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Real name: Sarah D
Registered: Jun 21, 2009
Membership status: Member

I live in Canada, I think that says it all. Oh yeah, and I adore the world that JKR has invented for our dear inspiration.
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Last Piece by ReverseBeauty    (Reviews - 54)

She didn't know how much one horrible event could change the course of her life.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Luna Lovegood, Other Characters, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: Fully compliant
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance, Smut
Warnings: Blood, Character Death, Graphic Violence, Non-consensual sex, Sexual Violence
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 11 | Word count: 13258 | Read count: 36076 | Published: Aug 15, 2007 | Updated: Sep 10, 2007
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Reviewer: starfire_alive Signed
Date: Jun 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Crash

I really liked the plot to this story but it felt as if you rushed it a little bit and not all the parts were connected or fluid. Just a suggestion for your next story that if you have to add a couple paragraphs here and there it might make this story a little bit better even though it already is pretty good.