Draco's failing at the mission given to him by the Dark Lord, his relationship with Pansy is strained, and Snape won't stop asking questions. He needs help desperately, but when he receives it, he's drawn into more intrigue than he bargained for. His saviour may need some saving herself.Category: Long and Completed
I liked the chapter, although i think ginny is a little ooc. in the books, i find, she appears not so calm but very witted and always up for a fight. I like though how draco is nothing but stressed out and how his doubt about the dark lord is becomeing firm, so he now knows he's not doing good. i like your style of writing too, its an easy read, but nontheless interesting and definitely not boring :)
Author's Response: (Could this be the latest review reply ever?) I'm gratified to know that you felt something a bit odd about Ginny in the beginning, but thrilled that you liked this version of Draco! The Malfoys' quiet unravelling in the latter books was so interesting to watch, I thought. Thanks for your feedback, and if you kept reading, I hope you enjoyed!