In the back of her mind, Ginny had always sensed there would be wild adventures with her and Harry. The early days of their time together–fighting evil and playing sport–felt like lifetimes ago. The most adventuresome thing they had done together in recent memory was a spontaneous shagging in the garden. It was so domestic that it pained her how common they were. The greatest wizard of his generation, and his wife, getting their thrills from a shag in the garden. She had never thought this future would be hers.Category: Long and Completed
WoW, I love this one very very much.
It is a pure challenge to write a story begin with cheating on Ginny's side, But your story rolls so smoothly and you make it so reasonable.
I always want to read some long story like this setting of this one. Let Ginny leave Harry after three kids generally is a very big challenge and I think it is the hardest storyline to write. These two chapters are good hint of Ginny's future fair. I guess you still need more to describe Draco's heart change in the future chapter since now I don't get any clue how he will fall for her
Great job and Good luck.
Fate decides that best friends Pansy Parkinson and Draco Malfoy are perfect for each other. With the influence of a dark Adonis and a red-haired temptation, free will pushes them to other thoughts and actions, but it is much too late. When two unwilling beings are magically bound, nothing remains private.Category: Long and Completed
It is my first time to read a DG story having such a setting. Considering I have read thousands, I have to say your setting is quite refresh and interesting.
Your Draco is so dark, but it fits him. I generally can't stand Good Draco, those kind of Draco which has a Harry inside. I always love dark Draco. The only problem is I didn't see his good side on Ginny. I kinda get what you want to tell us, that is Draco love Ginny so much that outdo the magic, but it seems a little too subtle.
Still it is a very good story, especially your perspective.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review =) I'm afraid that the story's in Pansy's POV, so she didn't have a real chance to see the good sides that Draco did have with Ginny -- only catching their heated moments and feeling the effects of his desire through the magic they shared until Ginny became a shared desire. Hence, we only get to see the horrific sides of Draco and how he acts with people he doesn't love, which happens to be quite vicious as you read. There was no room for Good!Draco in this fic, sadly, but I do appreciate the fact that you enjoyed fully the perspective that I was trying to portray. ^^
He was supposed to be their hero. He was supposed to bring about the new era of harmony and peace in their world. But when the revolution came, and the tenuous peace he’d worked hard to earn - for all of them - dissipated like smoke. He was supposed to be their hero. But he was only a man. A man who betrayed them all. A man who ripped apart the world.Category: Works in Progress
You are my favorite writer here since another one doesn't post GD stories here. Your "crossing into chaos" is my first additive GD story and I had been waiting for it. Now I am so happy that you have an new one. no matter what the story is, your strong Ginny and bad Draco are always my favorite chemistry in GD story.
I just hope I don't need wait too long like the "crossing into chaos"
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting! And yeah, I take forever writing Crossing into Chaos, but that story just takes longer to write. I can't really explain why - I think I just want it to show up on paper the way it lives in my head, and that takes time. Because this fic is so new, I'm not as insane about it being perfect like I desperately want CIC to be.
"The opposite of love is not hate, it's indifference." ~Elie WieselCategory: Long and CompletedAnd in all of their incarnations, the one thing Draco and Ginny can never be is indifferent.
(A compilation of one-shots.)
Story #6:
"She's fallen under the strongest magic there is; she's fallen in love."
You are very good at writing D/G. I love the description about what trigger Draco throw off anything to kiss Ginny.
I love your Draco a lot. Please do finish this one
Author's Response: It's finished as of now as a stand-alone fic, but I do have ideas bubbling for a longer Hogwarts-era story. So you'll likely see this Draco again in the future. :) Thank you for reading and commenting!