COMPLETE! Strolling through Diagon Alley Lucius Malfoy comes across a little boy who could have been Draco's twin. Has his family tree been expanded, without his knowledge? Has Draco been keeping secrets? Or is he oblivious to the fact that he may have an heir?Category: Long and Completed
This has been a mostly interesting ride. Your characterizations are fairly internally consistent. The plot arc is entertaining. I am struck, though, by how much you seem to hate women: you portray them as whining, weak, manipulative, pouty, insecure, illogical and ridiculous. Was that the overall point of this? I wonder...