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Real name: Manu
Registered: Aug 18, 2006
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Beta/ beta-reader/ Avid reviewer, always have a coment about everythign i read, not alwayas nice, but try to be constructive!
=)
I love D/G and romance so i like the fics where in the end everything turns out ok for them. Without one or both dying.

Reviews by choravenclaw

Getting Lucky by CCC    (Reviews - 285)

When Ginny wins a bottle of Felix Felicis strange things happen. (This is set in Hogwarts era, but it's AU. We'll assume Slughorn still works there.)
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 12 | Word count: 20261 | Read count: 67644 | Published: Mar 18, 2009 | Updated: Mar 13, 2010
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Sep 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

well that was kinda quick, and a little odd
but i really like it!
i love Narcissa like this!
You did a great job (as per usual)
;)

kisses

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Dec 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

DAMN IT!!!!
I usually love Lucius but i detest hi now, almost as much as i do pothead!
Please tell me the next chapter will be out soon and Ginny will fight for them!
Make him remember!


I thought for a moment the curse would hit them both and both would forget, i'm glad she remembers and will surely go after him!
plus Narcissa is on their side!
=DDDD
i DO love Cissa!


Thank you for this, but can we please have the next chap out soon?
it did kinda took forever to be out!
^;~


kisses

Die, with a "T" by gidge_8    (Reviews - 149)

A chubby Draco and the physical trainer from hell. What more can I say? A D/G twist on dieting and an ending sweeter than candy floss. Enjoy. :)
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Other Characters
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 10 | Word count: 34144 | Read count: 52714 | Published: Mar 30, 2009 | Updated: May 01, 2011
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Aug 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Admit the Problem

I like the idea of a smut cookie! I'll see what I can do. LOL!
YAY!
You got me happy from the start!
=D

I know He's such a baby!
When i started reading this i thought like, maybe he's gonna get hit by a curse and become a baby or something and omehow Ginny is the one who must care for him. Then i read he was chubby so i thought: a chubby baby Draco telling Ginny to "Tie" whenever she did something he didn't like.

I know my imagination is on the loose!
;)
But i'm glad he's not SUCH a baby and that he has feelings for her, other than bad ones.
This is going great and I'm really enjoying it!
=DD

i know what you mean by letting it soak, is just i'm a read-freak, when i start reading omething i never want it to stop.
That's why i love fanfics so much, i try to beg to the great authors to keep writing and to write more or, more likely, i ask them to make the story naughtier, i just love Draco (and Blaise) hitting on Ginny and making her blush, these teasing and stuff really make my day brighter!
As to the BTW (which by the way i dunno what it means) : You're right, you're chapters are always decent sized!
=D

kisses

Author's Response: oh your responses are wonderful! The baby idea is a hoot! I hardly ever start reading a story before at least 5 chapters are posted also. Hate waiting too. :D

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Aug 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Deal with Setbacks

You know, i've been reading this fic since the very beggining, from the first chapter and all.
I couldn't bring myself to review, even though I'm an avid reviewer, because i thought i would be repeating the word CUTE too many times to count.
But after this chapter and everything that's happened i just couldn't hold myself any longer.
This is really cute and sweet. And even though i prefer the fics with hot scenes, this one I'm definately fond of.
So great job! This must be the first NOT NAUGHTY fic I ever liked!
=D
BUt if you'd like, i sure wouldn't mind reading a smut cookie after ;)

Anyway, great job and please post soon!
One of the other reason i wasn't reviewing is because you take forever to post a new chapter, while the other authors i religiously read post 2 or even 3 chapters you only post one.
But still, you're doing a great job!
=D

kisses

Author's Response: I like the idea of a smut cookie! I'll see what I can do. LOL!

So glad that you like it. It's a joy to write this one. Somehow, I just love how childish Draco is about this. He's a typical man! (looks around to see if any men are reading this... haha)

I wish I could post faster, but the story would be crap if I did. I really have to let the story "soak" in order to be able to catch small details and fill in areas that seem skimpy. and I do have to sleep sometime. :D BTW - you might notice that most folks who post more chaps are only posting short 1000-1500 words, mine are usually around 3000 for this story, 5000 or longer for other stories, so, I'm probably on the same pace

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jan 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Re-focus on the Goal

There she stood, arms crossed, foot tapping and eyebrows raised. Her red hair flowed loosely about her shoulders and there was fire in her eyes. In a way, he hated how incredibly gorgeous she was, because he'd forgotten why she had become such a fixture in his life.

OOOOOOHHH!
I loved her entrance!
=D
She is great, isnt she?
Especially when she gets to turn his brain into mush.


He looked up, guilt written all over his face, looking very much like a child caught in the middle of mischief. Her response completely surprised him.

AAAAAAAAWWWWWWWW!!!!
He must have looked so cute!
=D


He was unceremoniously placed on a treadmill and had to watch while “his” Weasley spent a solid hour coaching an overly rounded witch through some simple weight-lifting and stretching routines.
If she had the gall to wake him up at an ungodly hour, the very least she could do was give him a little attention.

^:^
I LOOOOVE possessive Draco!
Whining and pouting actually adds to his charm, especially his boyish side!
=D


In the past, running had only been tolerable because he really enjoyed watching her arse as he followed her around the Quidditch pitch.

Could he find a greater reason for running?
It's simply a show off game!
And i just LOVE it!
=D

So, on the third day, as he jogged on his treadmill and watched Weasley spend her time with the inept, overweight witch again, he did the only proper thing that any self-respecting Slytherin could do: he plotted ways to eliminate the competition.
Two days later, the witch disappeared, having won a three-week, all-expense paid trip, which included a never-ending buffet and dessert bar, courtesy of Blankenship's Flying Carpet Cruise Line. With a bit of luck, he was hoping that the witch might eat so much on the trip that she'd explode .

Oh yeah, a truly evil plan!
=D
Don't you just love his Slytherin ways?
Plus having tons of money to help with his plans DO help!
;P



I love the fact she figured him out the second she saw him, his smug expression must have been giving him away from MILES!
i do have one tiny, itty, bitsy complaint though...
You see, we already know he fancies her, at least phisically and she has some attraction to him, but you take FOREVER! to update so i was wondering when they are goin to FINALLY get together!
I'm dying to see them together!

Oh, can you please update Contractual Obligations?
I'm crazy to see what happens next!!!
I just love your fics!
=D


kisses

Author's Response: It would be nice to be independently wealthy so that I could write full time but, alas, that is not the case. Also, I really was quite stuck on the plot for the second part of the chapter. It was lovely to read your long, thoughtful review! So nice to see how many points caught your attention.

Hugs my dear!

-G

Not Quite an Affair by Rosalie    (Reviews - 522)

“You mustn’t tell them, Rose! Harry knows but Lily and the boys… you can’t breathe a word…”

When Rose Weasley went to her favorite aunt for advice on how to handle loving someone her family disapproved of, she never dreamed the older woman would have been able to relate so well. In the comfortable safety of her kitchen, Ginevra Potter told her niece everything and swore her to secrecy. But months later, when Ginevra notices that her daughter, Lily, is spending time with Scorpius Malfoy, Ginny realizes too late that the truth can never really be locked away. Children question their parents and their own identities and everyone must confront the past.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Other Characters
Compliant with: Fully compliant
Era: Next Generation
Genres: Angst, Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 32 | Word count: 108603 | Read count: 142616 | Published: Apr 11, 2009 | Updated: Dec 23, 2011
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jun 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Doubt and Stupidity

HORRIBLE HORRIBLE PERSON!!!
=D
I NEED to knw what happens!
please update SOON!!!
I'm LOVING it!
Nice kiss and slap scene
=)
kisses

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I LOVE, no, ADORE writing kiss and slap scenes. I've slapped a few idiots and somehow it's infected my story writing. It's really fun ;)

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jun 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Advice and Answers

Yep!
TOTAL fun!
I loved doing it too!

It's a wonderful fic and i can hardly contain my excitement to see the next chapters.
I expect a grand apology from Scorpious.
=D

kisses

Author's Response: I can personally guarantee a grand apology. Promise and cross my heart! Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jun 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Advice and Answers

YAY!
o/

Thanks!
And by the way, I DO like you better than Anise, so please keep the cucko stuff away from this fic, keep it simple, normal, an preferably hot.

If Ginny and Draco got together because his wife died and Harry understand D G love each other, it would be a good thing too!
=D

kisses

Author's Response: Umm... I think I like Astoria too much to just kill her off... but you'll just have to see where the story goes lol. Thanks ;)

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jun 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Apologies, with Tulips

GREAT chapter!
i loved the hugging, Ginny should've given him a harder time though...but then again, he is like Draco plus the tulips...she was a sucker for him.
=P
sweet, real sweet!
Loved this chapter
hope for more soon
and some groppign by the time Ginny gets there to seem them, that wouldn't be too bad, ya know? =P
write more soon!
kisses

Author's Response: I don't think Scorp (idiot boy that he is) is quite stupid enough to have it off with Lils right under Harry Potter's roof, you know? Not smart of him... ;)

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jun 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Advice and Answers

yeah, but then again, they are working together, it gets hot(literally, with sweat and all), they became playful about throwing water in each other, then end up kissing..
i don't know...i just always wanted this to happen to DG so it could happen with LS, get it?
anyway, i just hope the other chapter comes soon!
=D

kisses

Author's Response: Lol, if i promise a few good snogs later on, will that appease you? Cause I can promise them, in just 2 chapters too. Next one will be out soon as it can, thanks!

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jun 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Advice and Answers

Yes! I'd like that very much!
=D
I know I'm bugging you A LOT but there are only 3 fics i like right now and one of those is this one!
;)

kisses

Author's Response: You aren't bothering me at all and that is a HUGE compliment. I'm honored. Thank you very much! ;)

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jun 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: The Dangerous Musings of Comparisons

I don't take it back, you're definately, posetivily MEAN!
;D
But I LOVED it!
That tulip memory and the kiss and pancakes, all of Draco's sweetness...he's amazing!
I love this Draco! REALLY REALLY love him!
Ginny HAS to be with him, she can't NOT realize she loves him.
I want more memories of them living together!
It's great Rosalie, REALLY awesome, well worth the wait.
=D

kisses

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! So very sorry about the wait, too. Hopefully I can take control of my last minute ideas and incorporate them sooner than the literal last minute ;) But I'm very happy that you liked it so much!

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jun 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Snogging Sessions and Sneers

YAY!
o/
AWESOmE!
They are FINALLY together!
And i was SOOO rooting for this couple!
=D
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT

More chapter soon, please?

kiisses

Author's Response: Soon as I can ;) Glad you liked it so much!

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jul 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: The Fury of Tears

OH MY GOD!!!
I cryed, i honestly to God cryed!
I'm still teary eyed.
That was P E R F E C T ! ! !
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!!
It's simply perfection!
Please don't cut this scene short, let it flow all the way don't just go on the next chapter cutting scnees and saying something happened over a week later.
Keep going from here, show Scorpius and Lily and PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE show Draco ang Ginny, don't cut anything short, show EVERYTHING!!!
IT'S PERFECT! there's no better word, really!

kisses

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I'm really really glad you liked it. Trust me, there's no cutting after this (okay, maybe once) but this is when the whole rest of the story starts to move very fast, so it should have everything afterwards. I'm so glad you liked it! ;) More to come soon.

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jul 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Advice and Answers

YAY!
o/
you're the best Rose!
I can't contain my excitment!
i loved this chapter, i screamed, i laughed, i cryed, it was perfect!
better than many books and fics i've read (and i read A LOT!)

kisses

Author's Response: Wow, thank you for the compliment!

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Aug 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Feathers, Letters, and Fists

I HATE Hugo!
I HATE Albus!
You made me flare with anger, i was all red spotted and just MAD!
This was brilliant!
I won't say i love Rose because i've been hating her until this moment, it was more like alove/hate thing seeing as she pushed Lily and Scorpius together without meaning to.
but after THIS? this amazingly well written, well plotted chapter???
i'm jut about to love her!
=D
She did EXACTLY what i was hoping Lily or someone else would do!
I hope these 2 get detention, expulsion or whatever.
Hope Scorpius is ok and no serious concuscions.
Although i wish next chapter would show Ginny and Draco i guess i can wait for another chapter. i really wish to see what happens to Scorp and Lily!
Please tell me the next chapter is mostly written!
This was the most brilliant chapter so far and i can't wait for the next one!
=D
once again an AMAZING job Rose!
Congratulations and thank you for posting it!
=DD

kisses

Author's Response: Haha, yes four of the next chapters are written and they're safely in Miss Opal's hands. I'll get them posted as soon as possible ;) Thanks for your review and I'm so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Aug 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Advice and Answers

FOUR???
Oh dear!
I don't need to sleep to dream!
=)
I hope she keeps up her wonderful beta work and get them done soon!
I'm just about to explode with excitment just to see what comes next!
=DD

kisses

Author's Response: Oh I'm sure they'll all be out soon enough, ;). I'm glad you're so excited about it.

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Aug 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Feathers, Letters, and Fists

I HATE Hugo!
I HATE Albus!
You made me flare with anger, i was all red spotted and just MAD!
This was brilliant!
I won

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the angriness ;)

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jul 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Aftermath and Argument

he knew his wife had never really gotten over Draco Malfoy.
FINALLY! He sees something! I swear he's blind, death and retarded!

everything would change as she walked out that door, and he just might lose her forever. It didn’t matter that he’d been sympathetic and understanding with her. She still was hung up on Draco. After twenty-five years of marriage, she was still going to risk everything for the bastard.
And She's bloody right in doing it! She should risk even if it was 50 years of marriage! Only 25? That's even better! They have a whole life ahead of them! And Harry HAS to but off!

Harry made a silent prayer that he could save his marriage and keep his wife from leaving the next day.
HA!
Thankfully that DIDN'T happen!
I do love Ginny for not letting Harry's words stop her.
Her visit to Draco wasn’t prompted only out of a mother’s concern for her daughter. She truly did need to see him and that was why Harry was so furious.
Yeah, because he FINALLY saw some sense!

Her throat closed up as she slipped her wedding ring back on, having taken it off for her shower.
Shouldn't have bothered to put it back on...but Ginny can never be all the way bad, she's just too wonderful for that =D


Sorry if I got carried away, this chapter was amazing!
Absolutely breath holding!
I only realized i was holding my breath when i let it out by the end.
This was great!
Finally we can see the Ginny we all know and love!
Please don't let Draco's WIFE get in the way, let her be shopping in Paris, or away for a week visiting her family.
Please, please PLEASE don't let her be home!
Ginny was brave enough to face Harry, now let her have some comfort with Draco, don't let his wife get in the way!

This was great, amazing, magnificent!
Thank you sooo much!
=D
i love it!
I love you!
Thank you for this!

kisses

Author's Response: Wow, I'm glad you liked it so much! Hopefully you'll like the next ones too! And yes you did get completely carried away but I love it! Makes me feel like I did my job with this chapter! ;) Just a point to interject though, I imagine it would be very hard for any husband to butt off if he thinks he's going to lose the woman he loves. More on that later by the way ;) Thanks for reading and your review!

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jul 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Advice and Answers

I know it's hard for a husband give up, but if he loves her he wishes for her to be happy, right?
He can NEVER give her that, unless he sets her free.

I do like Harry, just got back from the cinema(watching the new movie), and i must say because of fics i'm disliking him today i could only see his faults!
But no matter no matter

The important thing is that i do wish for Harry not interfere or if he does, more likely WHEN he does, i wish it was "too late" in any sense you can think of
I can't wait to see Draco and Ginny together!
=D

kisses

Author's Response: Ah well, I can't promise anything on the H/G/D triangle, just like I couldn't say anything about R/S/L (and no, the order I wrote those in does not reflect any mirror reflections of whats to come, lol) That's cool you got to see the movie, I can't wait for it but unfortunately I have to. Coordinating work schedules with friends is pretty much impossible and it's killing me inside, knowing I could lie and go see it without them. Alas, I can't lie to save my life so that's not an option. Oh well, can't wait to see it, hope the hating Harry in the fics didn't ruin it too much for you, lol. ;) Cheers. Oh and you'll get your fill of D/G in the next chapter, so no worries!

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jul 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Advice and Answers

YAY!
Thank you Rose!
=)

The movie is pretty good, but I guess Harry is just not getting to e these days. =)

kisses

Author's Response: Ah shame. Lol, can't wait to see it anyway!

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jul 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Coming Around

OOOOOOOWWW
you have a talent for making me cry!
this was beautiful!
you're always topping yourself
i can't wait to see this conversation!

"Draco laid his cheek against hers, inwardly wondering if a heart could have a home outside of its own body."
this was one of the most beautiful things i've seen so far.

i can't put into words what i'm feeling right now, i've cried and laughed and done something in between those twos...is jut amazing
thank you for posting it!
you're great!

kisses

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I'm so glad you like it so much! I'll get the next one out in the next few days ;)

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jul 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Advice and Answers

OH YEAH! o/
thank you!!
can't wait!
*glowing hapy eyes*

kisses

Author's Response: You're very welcome!

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jul 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Close Another Door

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!
WHAT's the TRUTH???
What HAPPENED?
Why won't he go after her???
Why did she have to leave?
Make them come to their senses!!!
Please don't keep them away!!!
Make him go after her!!!
PLEEEEASEEE
*read everything in a desperate, almost crying voice*
;)
kisses

Author's Response: Haha, I like your instructions to read it in a desperate voice. I promise that you'll find out everything soon enough. This was not their last meeting, so there is that to comfort you for now, lol. ;) Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Aug 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Yesterday's Robes

First,thank you for posting!
=)
I loved the beggining of the chapter and the little flashback on Scorpius mind so that we know exactly what happened and how it happened.
I liked the protectiviness of her brother and cousin, although a little hard and in not such a good time, still very nice.
I'm so glad Rose was nice to her, and also that Lily could see she's not the only one missing her best friend!
Scorpius and Lily are wet, cute and adorable as always!
I really DO love this couple, although my love for Draco and Ginny will never cease and i can't wait to find out her secret and reasons to leave Draco.

ow the final part...i can hardly contain my excitment to find out who this owl is for and what comes with it, the news, or whatever it is that it's bringing.
=D

Hope to see a new chapter soon!

kisses

Author's Response: I'm glad you like the chapter enough to say exactly what you liked, that's very cool to read and know exactly what it was. ;) As for Draco and Ginny, her secret and everything is coming out after the next two chapters, as this whole owl to Scorpius is going to have a pretty crazy outcome. If you want a clue of what's in it, just remember that Amber, Draco's secretary, was the one who sent off a message using one of Draco's company's owls. And Amber was there to witness the whole mess of Draco and Ginny seeing each other and then locking themselves in his office. So her letter is sure to be a bit of a bombshell... considering her false assumptions... Anyway, thanks for reading and reviewing again, I'll try to get the next one out as soon as I can.