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Burning Ice by dumbledorefan_07    (Reviews - 115)

Ginny Weasley is a charm breaker for Gringotts. She's been around the world, but now the bank has called her home for the 10-year vault check. When she returns, there are secrets she can't escape, truths waiting to be discovered and a past in need of redemption.

Chapter 13 Quote

It was when she averted her eyes to the side of the building that she saw something to make her blood run cold.

She froze, stopping dead in her tracks and letting her arms fall limply to her sides. She stared at him, eyes wide in the red light of twilight, taking in the sight of his white-blond hair and porcelain features.

“No,” she breathed.

Red and green curses were flying about her in every direction, but it seemed the world had slowed down to her and the man who had not yet noticed her.

Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Neville Longbottom, Other Characters
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Future AU, Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Action, Angst, Drama, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 12 | Word count: 46819 | Read count: 17471 | Published: Feb 02, 2010 | Updated: Jan 31, 2011
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Reviewer: sparkling Signed
Date: Feb 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - "After hours"

Another great chapter. Seems to me thinkgs are starting to get interesting with Draco Malfoy?, someone is alittle obssessed with a Red head,,,,,,,

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review!

Reviewer: sparkling Signed
Date: Mar 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - "Dust my Lemon Lies"

I so like how Ginny is getting the best of Draco, I like her in this story. she is to witty for Draco own good. did he ever meet his match with the fiery red head.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your wonderful comments! I think Ginny is the perfect match for him, especially when she's witty and mature and the ying to his yang. I hope you're still reading, I'd love to read more of your reviews!

Reviewer: sparkling Signed
Date: Mar 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - "Rain Amid Thunder"

I wonder why Draco's mother said? You must remain undetected........ what is Draco up to?.

great story so far..

Author's Response: I wish I could answer your questions, but it would give everything away. Keep reading and let me know what you think! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: sparkling Signed
Date: Apr 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - "Making Trouble"

WOW! that was a very intense chapter. meaning: very erotic, sultry, I was so drawn in to what Draco would say next. and then he was gone. I SO WANT MORE! THEIR IS ONE THING I DO KNOW, GINNY WILL MOST DEFINITLY MAKE DRACO PAY DEARLY FOR THIS.

FIRST WILL BE HIM THINKING HE COULD GET THAT CLOSE TO HER, PUTTING HIS HANDS ON HER, AND KISSING HER, AND HER FORGETTING ALL REALITY FOR A MOMENT....

SECOND FOR HIM JUST LEAVING ABRUPTLY WITH HER STANDING ON THE DANCE FLOOR, LOOKING FOR HIM LIKE SOME DESPERATE LITTLE GIRL.

THIER WILL BE SOME HELL TO PAY! DRACO MALFOY FOR WHAT YOU HAVE DONE.....I HOPE YOU ARE READY FORE ANYTHING?? I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER THIS WILL BE GOOD!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the way things are progressing! Ginny will make him pay, alright, but probably not in the ways you're thinking. Keep reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: sparkling Signed
Date: May 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - "Lost and Lovely"

Draco maybe able to stay away from Ginny! (OUT OF SIGHT) BUT NOT OUT OF MIND! SOON AS HE SEE'S HER AGAIN, HE WILL EAT HIS WORDS.....GINNY IS LIKE HIS DRUG!...

LOOKING FORWARD TO READING HOW HE IS GOING TO TRY AND STAY AWAY...

**GREAT STORY**

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm working on the next chapter now.

Reviewer: sparkling Signed
Date: Aug 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - "Troubled Seas"

Well she did captivate Draco in many was, That it brought him to the cliffs of Moher, to think why!?. Obviously it is a place that he comes to, to think about important steps to take in his life, and these cliffs bring a Calming understanding with them just like the breese.

The cliffs are amazing!. looking forward to the next chapter. Obviously they are both in the same boat, about their feelings, and that it is much more than they intended it to be.....what that is not sure, but this story will take us on that journey.

Author's Response: It is a journey and I hope you enjoy it! Keep reading and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: sparkling Signed
Date: Aug 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - "Nothing is Innocent"

hahaha. loved how they were tormenting each. Then Draco coming after Harry with Blind jealousy. POOR HARRY SO CONFUSED? GINNY CERTAINLY WILL HAVE TO FIX WHAT SHE DID, AND EXSPLAIN TO HERMIONE WHAT HER INTENTION WAS..

The wicked part on Ginny was she hoped that would happen, and when it did, that's when she was able to go forward with her feelings, to really be with Draco, BECAUSE SHE HAS FALLEN HEAD OVER HEALS WITH HIM TO!!.

Loved her last line to Draco, "I LOVED TO SPEND QUITE A BIT OF TIME WITH YOU" THEN TO DISAPPEAR, SHE IS MAKING THIS VERY ADVENTUROUS FOR HIM! "A CAT & MOUSE GAME". LOOKING FORWARD TO WHEN THE "CAT CATCHES THE MOUSE"...Hope you will be writing that seen.

THE STORY IS NOT BORING!, KEEP GOING, AND THANK YOU! FOR UPDATING REALLY QUICKLY, HOPEFULLY THE NEXT ONE WILL BE THAT QUICK...PLEASE :)

Author's Response: Yes, she is very sneaky, isn't she? Thanks so much for the review and I'll update as soon as I can!

Reviewer: sparkling Signed
Date: Aug 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - "This Life I'm Living"

I thought it was exciting. Getting dressed in Muggle clothes, to have a date with Draco, in Muggle London. Then to ride a Ferris wheel, and to have one hell of a Kiss, by a Blond Greek God!. I say it was one hell of a first Date.

Liked the Gift Draco sent GINNY. Maybe he will get to see them on Ginny. "BRIEFLY" ;)

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! I thought it was a pretty awesome first date, too. Nice pun. :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: sparkling Signed
Date: Sep 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - "A Cauldron Full of Hot, Strong, Love”

That was a really nice chapter. What a perfect date Ginny had taken Draco to. He also really enjoyed himself also. perfect ending to a perfect day together.

until then
pamcakes.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!

Broken Mirrors by Cadaverous Apples    (Reviews - 55)

Sometimes, Ginny just wanted to break mirrors so she'd be certain to live for another seven years. She wondered if seeing her face splinter like Draco's mind already had would be worth it.

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Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Lucius Malfoy, Luna Lovegood, Narcissa Malfoy, Other Characters, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Action, Drama, Horror, Mystery, Romance, Smut
Warnings: Blood, Character Death, Graphic Violence
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 4 | Word count: 25887 | Read count: 4083 | Published: Feb 26, 2010 | Updated: Jan 10, 2011
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Date: Feb 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: I: Defiance is beautiful

I think you have the making of a really good story here,,,so wanting more. It's alot of dark moments in this chapter??? the characters are very different, which is refreshing, something unique in your writing very good for you!. and I like the details you wrote into the story.

I like the twist with Fred & George being double agents?? THAT WAS A WOW MOMENT! VERY ORIGINAL, AND ALSO WITH FRED'S BLINDNESS.

THEN THE END WITH GINNY LOOKING FOR DRACO! AND THEN HIM FINDING HER, SNEEKING AROUND AS HE PUT IT, INTO THE DRAGONS DEN! I am wanting more!!!! I really am looking forward to reading Draco & what his character will be like????.

I hope that you will update at a good pace, this story is too good to wait for long updates between chapters......

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the wonderful review! You made me blush at a couple of points in here. :D A lot of things in this chapter sort of crept up on me because I'm not really planning it, so I'm glad that the surprises--like Fred being blind or the twins being double agents--are so likable. The next chapter (which will shortly be posted) will have plenty of Draco, so you'll find out all about him. :D I'm sorry that the wait was so long between the first and second chapter, but I assure you this won't be a habit. I just finished up with high school (for good) and my first year of college, plus soccer and track, so I'll have plenty of time now to write. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!

Power and Responsibility by Januarybaby    (Reviews - 76)

The War against Voldemort was won eight years ago. Draco is a convicted prisoner in Azkaban. At 24, Ginny is the youngest and first female Minister for Magic. They appear to have nothing in common and no shared history. But things are rarely as they seem and secrets are everywhere.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: D/G Offspring, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 9 | Word count: 18763 | Read count: 9857 | Published: Apr 25, 2010 | Updated: Jul 08, 2010
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Date: May 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Hot baths, Disturbing Thoughts and Unexpected Twinges in the Belly

what a chapter, this has been so difficult for Ginny & Draco, they clearly love each other. that will never change. But unfortunatly during & after the war Draco made his decisions, and destroyed what they had.

Now years later, Ginnys Minister of Magic, and Draco is in Askaban for his crimes during the war. and finally with his tears he has realised what he truly lost, after making love with Ginny in the cell.......

Reviewer: sparkling Signed
Date: Jun 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Forgiveness, Desire and a Plan That May or May Not Succeed

The best laid out plan Ginny could ever come up with. What one would do for LOVE!.

I just hope that that Ginny is right that Draco loves her as much as she loves him?. He did choose the Dark side?!, I know because he was protecting her from His father & the Death eaters & Voldermort.. But just maybe, could he be manipulating her?. he could have read her mind seen how much she still loved him, and hexed her into getting him out?. and then in the end she gets caught, sent to Azkaban, hes free some where in the world, and never comes back for her????.

I just hope I'm wrong...it will be real fun to read what is going to happen..It will be exciting for sure.

Author's Response: Draco is not evil, I can promise you that. He is not planning on leaving her. I hope that makes you happy because I know I couldn't live with a truly evil Draco. Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: sparkling Signed
Date: Jul 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Illegal Activities, Declarations of Hope and Endless Tears

O. MY. GOD. I really hope that Draco had used some other type of magic to seem that he killed himself. it would be really sad if he is truly dead & even worse If he did this to use Ginny and fake he loved her to get out, and made everyone including Ginny to think that he was truly dead.

You are driving me crazy! I need to know what is happening next........

Reviewer: sparkling Signed
Date: Jul 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Individuality, Birthdays and the Land Down Under

so sad that Draco didn't get to be a father & husband. But his legacy will live on. Liked the description of Carwyn, PERFECT!. moving away was the right thing to do, if she hadn't her life wouldn't be free....surprising she got away with what she did?

You Bring Me Closer to God by BlackRaven    (Reviews - 17)

Ron and George were going to get a kick out of this. Their sister had been totally duped. And she didn't even know how bad it was until he told her who he was leaving her for.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: Something to Believe In
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1503 | Read count: 3408 | Published: May 20, 2010 | Updated: May 21, 2010
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Date: May 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Can You Take Me Higher?

I give Draco "high praise" to WANT TO CHANGE what he has done in the war. to recognize that he loves Ginny, their relationship, and that she deserves a whole person that dosen't have "blood" on their hands from what they have done.

I hope that after talking with Ginny, he realizes that with out him in Ginny's life she wont be better off. I hope they finds a way to have him do what he NEEDS TO DO! AND STAY TOGETHER.....

SO YES A SEQUAL IS IN ORDER, GREAT STORY......

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love happy endings, but I don't know if it's fair for them to have one...

Reach Out and Touch Faith by BlackRaven    (Reviews - 7)

Companion fic to "You Bring Me Closer to God." Draco was unable to live with his guilt. He had done so many things wrong in his life. How could he ever give Ginevra what she wanted when he couldn't even get his life in order? He needed to find a distraction. He needed to find a new obsession...
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Future AU, Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: Something to Believe In
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1899 | Read count: 2503 | Published: May 21, 2010 | Updated: May 22, 2010
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Date: May 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: You're My Only Hope

Yes! please keep going. this is second installment is really good. Knowing what he was thinking & going thru to make him self feel whole again, and get rid of the demons that crippled his soul.

I'm still holding out that he will be able to do what he needs to do for himself and be with Ginny.

Author's Response: I hope so too! I always hate when you becoming, somehow, emotionally involved with a story. You start to think that this could happen in a real, non-HP world. And you know that you yourself would hate for things not to work out in your favor.

The Song Remans the Same by Echo    (Reviews - 28)

Draco begins to suspect HE is not epilogue compliant.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Arthur Weasley, Blaise Zabini (boy), D/G Offspring, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Luna Lovegood, Molly Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy, Other Characters, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Future AU, Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 3 | Word count: 5334 | Read count: 9307 | Published: May 22, 2010 | Updated: May 23, 2010
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Date: May 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Part 1 - Light Up Light Up

wow I like this a lot! quite different. looking forward to the next chapter.

The Palest Nights Are Yours by Eustacia Vye    (Reviews - 17)

Ginny was used to not dealing with things that bothered her. She was used to ignoring when things went wrong. She's not used to having to deal with things, and she's not used to sharing her thoughts. This is now something entirely new to deal with, and she never expected Draco Malfoy to be able to help her. Or become as important as he does.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Future AU
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 6722 | Read count: 1703 | Published: Aug 23, 2010 | Updated: Aug 23, 2010
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Reviewer: sparkling Signed
Date: Aug 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Palest Nights Are Yours

that was a beautiful story. It show what the "HOPE" of Prayer can do! and the will to LIVE, for the one you love.

I to am all to familiar with Cancer, trying to take my Mother & Brother. They are survivors! and are doing well to this day. :)

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words! The church scenes weren't originally going to be in the story, but as I was writing it, Draco wanted to be there. It really helped the both of them, I think. Congratulations for your Mom and brother!