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Ashen by Ludi New!   (Reviews - 149)


Malfoy was curious. Curious and angry. “So, what do you want from me, Weasley?”

It was the admission of his defeat. Ginny felt the taste of victory - and it was bitter.

“I want influence. I want protection. I want safety.” She stopped, giving him time to assimilate her words, before she played her final card. "I want your name. " When saying the last sentence, however, she could not help the blush that spread across her face.

Malfoy's countenance changed several times in a very short time. Annoyance turned into wariness, then into confusion, and finally, when he really understood what Ginny had implied, his face showed only a profound horror.

I want your name.

I want a marriage.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Blood, Graphic Violence
Completed: No
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 33 | Word count: 236224 | Read count: 8719 | Published: Jul 09, 2020 | Updated: May 05, 2024
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Reviewer: NTA123 Signed
Date: Oct 22, 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Coup de grĂ¢ce

P.S. please update soon. I dying :"(

Author's Response: Don't you dare die o me! There's still a lot of history for you to read, haha Fear not, I'm finishing writing the next one, I hope to post it soon enough. See ya soon, my dear.

Reviewer: NTA123 Signed
Date: Sep 13, 2020 Title: Chapter 6: The Beginning of the End

For plot purposes, author has to put such turns. And I thoroughly respect that.
Just a small request. PLEASE GINNY SHOULD NOT GET PREGNANT...PLEASE :'(

Author's Response: Oh dear! Please forgive me. But ir order to do this, I needed three things: - get Lucius out of the way. - get Harry out of the way. - Ginny must be pregnant. The third point is already in motion. There are few things more ruthless than an obstinate mother protecting her child at all costs. We'll see it in Ginny, in Narcissa, maybe in Molly. It's this child who will move the story forward because it's through it that Ginny will cross moral and social barriers that, under normal conditions, she would never cross. Hope you can understand me.

Reviewer: NTA123 Signed
Date: Sep 13, 2020 Title: Chapter 6: The Beginning of the End

Oh and I want to thank you that you did not describe HG "nightly activities" in details here.
Goodness...how old am I?! "Nightly activities"?! Really???
Anyway, as long as Draco and Ginny ends up together and maybe...you know...have children...and also maybe if you show the journey to parenthood and they fall deeply in love during that journey...I don't know...just an imagination...
Yeah. I should not now. It's getting awkward.

Author's Response: hahaha, I would NEVER describe the "nightly activities" between Harry and Ginny. I've already struggled doing that with Draco and Ginny, I wouldn't waste my words on a ship that isn't mine = P And you can put your mind at ease. I'm a BIG fan of happy ends. Fear not, they'll have a hell of a journey and will fall deeply in love. It'll only take a while, haha Bear with me, dear. Hope you keep enjoying reading it.

Reviewer: NTA123 Signed
Date: Jul 10, 2021 Title: Chapter 19: The Reality is the Worst Prison

Hey!
Ginny escaped and I do not know why I feel it is not the first and last time I will get to see Anne.

Author's Response: hohoho, because it's not! I became fond of her, haha She wont be overly important, but I guess I appreciate what she represents.

Reviewer: NTA123 Signed
Date: Jul 10, 2021 Title: Chapter 19: The Reality is the Worst Prison

The old lady seems nice.
Ginny would be keeping the baby. There was NO shock there.
I am glad she was able to make the potion.

Author's Response: yes, I agree it shouldn't come as a surprise. I can't imagine Ginny not wanting her baby (of course, she had EVERY right to do so), but I don't think it would do her character justice. I believe family means everything to Ginny - and also to Draco, in a different way. I'm so excited to keep writing them!

Reviewer: NTA123 Signed
Date: Jul 10, 2021 Title: Chapter 19: The Reality is the Worst Prison

Ginny the genius wants to hide her pregnancy from Draco...
And how is she gonna hide it?! Okay, may be for few early months but then?
Draco will be around her and James. Now, even more after she escaped prison and made potions.
*Don't care about Ron. I actually rolled my eyes while reading the part Ginny and Anne were talking about Hermione*

Author's Response: Yes, she's almost a Hercule Poirot haha. Hiding the pregnancy from Draco is not a smart move at all, but as I like to think, none of them is perfect. We tend to be a bit dumb when we're in stressful situations, haha But I guarantee you that she will have a lot of doubts about it - tell or not tell. Ohhh, how much hurt in this little heart of yours regarding Ron and Hermione, hahaha. I can't judge, really. Sometimes I feel the same while writing them. =) I just posted another chapter and I hope you enjoy it. Your comments are wonderful and I appreciate them A LOT Thank you, my dear

Reviewer: NTA123 Signed
Date: Aug 20, 2020 Title: Chapter 4: The Battle of Hogwarts

Alright, we are in the battle now and everyone else seems to be taking on their canon roles(you know what I mean). But is it for now? Cuz Ginny is in a bad accident. I really liked that you have more or less set the characters in places where they have been in the actual book or atleast similar situation in this context. It makes easier for me to deduce. Like for example, in many stories, the characters change their position or action. Which is fine, cuz these are fanfictions. But the problem occurs when one particular action was done or involved with 2 or more people in the original story. One of these character will do something different in a ff, then I read and wonder how the course of action is changed for those other characters. It's like a chain. I should stop wondering so much!
Anyway, the change, or main point stays on Ginny and it makes me focus more on the plot progress. So yay!
Now I am curious if Draco's action will be different in the ROR and how much the outcome will be altered cuz of that...
Thank you for updating! Shall be looking forward to both stories updates!

Author's Response: Hello! There's no such thing like 'wondering too much' hehe. It's the best part! Until the very end of the next chapter, the characters will limit themselves to what they did at the Battle of Hogwarts (after that, it'll be anoooother universe that I'm really excited to write about). It means, for example, that the results of the Room of Requirement will remain the same. And, as something to think about, we also don't know for sure what happens to Draco after Harry saves him and they leave the Room of Requirement. -wink- HOWEVER, I used a subterfuge here (I have no shame, I admit). We see the books through Harry's eyes. Then we don't know for sure what happened to Ginny, for instance. I took advantage of this to have a poetic license and make up a whole scenario where SHE is our leading actress. Especially because she's a much more fun character, just between you and me. I don't even have to say how much I like your comments, right? They always make me think and question myself if I'm on the right track. I can't thank you enough! I hope you continue to enjoy reading in the same proportion I'm enjoying writing it.

Reviewer: NTA123 Signed
Date: May 13, 2021 Title: Chapter 17: Occlumency

Stunned

Author's Response: I love your reactions, haha, I really do.

Author's Response: I love your reactions, haha, I really do.

Reviewer: NTA123 Signed
Date: May 13, 2021 Title: Chapter 17: Occlumency

NO ONE has the right to judge Ginny. Not her family, her friends, the good side, ANYONE.
Ron is a great friend but he has failed as a brother and an uncle.
No matter how bad things are, just telling Ginny that Harry is alive, would have been okay.
No excuse here!
Even as a writer if you want to present a side for the Trio, I will not agree with you.
I am officially done with the trio.

Author's Response: I totally understand you, I swear. And that was my intention, to show the golden trio is also formed by humans and that they will make mistakes and screw things up. But don't be upset. Think that it was Ron and Hermione's actions (and later Harry's, I suppose) that will make Ginny get even closer to Draco. And you're right too! No one has the right to judge Ginny! Maybe Draco, who was her victim, but she did her best with the information she had at the time.

Reviewer: NTA123 Signed
Date: May 13, 2021 Title: Chapter 17: Occlumency

I am sorry for the last review.
They just only had to tell Ginny and made the strongest vow. That's it. I mean they are not like regular humans! They would be compelled to keep it a secret.

Author's Response: No reason to be sorry, my dear. I love your comments. In my mind, the reason they didn't tell Ginny anything isn't linked to the fact that she wouldn't have kept the secret Harry was alive. I'm pretty sure she would, as Ginny is extremely reliable and loyal. I think Ron and Hermione's decision has more to do with the fact that they know - as we do - that Ginny would wait for Harry as long as it was necessary. And what chance of happiness and safety would she have, being stuck with someone who might never wake up again? Certainly, it wasn't their decision to make and they were extremely pretentious and sneaky, like good martyrs they are. But, when they weren't in the books, right? Especially Ron (and Harry himself)

Reviewer: NTA123 Signed
Date: May 13, 2021 Title: Chapter 17: Occlumency

The chemistry is shifting between our most favourite couple.
I want Draco and James to interact more. Their meetings are cute and funny in a weird way XD

* Personal wish: I want James to support Draco or like him more, or just want him as his dad when Harry will be back which he'll be obviously. (from whichever hell-hole he is in).

Author's Response: Indeed, it is! Things are warming up! They started to acknowledge their connection, even it's solely based on lust right now. (or so they think) How could I deny a wish of yours? There will be more interactions between Draco and James, I promise. Maybe it will take a little longer because I need to set up a new development (you'll see soon in the next chapter)

Reviewer: NTA123 Signed
Date: May 13, 2021 Title: Chapter 17: Occlumency

Btw Draco likes feet? Oh...okay...
*no kink shaming here though.*

Author's Response: Who would have guessed that Draco would've a special fondness for the feet section on OnlyFans, hahaha One more time, tahnk you for your time and your disposition to share your thoughts. They are very dear to me. Hope you can be a little happier with the fact that the next chapter is already coming See ya soon, my dear

Reviewer: NTA123 Signed
Date: Dec 17, 2021 Title: Chapter 25: Romania

I like Mirela. New ship I guess? ;)
Woah Ginny is so impulsive!! But then again she would not be Ginny XD

Author's Response: Hello! I quite like Mirela as well! I tend to enjoy feisty characters, haha. Like Ginny herself! The most reckless person we love!

Reviewer: NTA123 Signed
Date: Dec 17, 2021 Title: Chapter 25: Romania

That was a close call. It was scary and I was really tensed.
I miss James though.

Author's Response: You know what? I miss him as well. But unfortunately, he won't appear in the next one too. But for a good reason! Next installment is ALL Draco and Ginny! Cannot wait for you to read it!

Reviewer: NTA123 Signed
Date: Dec 17, 2021 Title: Chapter 25: Romania

I wonder if Draco would have hurt Charlie if Ginny had not come in between? I know he was taunting and all and was in "attacking mode" (I don't know that it's called lol) but would he have harmed Charlie?
Will Ginny ask him? I mean it should be very, very difficult, Okay, impossible (atleast for me) for someone to be romantically involved with a guy who have intended to kill your brother (a really great brother).

Author's Response: hahahaha, sorry but I laughed at the 'really great brother'. I think I would be pissed even if my brother was a jerk. =P And you are right, it would be impossible for Ginny to love someone who had hurt her family so deeply. That's why I THINK Draco wouldn't cause Charlie any major problem. Maybe we can explore it in the future? We'll have to wait and see.

Reviewer: NTA123 Signed
Date: Dec 17, 2021 Title: Chapter 25: Romania

FINALLY!!!!!! LAST CHAPTER!!!!
She is gonna tell to Draco in next chapter!! YES!!
I mean if he will look at her he should be able to tell? She is around 6/7 months pregnant, right? If I have done the calculation right?

Author's Response: FINALLY INDEED! And it's almost ready! I'm so exicted to share it! Yes, six months pregnant. It's about time!

Reviewer: NTA123 Signed
Date: Dec 17, 2021 Title: Chapter 25: Romania

Is Ginny gonna have a baby shower? * acting cute awkwardly* *intense cringe* *sorry* '_'

Author's Response: hmmm, never thought about it, in fact. Maybe not a baby shower since she's away from family, but we can adapt! It gave me ideas for the next next chapter! I want to write stuff less heavy! Let's see what I can come up with! Thank you for your ever present comments! See ya very soon!

Reviewer: NTA123 Signed
Date: May 11, 2022 Title: Chapter 27: Interlude

Hi!!
I missed this last update! Too many things happend in life. Took me long enough.
Anyway, JAMES IS SO CUTE.
He is such a sweet child. I loved Draco and him together. We are getting there slowly.
Draco's inner thoughts about their baby was real as well as touching.

Author's Response: Oh, I missed you hahaha I really like your comments. Oh, something weird has happened! Part of the last chapter was not published! I dont know why!And it was a part with more Draco/James interaction, I'm so frustrated haha. As soon as the new chapter is on, please go back to the previous one to catch up! Thank you, my dear

Reviewer: NTA123 Signed
Date: May 11, 2022 Title: Chapter 27: Interlude

But...Goyle had to come and left a foul taste.
Is he planning something evil? Will Astoria join hand with him?
I am not liking this. Though actually loving the plotline!

Author's Response: Indeed! I believe Goyle is the real villain of this story - and I like it, as someone so obtuse and selfish can still represent danger and bad things. He is planning, yes. Just did not realise it hahaha. About AStoria... She is not a bad person, but she will indeed give him a hint - even unintentionally.

Reviewer: NTA123 Signed
Date: May 11, 2022 Title: Chapter 27: Interlude

P.S. I hope you are well and planning to continue. I am sorry I took such a long time to read this chapter! But I am back and I REALLY REALLY REALLY hope you will be too!
Take care!

Author's Response: I AM BACK hahahaha I'm planning to continue, yes, but will depends heavily on feedback because, let's face it, life is too demanding and we have to prioritise things Anyways, the next one is almost here! Hope you can enjoy it!

Reviewer: NTA123 Signed
Date: Jul 02, 2022 Title: Chapter 27: Interlude

JAMES!!!!!!
The step father-son duo have a different chemistry. It is sweet, funny and very logical.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you could go back and read the missing part of the previous chapter! I looooove writing interactions between Draco and Ginny! Hope you continue enjoying!

Reviewer: NTA123 Signed
Date: Jul 02, 2022 Title: Chapter 28: Rebirth

Hey, I don't know how you want to show
James-Harry relationships in the future. (I'm guessing Harry will wake up...?)
* personal opinion and wish* I want Draco and James to have a relationship that James and Harry could NEVER have.
I mean no matter how epic father-son the Potters may be, James and Draco should always have something really unique.

Author's Response: I agree with you. Yeah, James-Harry will have a relationship, it's inevitable and it's fair with Harry. He deserves to have this kind of love. But love is not excludent, right? James will love Draco as well and their relationship will definitely be something special and unique!

Reviewer: NTA123 Signed
Date: Jul 02, 2022 Title: Chapter 27: Interlude

Obviously Draco and James would never be the idealistic father-son!! I mean I myself do not want that! But their connection can be like they may bicker, even insult. But James would always get defensive when someone says smth bad about Draco. Definitely NOT when he is there.
And would always look for him in trouble??

Reviewer: NTA123 Signed
Date: Jul 02, 2022 Title: Chapter 28: Rebirth

I would love them to move in together!
And I also wonder how Draco will react if he ever has a daughter?! SO CUTE!!! *heart eyes*

Author's Response: Ohhh, you're giving me ideas! ;) How would Draco react to a little girl? Interesting indeed...

Reviewer: NTA123 Signed
Date: Jul 02, 2022 Title: Chapter 27: Interlude

And Draco may look annoyed but he lets him get away with anything. Also would do anything to get him out of trouble.