving all of their babies "Z" names. Yep, Draco has about had it with Astoria (or has he ever had "it" for her?) The new plot element is coming right up... ;)

Reviewer: maximumtrouble10 Signed
Date: Apr 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Excellent! I love how the photograph Ginny and Draco talk to Ginny and then flip off Astoria--hilarious.

And Harry, Harry, Harry. Leave Ginny and Draco alone! Such a jerk...though, maybe I'm just biased :)

Another Z Smith! Zane! I tried saying that sentence (Zane Smith, Zacharias and Zenobia's older brother) 5 times fast and failed. Miserably. Moving on!

What is "the Cause"? Old reference to Voldemort? And the Greengrass's deal with Draco? Somehow he needed their help to help Ginny in the past? (that's probably really farfetched, but hey, worth a try).

My fav sentence of the whole chapter...it was tough, but it is (drumroll): If such was really the case, thought Ginny, then Astoria had to be remarkably unhappy for the next ninety seconds, because Draco Malfoy unleashed an astounding string of profanities, vulgarities, and references to various bodily functions that would have made all of her brothers collectively blush." Ha ha ha!

Please update soon! And please make Draco come back! I miss him already :)

Reviewer: maximumtrouble10 Signed
Date: Apr 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Ah! Poor Ginny! Where is Draco to swoop in and save the day?

Harry is really irritating me. I know you probably intend for it to be that way but I just wanted to punch him as I was reading this. He's so condescending and thinks that he knows best all the time! HE DOESN'T! And it is none of his business who Ginny is involved with--he most definitely should mind his own bloody business and just stay the hell out of her life and let her and Draco live happily ever after with lots of love and chocolate and kisses (even if it means that Harry has to jump off of a bridge or die in some horrible, "tragic" accident). AH! Well. Sorry about that. I feel much better now :)

Anyway, you mentioned the Department of Mysteries. Could the bridge/Veil be involved in time travel? Or maybe the chicken/egg that displays the power of time that Ginny (perhaps coincidentally) was so fascinated by in OotP?

Can't wait for the next chapter and cunning Ginny (who hopefully gives Harry what he deserves). Please update soon!

Author's Response: Harry is irritating, isn't he? I never seem to be able to write a non-irritating Harry. He just IS that way in Aniseworld. I think this Harry does turn out to be a *little* more sympathetic in this fic, in the sense that he's at least trying to do the right thing, but at this point I don't know if he's even there yet. You have guessed closer than any other reader yet with the DoM's involvement, and that's all I'll say. :)

Reviewer: maximumtrouble10 Signed
Date: Apr 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I have a new theory!! Maybe time travel isn't going to be going back, it will be going FORWARD. And the reason that you mention that Draco is a teenager is because of the whole "equal and opposite force" theory/idea/whatever, Draco (and maybe Ginny) deage as they go into the future in time. Ooh! Or maybe they travel to a different universe! Like where the war is reversed and Harry is the Dark Lord (I really don't like Harry--can you tell? :) ).

Sorry about the double review, I just was inspired this morning :)

Author's Response: Double reviews are NEVER anything to be sorry about. ;) I love your theories. I can't reveal anything, but I'll just say that nobody has got it just right yet.

Reviewer: maximumtrouble10 Signed
Date: Apr 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

AH! You mentioned the Immortals! Uh-oh...now I'm thinking of a whole new set of theories :) Where is someplace that's magically shielded? The past? A pensieve? (I'm trying to figure out the whole time travel thing still :) ) Hogwarts? Stonehenge?

I absolutely adore photo-Ginny and Draco, especially after photo-Draco punches Blaise and kisses Ginny. Speaking of Blaise, I'm glad that you kept him really in character the entire way--aka totally shag-obsessed. And also, the way that you introduced Luna as a complement to Blaise is great--her "happened" to stroll by made me laugh.

Grr. Hermione is joining Harry up there on my eviscerate-and-push-off-cliffs list. Double grr. If they are dating (maybe??) they deserve each other, the supercilious, self-righteous prats. They twist the truth to try to convict a potentially innocent (but gorgeous, so even if he's guilty it's okay ;) ) man and interfere with Ginny's life. How old are they to go see Ginny's mom? And I don't like Molly Weasley either. Please--sending your out-of-school daughter a Howler? Not cool. At all. Especially with the not-so-nice (euphemism ;)) comments.

Btw, Harry should NOT be allowed to talk about killing a man, seeing as he killed Voldemort directly AND his parents and Sirius and Cedric and a whole slew of people indirectly. Hypocritical much?

Anyways, please update soon! Can't wait!

Author's Response: The "magically shielded" part actually isn't quite as complicated as it sounds. It's a place that's already been mentioned in the fic, let's just say that. ;) You've made some very SMART guesses here though...

Reviewer: maximumtrouble10 Signed
Date: Apr 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Haha--Stalactites and stalagmites :) I think I'll know the difference between them too. Hopefully, Ginny will see a certain stalagmite soon :)

And I love Ginny's "Steering. Give me." She is certifiably crazy! But the fact that you make her that way through her actions and the words of other characters not just "Ginny was crazy" is absolutely fantastic. Also, the fact that goblins can text? and the name Crumblygrotts? And the mixed up way of speaking? Pretty darn awesome :)

Now, question/theory/observations time--you mention (or rather Draco says) Loki. Is that just a curse or is there some other significant meaning? Also, Ginny says "it's like seeing the devil's smile". Is that a hint that Draco is somehow related to the devil? (like in your 19 years later story)? And who is the blonde person under the illusion in the cart that Ginny sees? Is this a Nick-ish character aka an omniscient totally cool being that munches on snacks while musing on how to manipulate other people to provide entertainment? And, therefore, are Draco's threatening words to Ginny before he realizes that it's Ginny actually directed at this figure, not specifically the Aurors, but the fact that the Aurors are somehow being "guided" into capturing Draco? Or are the Aurors *cough Harry and Hermione* just jerks?

Also, I wasn't as irritated with Harry and Hermione in this chapter, but that is probably because they didn't speak much. :)

Please update soon! (and let me know how insanely unrelated my theories are :) )

Author's Response: Somebody has made a very very good guess as to the ID of the blond who fell off the cart, and he's not Nick. But yes, Draco thought at first that he was actually talking to him rather than to Ginny. Harry and Hermione are behaving like jerks, but as always, Harry does it because he thinks he's right. And I love that you love Ginny's craziness! Yes, she is a tad bit crazy right now...

Reviewer: maximumtrouble10 Signed
Date: Apr 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oops, sorry for ANOTHER review, but I wanted to clarify that when I ask about Loki as a curse, I mean whether he acts like the name Merlin (like Thank Merlin). And btw, if you're confused by or have no idea what I'm talking about in my theories, sorry. I think that I'm confused too :)

Author's Response: Never ever be sorry for another review... ;) Yes, you've pretty much guessed it with how the name "Loki" is being used. BTW the Malfoys are ALWAYS descendants of Loki, whether or not he specifically makes it into a fic as a character, so they do tend to use his name more than other wizards do.

Reviewer: maximumtrouble10 Signed
Date: Apr 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I love this chapter, especially how Ginny is not intimidated by Draco even though he basically told her to shut up. And, speaking of Draco, I love how he smells like chocolate--best scent ever (except for maybe cookies fresh out of the oven, but most of the time, the best-smelling cookies have some type of chocolate in them :) )

The lock for a lock idea is really clever, and the cuckoo clock is hilarious. Also, I love the snarky lock :)

What could be in the box? Hmm. Some secret regarding Draco's past? And is that why can only Ginny open it? Plus, who sealed the box--Draco or some other person (potentially even past-Ginny )?

And I think that the person in Gringotts(according to you, Lucius is a good guess so I'm just going to refer to the person as such) is the same as the person outside. And the magic-weakening spell was sent by Lucius, who is the "Malfoy Dragon" because the Dragon represents some type of duty/ancestry that Draco can't escape. Yes, no, maybe so?

And Ginny's studio is what you were referring to! Wow, I made the shielded place so much more complex than it was :) But why are they at Lyme Regis? I looked it up online, and could the Leper's Well or the Heritage Coast have anything to do with why they are there? Or am I totally overanalyzing? (again :) )

Please update soon!

Author's Response: Even more very good theories! And yes, once again, some are closer than others, but this was a very good batch... (takes Chocolate Theory Chip cookies out of the oven.) Yes, there's a reason why I chose Lyme Regis, and there are more clues in the next chapter, which is coming reasonably soon!

Reviewer: maximumtrouble10 Signed
Date: May 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Excellent chapter, as always. I love the photo/portrait-Dracos!

Hoping this theory batch is super-chocolatey and good! So the lock of blond hair tied with the green ribbon is from Marie. But is "Marie" really Ginny who somehow goes back in time and ends up in the Crystal Palace, where she becomes Draco's companion for some ceremony that initiates him into "manhood", but must disguise herself so that her-self and other people at that time don't recognize her and cause some time paradox, or just chooses to remain under the aforementioned illusion after initiated-Draco selects her because she is insecure about some aspect (maybe being a Weasley?) and that is why her hair is accepted by the snarky box and why Draco writes "Mine mine mine"? (whew, one LONG sentence--and I love the word snarky, and can totally hear Draco saying that :) )

Why is Draco acting so different? Did he just have some kind of meeting outside with a person/being who reminded him of some duty/responsibility/reason why he can't have Ginny?

And as for the echinoderm shells and daisy crown...maybe clues/momentos that Ginny gives past-Draco to remember her because his memory might somehow have to be erased?

And why do you keep mentioning Loki and Draco's heritage? Will we see Loki (potentially in league either with Lucius because Draco owes him [Loki] something or with Draco for entertainment value or for payback for one of Lucius' crimes) soon?

Please update soon! (and let me know how burnt my batch is from my overactive imagination :) )

Author's Response: Oh, I love this theory batch... (sits down with milk) Yes, the blond hair is Marie's. Mm. Very VERY chocolately theories (dips theory-chip cookie into milk), and that's all I'll say about that. ;) Yes, Draco just had to do something that he really, really, really isn't happy about at all. This will eventually be the aforementioned exceptionally evil plot device of utter evil-ness, which will be revealed a few chapters down the road.

Reviewer: maximumtrouble10 Signed
Date: May 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

ps. (double review time! :) ) is it merely coincidence that an echinoderm's hardened shell is called a "test" or that they have regenerative powers? Perhaps that hints to the past Ginny/Draco somehow?

pps. I really should be studying for my exams now, but instead, I am searching for hidden meanings behind echinoderms--hey, at least I can pretend that this will help me for bio! :)

Author's Response: Yay! Echinoderm knowledge! (ahem) Yes, I'm sure that will help for your bio exam.

Reviewer: maximumtrouble10 Signed
Date: May 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Oh no! I'm glad you're okay, but I'm sorry that you'll have so much extra work because of the stupid water! I hope everything works out, and please update when you can! You know how much I adore your story/stories/rabid or tame plot bunnies with chocolate and candy:)

Reviewer: maximumtrouble10 Signed
Date: May 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Excellent chapter as always. Why do I have the feeling that the mirrors will come up again? :)

And it's quite ironic that Ginny is cursing Marie, when Marie is actually her--I have evidence for this too! The way Tom Jones, whose been with the Malfoys for a while, recognizes her ("you look different but ol'Tom doesn't forget"), the fact that Draco calls her "M" when in the hospital years ago, and more (too much to be written here! :) ) I love how Ginny cunningly and stubbornly turns the tables on Draco...but I have a potential theory--maybe Draco wants Ginny to see him in the mirror because why else would he so obviously "rehearse" his actions?

Anyway, off to read and review the next chapter! Sorry this is so late--my review never posted, so I didn't have a chance to check and rewrite it until now :)

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you! Oo, good theories. (bites into warm theory chip cookies.) Keep them coming...

Reviewer: maximumtrouble10 Signed
Date: May 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Yay for the long chapter and stubborn Ginny, though I am sad that Draco's beautiful face has a red handprint on it (but not that Ginny slapped him :) )

Why didn't Draco think that Ginny's truth spell would work? (and that only Dark spells work on him?) Does that mean that he's too powerful/has some cool quality that makes him immune to a lot of magic? And why is he having such a reaction to the "in vino veritas" spell? And what was the spell that Draco put on Ginny's wine? And why isn't SHE affected?

Tricky insertion of Ginny's dream here. But maybe the dream isn't a dream, but actually a memory?

I quite admire Draco's circumlocution here. He "answers" Ginny by being deliberately vague or distracting her.

Also, how Draco is talking about Ginny doing anything for Harry (the boy she supposedly loved)? Maybe he's indirectly referring to himself, and what he (17 year old Draco) had to do to protect the version of Ginny he knew and loved in the past?

Did Draco really kill Harry? I can't say I'm particularly saddened by that, though Ginny's worry that Draco will be sent to Azkaban rather than the fact that Harry is dead is nice :)
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Also, I do feel somewhat badly for Draco because his "true" of emotions of jealousy and anger are revealed, and he can't hide behind that cool, impersonal, aloof mask.

My fav quotes of the story:
"The-Boy-Who-Was-Murdered-By-The-Malevolent-Malfoy"

“Oh? What is he then? Your little fuck-buddy? Little being the operative word, I’m quite sure!”
“No, no, oh, wait, yes to that one part—“

:) Please update soon!

Author's Response: Draco can be overconfident and a little arrogant (well, more than a little), which is why he thought that Ginny's spell wouldn't work on him. He doesn't know her as well as he thinks he does. ;) Draco didn't put a spell on Ginny's wine, just on his own, so that it would keep magically vanishing out of his glass. Very good guess about Ginny's "dream" of the night before from Chapter 6! And once again, that question about what Draco really did or didn't do to Harry... it WILL come up again.

Reviewer: maximumtrouble10 Signed
Date: May 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Sorry, can't write too long bc have to pack for flight to see sister that leaves in 4 hours, and I still need sleep so I have to make this quick.

Love: All Access Astoria, Draco's concern over his hair, Ginny's stubborness

Theories: Loki mentioned again--upcoming role/presence? Draco talks to Astoria--who represents/is a conduit for Lucius? Or did she somehow figure out the Ginny-goes-back-in-time so she's trying to help Draco and somehow help herself? (though I favor the former :) ) Oh, maybe Lucius is forcing Draco to be engaged to/marry Astoria because he somehow found out about past Ginny/Draco's love for her, and threatened to hurt/affect her if Draco didn't comply with his demands?
Also, Draco's comments in Ginny's thoughts/fantasy? They're probably true bc in vino veritas (btw, clever "backstabbing") still applies? So Draco tried to break Ginny and others up so that she would be a virgin for him (either present or past)? And Draco refers to Astoria as his fiancee not his love or his wife?

Can't wait for Ginny in lingerie and Malfoy in boxers--bound to be interesting! (let the seducing and manipulating (and answers!!) continue!)

Author's Response: Oo-- look at all those THEORIES!!!@ Hint hint evil hint time... some of them are very CLOSE to the truth (with one of them, nobody else has gotten that close! yay for you, I wonder exactly how you figured it out), and some of them are NOT. Anyway... get some sleep... I need some too... I just worked all night, and this was the craziest morning EVER... have a fun visit with your sister! :)

Reviewer: maximumtrouble10 Signed
Date: May 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I'm BACK! :) Excellent chapter (as usual)! And I'm glad the plot bunny isn't TOO nefarious when you aren't watching.

Fav lines:
"That’s the worst acting job since Colin Creevey fell off the stage playing the part of the giant squid in The Tragical History of Hogwarts during the second-year Christmas pageant"

And "I mean, I’m right, because you’re my brain, after all."

Draco is quite sneaky. pretending to be ill/injured so that he can evade Ginny's questions AND using sarcasm to escape the confines of in vino veritas.

Theory time! Glad the last batch was successful (by the way, I made chocolate chip cookies today and I thought of you :) ), although I DO want to know which one of mine was close--hint please?

Interesting how Ginny recalls her drunken night, and Draco repeats his "I'm weak". Perhaps he views himself as weak because he knows that he ultimately put Ginny in harm when she traveled (somehow) to the past but can't resist staying away from (and therefore protecting) her? And Draco fatalistically wants to "drop dead" because he either wants to escape completely from his father/Malfoy duty or wants to stop the complications of his remembrance and Ginny's (current) obliviousness of past events between the two?

Another theory--at first, I couldn't understand WHY Draco was in such pain from the curse after Ginny asked him about Marie when he appeared to answer her questions later without any pain. And then I realized that Ginny specifically asks if Marie is a nickname. Therefore, I think that Ginny (who traveled to the past) either was given the nickname "Marie" as a type of code name or gave that as her alias when she first meets Draco because she knows about Marie and that name is the first name that comes to mind (because she dwells on Marie's identity alot).

And I still maintain my theory (but this version is expanded:)) that Draco is lovelessly engaged to Astoria because his father or Astoria demands that Draco marries her, and Draco acquiesces to maintain his promise (probably made in past) to protect Ginny (whom Lucius or Astoria somehow found out about and threatened). Yes, no, maybe so?

Also, another question for you (though I would still please like you to respond to my theories too :))--why doesn't Ginny ever ask where/when Draco met Marie, what was she like, has Ginny met her--basically questions that clue her in to Marie's identity?

Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you for the great scrumptiousness of that review! (bites into review cupcake. It has a lot of frosting.) :) Some really, REALLY good theories. The one about Marie being a code name was especially good, also the Draco/Astoria theory. (Are you sneaking into that plot bunny's cage at night and feeding it theory chip cookies???) Yes, it is strange that Ginny doesn't ask the really pertinent questions about Marie... almost as if she CAN'T find out who Marie really was, hm hm hm... and there is a very definite reason. But we won't find out *exactly* what it is for a while. ;)

Reviewer: maximumtrouble10 Signed
Date: May 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Hmm. Interesting chapter. VERY interesting. You're adding lots of plot-chocolate chips to this batter :)

Fav quote: “You know perfectly well,” said Ginny. “What I did that night was just awful and I know it, and you’ll never let me forget it now, and you’ll never forgive me, and you want to have posters made of how I sneaked into the living room and molested you on this couch and put them up at Flourish and Blotts and—“

Theories: I apologize if I repeat any of my previous theories, but I think that some are SIMILAR but with MODIFICATIONS. Hopefully :). Draco swore to himself in past to protect Ginny because something happened that involves Lucius and Ginny in peril. He therefore obliviated Ginny in the past (as this chapter shows, he is apparently used to doing obliviate and confundus), but it's beginning to wear off (evidenced through Ginny's new memories) because of Draco being close to Ginny. The reaction in between Ginny and Draco--the "rekindling" (the whole fire idea) of some bond made between the two and that's why it's a different kind of dangerous (other than the sexual tension that Draco's fighting against to potentially make sure Ginny's a virgin when she comes to him in the past) ?
And the "curse" that Ginny refers to (with regard to her lack of sex) is actually Draco either physically or magically preventing it?
Tricky Draco placing a spell on Ginny that won't let her ask/remember the questions she wants--maybe that's an important part of the story because when she goes back in the past, her goal is to find out certain answers, and asking the questions (and knowing the answers from in vino veritas) in the present would prevent her from seeking out such answers in the past, which would change history and cause a time paradox.

Let me know how I do! (and please update again soon!)

Author's Response: Some of the theories are surprisingly close, and some of them... aren't. (takes fresh batch of cookies out of oven.) Draco did swear to protect Ginny, and it was because of something that Lucius wanted to do to Ginny (and still does.) The rest of it... well, I'm not giving anything away. ;) The next chapter has a lot of revelations, though! Some questions just may be answered...