She thought that her writing was the thing most likely to help her be noticed as herself.Category: Completed Short Stories
My first time reading this fic and I absolutely adored it. I'll read others and leave more detailed reviews.
A fic whose purpose is to eventually include every D/G cliche ever. Mary Sues and melodrama abound.Category: Works in Progress
Oh, I so want Ginny's outfit. I so love leather. Draco is super sexy in this and I love his come back, "Ginny Malfoy has a nice ring to it" that's exactly what I was thinking before I read the line.
What does a broken heart want? Ginny is trying to figure that out in a dysfunctional relationship with Draco Malfoy. Can he help her or is it just a game?Category: Works in Progress
You have now become my favorite DG author by far. Now I normally haunt ff.net, but as of late, there as been more lackluster reading than real gems.
So I said to myself, let me come here and I fell on one of your earlier fics, it was ranked amongst the longest. I loved the first few chapters so much, I made the decisin to just read all your fics and review, one by one.
YOu are a great writer, and I feel I should take the time ou to write a review of how great the writing was---since you took the time to write it.
The characterization was superb. Completely realistic, and in tune with the characters, the moment in the bedroom where she spills the first truth to him. You can seee the change, actually sense the emotions through Draco's reaction.
Breathtaking doesn't even sum it. Great writing and yous hould plan on expecting a review for every chapter of every work.
I hope you continue to write.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I just happened to check for reviews on older fics, and I read yours and it has made my day. This is one of my favorite fics, but not a lot of people seem to find it, or care for it as much as the others. Thank you again.
Ginny catches Harry with another woman. What will she do for revenge?Category: Works in Progress
Oh, pooh she had already lain with that waste of air. But now she has Drake and all is right in the world.
By the way---he needed to be castrated. Okay, maybe that was too harsh. He needs to be beaten to a pulp that Harry.
Any chance of Blaise and Luna, I wonder?!
Author's Response: Harry is a bit of a putz in this fic, but she does end up with Draco, so I can forgive him. Sorry, there will be no B/L in this one. Thanks for the review.
Ginny and Draco argue over a misunderstanding. Half the fun of arguing is making up.Category: Completed Short Stories
Great job. Sexy, sweet, romantic, funny, and quirky. Again, true to form, we have a rather defensive Draco which makes sense. Things like this are his department and when that's taken out of his hand, on top of the fact he found Ginny to be someone he trusts---well he's a bit irate.
I love your Ginny. This is the Ginny that should be in the films and is implied too in the books. A Ginny with balls, who's not afraid to say what's on her mind let alone afraid of a person.
Lastly someone who has stood up to and can stand up to Draco. He need her balance that's for sure, and it's established in canon she can put him in his place.
I liked how you showed that here. I like the ending of course, a bit of smut, lots of kissing and declarations of love is always a good thing.
AGain great work and you've got a new fan!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I love a Ginny who kicks butt, and I particularly like it when she kicks Dracos.
Draco refuses to talk about their future. Ginny tries to use Harry to make him jealous. Harry has his own agenda.Category: Completed Short Stories
Hmmmm, I don't know. I liked the fic thoroughly until towards the end when Malfoy sort of proposed to Ginny publicly. I realize Ginny wanted them to be public, but at the same time it didn't seem very Draco like.
The proposal seemed like something he'd do in private. I do however liked the emotion from Ginny/Draco. Great stuff there and plenty of food for thought. I wasn't partial to the manipulation idea, but it wasn't blown out of hand---with plenty of drama. It was well balanced and light.
Good Stuff here.
Author's Response: Thank you. I wanted him to seem a bit desperate.
Ginny asks Draco to tell her what she wants to hear. If she believes what he says, does she have anyone to blame but herself? Is it possible he was telling the truth?Category: Completed Short Stories
Nice and cool. I liked how you threw in Blaise and Pansy. I'm a Blaise and Luna fanatic, but when I get Blaise in anyway shape or form, I'm excited.
Anyway this was a cute read, and of course I loved the characterization a great deal, although for some reason I would love to get a descrpitive look at Ginny and Draco.
How do you model them? What do you see in your minds eye, it would just help me a bit more...Anyway this again was a cute story.
I can't wait for another great read.
Author's Response: Thank you. I am bad at just putting dialogue out there without much description. Dialogue is just easier for me.
Ginny has a love/hate relationship with Draco. Is there any hope that he will ever treat her with respect, or is she just setting herself up for a fall?Category: Completed Short Stories
I adored this one. Really heartfelt, although something did come to mind, it was when Ginny said.."could you be more like my family" ---I wondered if she wanted Draco to change.
He's unfortunately a product of his environment, but the positive thing is that being human he can pick up on different characteristics, but that doesn't mean his nature would.
I would like to see a fic where Draco or Ginny makes the comment of them having affection for the other without a need for change. Without it taking work, because it was the way the person was before and during the relationship which had them fall in love.
Changing would then lead to a new person all together. Anyway, it's a great read once again.
Author's Response: Thank you for the thoughtful review. I agree that you can\'t expect someone to change. However, after a while we all try to change our significant other. When we dated, I didn\'t know that my husband hung his washrag on top of his towel which made the towel wet. This annoyed the hell out of me, and I sought to change him. I\'m sure he\'s changed me in small ways as well. No one is perfect.
The war rages on. People find comfort where they can.Category: Completed Short Stories
Ooh, this one ended too quick. So much room to expand on this love story. But it was short and sweet, and I liked it. Plus I'd love to learn more about those enchanted rings. Are they really the Malfoy legacy or the Black? I'd love to find out more on the Malfoys.
VB
Author's Response: Thanl you for the review. I\'m not sure that I\'m gonig to add to the story at this time, but you never know what plot bunnies will sneak up on my while I sleep.
Harry comes home, and Ginny finds she has to leave.Category: Completed Short Stories
Fantastic read!! Of course I'm one of the few, who likes to think that Ginny wasted her time let alone her virginity on that turd. But alas, we can't have everything.
Thank you Draco for coming to her defense and I loved to read this. Plus I would like to see the turn out of the baby room if you don't mind.
Thanks. VB