I adored Foolish Consequences in all its heart-wrenching glory. You have such a nack for words I can't even begin to describe it. Draco's rise to the challenge is truly befitting of his proper stature and character;I wish that more people would understand that purebloods are not purebloods for no reason, they are raised to their family's standard of perfection and should be portrayed as such.
I loved Narcissa, you truly captured a side of her which I have never seen in writing. Ginny's family troubles were also beautiful (though disheartening) to read, because with their tenacity and pride I can really see it happening, no matter how much they love her.
I hope for more in the future, but for now this was a marvelous ending. I would love to see the conflict with her family reconciled, and Doron grown.
Thank you for the opertunity to read such a gem!
Ashleigh

Author's Response: I truly appreciate your feedback, it really keeps me writing. I hadn\'t intended to write a sequel when I first planned this story, or even when I concluded it, but I have since reconsidered. I would like to explore this little family\'s future, but with work and school and other fics that remain hanging out there, unfinished, I\'m not sure when I\'ll get to it. Hopefully by the time I do, no one will have forgotten FC. Anyway, I\'m so glad you enjoyed this. Thanks for the review.\r\n

Anise...I think you are a fantastic writer, firstly. Secondly, I feel as though your writing is getting a tad repetitive. I am trying so hard to read this latest of your fics, but I find myself growing tired of it, since it feels like basically the same plot as most of your other fics. This is not to say I don't love the plots you come up with, but rather that I would adore it if the plots were a little less similar, the character developements were a little less similar, and (though I doubt this will change, and really, for readers who can manage to follow your stories: more power too them) less over-complication of the plot.
I think that you are witty and insightful, and often times your phrases and the way that you spin you chapters honestly makes me happy to see fantastic writing in action. I feel as though you sometimes sell yourself short by writing long, overly-complicated, hard to follow plot twists because I think that you could have lovely, interesting, action packed and mysterious works of fiction if you just made your plots slightly less jumbled.
All I ask is that you keep in mind that while you may know and understand everything that is happening and is going to happen: the reader does not.
Thank you so much for being such an inspirational writer, and I hope that you take my criticism as just that--not meaningless, cruel words, but just a fellow reader and writing trying to support and improve your work.

Fantastic, I'm starting to see some character variation--which is awesome!! I love your portrayal of our lovely couple, but it's nice to see further development from the personalities you have established in your numerous fics. I hope it continues! I really enjoy your phrasing--you have a gift!!
I hope the plot continues to steadily build without tripping itself up; I can't wait to see how you tie in Twilight mythology and themes with Draco and Ginny's world.

Loving this! Not thrilled to get to the "oh-no-she-actually-is-going-to-be-married-off" part because there just seem to be a million of those stories, but I'm hoping you pull it off in an original way.
Your french is a bit off, but still good! It's nice to be able to read in my native tongue!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm really glad that it's intelligible to a native speaker.  Reviewing it all was actually quite helpful, I work in a library and one gentleman came up to me the other day and started speaking to me in French and I was luckily able to grasp enough to understand what he was saying and let him know I really can't speak it too well.

There's still some more time before the whole married off thing, which I know is ridiculously old by now.