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An Irrational Moment by poinkychan    (Reviews - 7)

When Ginny breaks some happy news to her family, they react just the way she expects...
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Molly Weasley
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Future AU
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1603 | Read count: 4041 | Published: May 15, 2011 | Updated: May 17, 2011
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Reviewer: lyrawhite Signed
Date: Aug 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: An Irrational Moment

Gosh! Your writing is SO good. It's fun and with a good structure. This story ask for a part II or something.

And a must say this part really crack me up

"I you what!" He glared accusingly at Ginny, "You were in on this! How brave it is of you, Gryffindors, throwing me to the proverbial lion's den." He threw himself from the table and stalked towards the cellar door. "Fine, I'll go, I've had enough of this anyway." He ripped the door open and crossed the threshold, making sure to slam it behind him.