*DH Spoilers* Moleskin is a handy thing. You can hide anything in it, and only the owner can retrieve it. A brief tale about things Hagrid has hidden in his moleskin overcoat, and the stories behind them.Category: Completed Short Stories
That is so depressing. Wow.
*walks off, shaking head*
Enjoyable read.
Author's Response: Ha, thanks. It depressed me to write it, but I\'m glad you liked it. :P
In order for Draco to regain control of his assets after the war, he is required to marry. For Draco, this can mean only one witch - Pansy Parkinson. Who, you may ask is the Ministry liason for both Malfoy and Parkinson? Ginny Weasley.Category: Works in Progress
Perse, darling, brilliant as ever. I cannot wait to read more, as I love the plot that you and Feli had come up with. *is tempted to ask you to send all written chapters early*
I like your Ron, as always, and Silent!Harry is a nice treat from the usual CAPSLOCKS!Harry that we see in many fics.
Bravo, sweetie.
Zombie Draco and Ginny meet under the watchful eye of the Moon, that shimmering Peeping Tom.Category: Completed Short Stories
Change the formatting, and it may not be "boring"
It was so spaced out, I would not bother reading it, though it is probably good.
Change that, and I am sure it will improve a lot!
Author's Response: Wow, I had no idea it was that spaced out! I wrote it in Word and I had to change the format to upload it, but I definitely did not space it out that way on purpose! Trust me, if I knew how to change it, I would. Thanks for bothering to review though anyways. I really appreciate it.
When I’m alone, I wonder if it could have been different. I wonder if I could have been different. I wonder whether, given the right circumstances, I could have made different choices – better choices. I wonder if I could have been happy.Category: Completed Short Stories
Wow. Fabulous job. I like the way you wrote him, the first line in particular.
Great work.
“Draco Malfoy! Don’t walk away from me!” She called, for once in their six month relationship, she was the one afraid of being abandoned, realizing now that he could leave her. Her words made him stop, but when he turned his metallic gaze upon her, she could see the damage she had done shinning angrily back at her. Just like everyone else, she had let him down.Category: Completed Short Stories
That was depressing.
Very well written, very realistic. It seemed so real, so true... wonderful job.
Author's Response: Well, I am sorry to depress, but thank you for taking the time to review!
“What do you think you’re doing here?” Her voice broke me out of my reminiscing, startling me. I hadn’t even heard the door open. Her eyes were alight with a fire I had seen only twice before, both during the best times of my life. Now… well, I could hardly see how this could possibly turn out to be one of the best moments of my life. In fact, it seemed like it would be one of the worst.Category: Completed Short Stories
The product of a bet that I lost to Pipperstorms (and just a really, really bad day)
Very nice. I quite liked it.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. Always the type of response an author hopes to get. :-)
They say that a candle burns brightest right before it dies; for us, it was true.Category: Completed Short Stories
Beautiful. A new concept, and a wonderful one. Fabulous job, darling. Draco's thoughts as his last words to Ginny, realizing that at the end, and that last line... beautifully written. A wonderful idea, and well written prose to do it justice. Bravo.
Scorpius Malfoy's parents were never around, and left him in the care of his nanny, Ginny Weasley. He grew up blissfully under her care, brought up with the Weasley ideals of courage, honor, and loyalty. Then when he turns 7, his father comes home, and Scorpius' simple world falls apart.Category: Works in Progress
I like it. I hope it continues, as I think it really has some potential!
Author's Response: Thank you! Truman Capote said (I think) that \'potential\' is the worst description of all for a writer. But for this story, I happen to agree, and hope it lives up to its potential!
Only in death do you realize the mistakes you've made in life...and Ginny Weasley must have made a huge one if Draco Malfoy is in her Heaven!Category: Completed Short Stories
I liked it. Sweet. I would like to read more, I think. How they deal with a world where they know what happens next, what happens to the people the ended up with, how things change because of it.
Is there conflict because of the "changing fate" issue? What happens to everyone else?
What happened the first go round, and what happened in comparison the second time?
Author's Response: Okay, one: I'm sorry this reply is so terribly late. Two: YOU MAKE ME REMEMBER WHY I WANTED TO WRITE A FULL-LENGTH FIC FOR THIS SUCKER!