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Registered: Aug 18, 2006
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Beta/ beta-reader/ Avid reviewer, always have a coment about everythign i read, not alwayas nice, but try to be constructive!
=)
I love D/G and romance so i like the fics where in the end everything turns out ok for them. Without one or both dying.

Reviews by choravenclaw

I Am by Sakura_Kaizoku    (Reviews - 9)

Draco Malfoy has a secret. Only the Slytherin House is in on it. What happens when a certain firehaired Gryffindor stumbles upon that secret? How will she keep from telling? And what happens when wills are questioned and budding romance is tested?

*BTW...it's fairly PG until way later on in the story...then...yeah...D/G sex.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1842 | Read count: 795 | Published: Aug 04, 2007 | Updated: Aug 05, 2007
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Sep 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: HUH?!

Well i can't tell you how sad and happy i am to find this story
i really liked it, it has a lot of potential!
But the sad thing is...you abandoned it!
I can't believe you would abondon soemthing going so well!!!
Please tell me you have it all in your computer!
It would be a huge shame to put it to waste!
=(

I hope to get an answer for this one, it's really great story in the making!
;)

kisses

An Unhealthy Infatuation with Snarky Men by CCC    (Reviews - 343)

Ginny finds that she is only attracted to men she can argue with.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger, Other Characters, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 13 | Word count: 21524 | Read count: 72069 | Published: Aug 18, 2007 | Updated: Feb 02, 2010
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Date: Feb 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Draco rolled over and reached for his wand. His hand encountered a well-muscled, masculine chest.
He jerked backwards and fell off the mattress onto the floor.

*SNORTS!!!*
i dunno whether to let my eyes buldge out and drop my chin to the floor or to laugh like a mad person!


Draco had sworn to himself that he had no interest in Blaise’s proposition. But he did have the occasional disturbing dream. He recognized that Blaise was exceedingly attractive. If he were bent, Blaise would probably interest him.

WHATT???
now my eyes are gonna pop out and i'm gonna dislocate my jaw!
WHAT the HECK?!?!?
Where did this one came from???
=OOO


“I finally end up in your bed and you sleep on the couch.” Blaise turned back the way he’d came muttering under his breath.
Draco gave silent thanks that Blaise didn’t remember any more than he did.

*SNORTS!*
i'm glad nothign happened...i hope
It's good to know Blaise doesn't remember though!
At least is one less thing to worry about!
And poor dear!
I can only imagine the disappointment in his face and the pout in his mouth.
i'd be upset too if i managed to sleep in Draco's bed and think he didn't spend the night there with me.


“Is there anything he could do to regain your trust?”
“I doubt it.” Ginny measured out the next ingredient. “Now if you don’t mind, I have work to do.”

Dunno if that was the intention, but i like that fact that Pans was trying to prob Gin for information.
She should try harder and get something, it would really be nice of her to help Drakie-poo!


"I always assumed that whenever I was ready I could find a woman who would gladly marry me and have my children.”
Pansy raised a brow. “Because you’re such a joy to be around?”

*SNORTS!*
Now THAT's the pansy i know and love!
=D
Sharp tongue at all times, huh?
Plus she's always trying to get one up on Draco.


“No. Because of my money.” He tapped the quill on the desk. “If I let it be known that I was ready to settle down, there would be a line of shallow, well bred, gold-digging women ready to marry me and give birth to my heirs.” He set the quill down. “I would choose the woman most suited to be a Malfoy. We would marry. She would agree with whatever I said and laugh at my jokes even if she didn’t find them funny. Until I met Ginny that vision of my future sounded attractive.”

Well...someone sure did a number on this boy if that's all he sees himfself for and if these are all the hopes he has for a marriage and wife.
Anyone could fit in that line, or at least anyone who ever attended a Malfoy ball.
Thankfully gin came around...can you imagine how doll life would be is she hadn't?
I shuddr just thinking about it.


She grabbed a fresh piece of parchment and passed it to him. “Grovel, plead, and beg for forgiveness. Make no excuses for your behavior. Tell her what you just told me.”

Doesn't she just LOOOOOOVE to make our poor dear suffer?
plus she has the most wonderful advices!
;p
seriously, couldn't she come up with something a little bit more Malfoy like?
If he follows that line Gin will just think it's a hoax!
Unless, of course he does all these things in a very malfoy way...
ordering her around, saying a few wrong things, getting most of the apollogie part wrong...you get the point, just dunnno how to apologize but i'm trully sorry and would do anything to get you back.
^;~




This chapter was extremely short!!!
Should we expect another,longer, one soon like what happened to Demented cherubs?
please say yes!



kisses

Marrying Pansy Parkinson by Persephone33    (Reviews - 169)

In order for Draco to regain control of his assets after the war, he is required to marry. For Draco, this can mean only one witch - Pansy Parkinson. Who, you may ask is the Ministry liason for both Malfoy and Parkinson? Ginny Weasley.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Future AU
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 6 | Word count: 10553 | Read count: 29755 | Published: Sep 05, 2007 | Updated: Sep 06, 2009
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Sep 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh and what an epilogue it will be!
=D
i'll be ever so glad to read it!
i did love the way you put Pans and ron together
i had thought about it last chapter, but reading it makes it much more real
a truly great story if you ask me
please don't delay the posting of the next chapter
i really look forward to reading it
specially if it begins with the iminent kiss where this one stopped
;)

kisses

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Sep 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

i have a very soft spot for her as well
i love it when she meddles helping ut Ginny and Drac
and i love it when she's all naughty and in love with Ron
;)

kisses

Demented Cherubs by CCC    (Reviews - 455)

Valentine's Day brings a surprise, but not the one Ginny was hoping for.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 15 | Word count: 34511 | Read count: 63697 | Published: Sep 12, 2007 | Updated: Jul 04, 2010
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Aug 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

FUCK!
i can't believe he actually DID that!!!!
i mean, yeah he was trying to do the right thing but he can't obliviate her everytime they get screwed up!
THIS was just WRONG!
I was loving this fic so far (unfortunately i only found it today!) but this was just wrong, i really didn't want a Draco on his dark sie and wrong ways!
=S
I'll make sure to read the other chapter as soon as i get back home!
See if this looks better.
by the way, until this moment, this fic was great! BLOODY fantastique!
=DD
kisses

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Aug 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

i don't trust this Draco!
i don't know why but since the obliviation i simply don't trust him anymore!
Wanna know my theory?
i think Draco having sex with her somehow broke something about the bond, because they are not yet married or something like this.
And during this meeting today he was actually with that tall blonde whose name i forgot.
i think he will have a lot of those meetings and at the same time he's gonna start pushing Ginny away and pull himself away too.
Then someday, somehow Ginny is gonna touch a man who isn't related to her, it will be an accident but she will realize she didn't feel the shock, then she's gonna try again and again, no shocks, finally she will put 2 and 2 together and have a huge fight with him, with the crying and all, at this point they are not yet married and so he's gonna let it slip that this has been happening for about a month. There will be a lot of shouting and screaming and crying then she's gonna walk away from him, or just tell him to leave (depends on where they are).
There's something about that cat too!
I dislike him imensily and wouldn't be surprised if he was ana animagus or some a such.

Phew...i'm tired!
i know this was A LOT of conspiracy but i told you i didn't trust this Draco, nor the cat. And with the obliviation and the weird, odd houred meeting i trusted him even less!
So there you go, this is my theory, tell me if i got too crazy!
;)

kisses

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Nov 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

SO nice to see this one updated!
=D

OH Dear!
i'm sure she did something really really stupid by blocking out that woman
Draco is gonna go crazy and the woman mmust be livid!

I loved the surprise he did for her!
=D
capturing his fiancee for a quick shag in her office and then taking her home for some much needed time together seems like the perfect way to finish work!

i'm really curious to know who was that snob woman, so please please please update soon!
;D
And thank you for posting this!


kisses

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jan 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

oh God!
At first i was s glad you had finally updated.
I simply love this fic.
But then it was hoorrible!!!
raco is sad and angry, then Ginny gets to be all wrong and do stupid things for nothing.
Then she screws him over when it comes to his company!
Se deserves to be left alone for some time to think about the things she's done on impulsse.
But at the same time...i really don't want her away from draco!!!
The poor thing is gonna cry her eyes out.
i think she should grovel after him.
Thn he should makeher suffer some more.
Finally he would find out there's somehing about her, like she was hormonal due to pregnancy or sth like that and he sould apologize to her in a very Malfoy-maner.


i just can't believe thye fought after so long without an update.
i'm sad.

Please tell me we have the next 2 or 3 chapters out soon.
I'm just going crazy here thinking about everything that could happen until then.


kisses

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jan 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

YAY!
thank you so much!!
I was so so happy when i saw you had posted another chapter so soon!
=DDD

Yes, it got me mad that Draco's being a complete jerk about it.
the fact that he didn't think of Ginny once since he woke up or before his date got me really angry.
but it was a great chapter.

i'm so happy Gin is pregnant!!!
although i really wish her family would leave her alone...sure, shield her a little and all, but really leave her alone.
the last thing she needs is for Draco to come look for her, be threathened away and they end up not meeting for a few long years[how Romeu and Juliet].

I thik Blaise SHOULD go out with ginny even if it's just in a more friendly "I'm sorry my pal was a jerk" sort of way.
And the papers should all talk about it.Getting Draco mad and possessive is the way to go!
He's too stupid to realize what he has until he has lost it, poor guy, i don't blame him is just the way he was raised...

Draco, listen to this:
Close the deal with Andromeda, go looking for Gin, find out she's pregnant, make her cry, apologize on your knees, try to kiss her, get slapped, make your story known, tell her you didn't partake in Andromeda's game[make sure Blase keeps tha one happy],get kicke out of her house.
Then you'll try to floo her, send her gifts, beautiful flower, love declarations, the whole thing.Really man, just suffer a lot, ok?
Then she'll be about 4 or 5 months pregnant and on your constant owls ask her about her cravings, the baby, her pains and all that. get her to talk to you at least once, if she tells you to back off after far too many atempts then you do that.
I know, it sounds insane.
But she'll start missing you and then she'll finally come around and go looking fo you then you can claim her and you can both admit your feelings, endure the rest of the pregnancy ad tehn get married.
Sure your mother will hat that for some time, but then she'll look into the miniature you[all D/G kids should start with miniature Draco, no Gin at all, especially if she's apart from him so whenever she looks at her baby she'll remember Draco] and she'll be putty in his little chubby hands.
Mke sure Gin is confident about her pregnant body, no wide hips and fat legs, just a beautiful glow, a rounded belly and enlarged,sensitive breasts.
Those woman who get pregnant and you can only tell if they turn sideways, because from the back she really doesn't show a thing.

Phew!
I kinda sweat it out of me.
but yeah, he should definately do smething along these lines, he just can't wait arund for her!

THank you so much for a wonderful, intriguin, full of twists chapter.
it was really great and so worth the wait from december to now!
~;^


kisses

Not a Fan of Diamonds by draconis major    (Reviews - 14)

Will Draco ever get Ginny in bed? He feels that they're ready, but our tomboyish beauty seems awfully attached to her pants. Or maybe she just likes driving him crazy...
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Humor, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 2208 | Read count: 1771 | Published: Jan 07, 2008 | Updated: Jan 07, 2008
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jul 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: HOW IT STARTED 1

OOOOOOO
this was great fun!
I can't wait t see the rest!
do update soon,yes?
and don't mind about tonning down the curses, they are perfectly fin for such a ginnny, and completely logical for Blaise, Pansy and Draco.

kisses

It Started With a Dress by greeneyes0419    (Reviews - 49)

“I know you,” she said softly. “I know that marriage is the last thing on your mind. I don’t want you thinking I’m dying for a sparkling diamond on my finger and happily ever after and all that.”

“Don’t you?” he asked simply.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 2276 | Read count: 5726 | Published: Mar 05, 2008 | Updated: Mar 05, 2008
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jul 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

BEAUTIFUL!!!
LOVED it!
THANK YOU for writing it!
=D

kisses

Halloween by jessica k malfoy    (Reviews - 35)

Draco isn't thrilled to be at a costume party his 6th year. He's got more on his mind than dressing up. But that all changes when he meets a mysterious girl.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: Holidays
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 3297 | Read count: 6052 | Published: Mar 23, 2008 | Updated: Mar 23, 2008
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jul 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Costumes

oh yeah, i'm hooked!
i'm completely and hopelessly your fan!
GREAT fic, as usual.
i wish there was more, or at least cookies showing what happens...hmmm....nope, definately i wish there was more.
He knows it's her, so he should make her give him a history class and show him all the other siblings(Death, Desire, Destiny, Despair, Destruction and Dream), and what she looks likes when she's interpreting each one of them.
Oh yeah, THAT would be fun!
=D

Hope this ilussion of mine happens!
;)

kisses

The Consequences of Boredom by greeneyes0419    (Reviews - 269)

Draco finds himself spending obscene amounts of time with Ginny Weasley, thanks to Blaise and his love for drama and hatred of boredom.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 11 | Word count: 23457 | Read count: 32506 | Published: Mar 26, 2008 | Updated: Jul 22, 2008
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jul 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

The sweetest, cuttest thing!
i love hthe way he can sense what she's feeling and know what she's thinking and worrying over
i also saw that you stopped writing this last year, could you please go back to writing and give us a nice ending?
it would be amazing to read more of it!
=D

kisses

Notes on Falling Out of Love by fallingskyes    (Reviews - 281)

It's hard to learn how to live without that one person you thought would be in your life forever. But Ginny Weasley had always been a quick study, and there are always certain grey-eyed boys to help speed up the learning process...
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Future AU
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 19 | Word count: 36178 | Read count: 99487 | Published: May 15, 2008 | Updated: Dec 16, 2010
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Aug 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Fly For So Long You Can No Longer Feel Your Arse.

OOOOOOOOOHHHH!
How beautiful!
*teary eyes*
next chapter is gonna be THE BEST!!!!
Will she go after him now, or wait a few days? What's gonna happen?
=O
OH! the drama!
Can't wait!

AMAZING CLIFF!!
Congratulations!
And thank you for posting it!
;)

kisses

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Aug 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Go Skinny-Dipping. Soak Up the Sun.

AAAAAWWWW!
3 bad things at once?
That's pure evil!

1st he doesn't have the guts to say that he loves her
2nd it will take longer to finish and it won't have a SUITING end!
=O
3rd, and worst of them all: it's gonna end soon!
We won't get t see them toether???
THAT'S SO AWFUL!!!
I was hoping for at least 25 or 30 chapters, just to see them together!
*pouting*
this is so sad!
i want them together!
Can't you please write like, 5 more chapters?
please?
pretty please with sugar on top?
*hopefull eyes*

kisses

Stepping Stones by Tamloid14    (Reviews - 24)

They say a journey begins with a single step. When Draco decides to adopt the child Ginny has been caring for, he places the first stepping stone on his and Ginny’s journey.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Luna Lovegood, Other Characters
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Future AU
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 9756 | Read count: 7590 | Published: May 27, 2008 | Updated: Jun 10, 2008
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jul 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Well that was wuite good but kinda disappointing
i was hoping for a grand fic, with at least 15 chapters, plus the epilogue
a really long first kiss, enlogated affair between the two, the Weasley meeting...
got the picture, right?
still, very good fic
congrats
=D

kisses

Friday Night at the Weasleys' by KateinVA    (Reviews - 42)

When Draco’s best friend marries into the Weasley family, he finds himself in the company of a certain ginger-haired lass with amazing regularity.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Future AU, Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 3068 | Read count: 5950 | Published: May 31, 2008 | Updated: May 31, 2008
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jul 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

so sweet and cute!
kinda fast but i love it!
=D
will there be cookies for this one?

i hope so!
=DD

kisses

Contractual Obligations by gidge_8    (Reviews - 751)

Selling herself into a marriage contract, Ginny finds herself playing a deadly game, ultimately pitting her husband against her lover and a father against his son. Many twists and turns, depth and evil characters - and a long story of sweet and true love.

New! Epilogue is up! Yes, I know, the story has been "complete" for a couple of years, but this ending has been partially written for a long time and it ties up some loose ends.

Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Lucius Malfoy, Other Characters
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Non-consensual sex, Sexual Violence
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 32 | Word count: 165632 | Read count: 101820 | Published: Sep 05, 2008 | Updated: Jan 05, 2014
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Aug 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Bella's Plan

Draco only gets better doesn't he?
It's truly amazing!
=)
I love it!
he's magnificent!
Congrats!

And thank you for posting it!
=D

kisses

Author's Response: LOL! Yes, he only gets better. If you like him now... well... let's just say chap 20 will make you very, very happy. Thanks sooooooo much!
Best wishes!!!
-G

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Sep 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Playing the game

this chapter was certainly...different
thinking of lucius this way must be hard, but you can always picture him as a much older Draco,except for the expressions dancing on his eyes, or hiding behind them
i hope we can see D/G soon, but i'm afraid this will only happen in 5 chapters or so
hopefully it will be worth the wait

kisses

Author's Response: Sounds like you have some reservations about this chap tho... I am very interested in your feedback, even if you didn't like it, so please don't worry about saying so. I felt that I was a bit out there with this chap, because I really try to keep it realistic, and the characters believable, but I needed to do some character development with Ginny, and set up for later stuff, and, of course, Bella demanded attention. If I missed, please do let me know! :)

Oh and the d/g goodness will be happening very quickly. And I totally promise it will be worth the wait. *runs off to write a smutty scene* :) Thanks very much!

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Sep 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Facing the Consequences

*runs off to write a smutty scene*
that certainly sounds promissing
As long as it's not bella in ginny's body
that was the part that got me frowning about this chapter, i mean i know Bella is sick and twisted and all that, by the way you got that part perfectly, but to get her on Ginny's body and have her at least snogging Draco just seems all too wrong for me

ginny's willingness towards Lucius was kinda strange from her point of view, but acceptable
i can't put my finger on what troubled me about this chapeter, i guess it was just the thought of Bella and Draco, so if that DIDN'T happen it would be much better!
=D
I can't take my mind out of imagining Draco and Ginny's reunion, preferabbly if they have time for themselves without Bella or Lucius runnning in on them

phew...ok, i just really wish it was possible to have a sweet rendez-vous between these 2
no worries, no nothing, an afternoon of love and sweetness and all that
;)
sorry if i ask too much

kisses

Author's Response: LOL!!! I promise that there will be NO Bella/Draco stuff. Just a crazy insinuation from crazy Bella. It was just a tease. And, no, you aren't asking too much. The plot will be moving forward next chapter. I think I'm done with the filler/background stuff for a bit. And thank you so much for sharing your thoughts. :)

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Sep 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Facing the Consequences

=D
Phew!
that's a relief!
You have a perfect Bella, the craziness and actions are just right!
I'm soooo looking forward to the next chapter now!
;D

kisses

Author's Response: Thank you Hon! :D

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Sep 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Into the Fire

OH!
I'm so happy it worked!
Oh!
I'm so so glad!
I was terribly afraid that it wouldn't.
I was so sure something was gonna go wrong, and then Barnabas died(or is hopefully alive thanks to the elves)
and i was so so sure he was gonna get caught!
Thank you for making this work
i'm so relieved!
I was feeling sick just thinking about it NOT working.
so thank you for making it work, and for making everything ok, at least for now
please no more complicated chapters where things get awful
Let Bella have Lucius and let their madness stay well together until both kill each other or something, but allow Draco and Ginny at the very least a weekend together, just the 2 of them

Bautiful chapter, i'm expecting the next to be even better!
=D

kisses

Author's Response: LOL. Thanks you again, Hon. The tone of the story will be a little different from here on. I'm very much looking forward to putting the finishing touches on them. I think you will enjoy it a lot. *hugs!*

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Sep 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Facing the Consequences

OH that's such a relief!
I was so worried something bad would happen and they would be separated or she wuld lose the baby
now my only concern is when is the next chapter being posted!
=D
Thank you so very very much!

kisses

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Oct 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Out of the Ashes (part 1)

=D
it was beautiful!
totally worth the wait!
I oved it!
Congratulations!
=D

kisses

Author's Response: Oh thank goodness you liked it. I went over it and over it... and then it went to beta and I went over it twice more. the passionate stuff is my weakest area, and you have no idea how much I work to get it seeming right. Thanks so much.

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Oct 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Facing the Consequences

Well you did a great job, as an author and as an actress!
it seemed to flow erfectly like you had seen or lived it and then just had to put it into words!
It was great and i loved it very much!
Congratulations, or in this case, double congratulations.
it was amazing and seemed effortless
;)

kisses

Author's Response: Actress? LOL. I do try to really think about what the characters are feeling in every scene, so that I'm relaying their emotions as accurately as possible. I think I tend to focus on the emotions and passion because, basically, I'm too shy to write real smut... lol. I will tell you that many of Draco's reactions are inspired by my husband, who is absolutely wonderful. I'm glad it seemed effortless. I can assure you, it wasn't easy to write (just ask my alpha readers who read the first draft ) :)
Thank you so much for your lovely comments! As always, they are greatly appreciated.
Best wishes!
-G