I really loved reading this story. I felt the characters were written in a way that was both original and refreshing. The whole idea about Moody having his own department was both genuis and truly unique. I'm looking forward to the sequel ;)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your thoughtful review!! This story was a stretch for me, based on the prompt I was given, and it's wonderful to know that the emotion came through. Moody is totally one of my favorite characters in the original series.
Best wishes!
-G

Poor Harry I feel just awful for him, even though he shouldn't have acted like a coward. It also made me feel awful for Draco, what a terrible position to be put in. I really liked the conversation Ron had with Draco, I think it was interesting, unique and very well written. Most authors make Ron become opposed to the relationship immediately, so I really liked that you wrote Ron in a way that respected Ginny's decision enough to not intervene. I also appreciated how Ginny and Harry's relationship was explained, in my opinion thats why they dont work out either (the epilogue of Deathly Hallows was optional for me lol). Overall i'm really enjoying this story and have nothing but praise for it. Great job! :)

oh, btw I was initially thinking that Harry wasn't interested in Ginny anymore bcuz he was interested in someone else, guess who I had assumed he was interested in? Pansy! Lol i'm kind of happy to see she was in this chapter. Although I dont expect any of my theories to come true, it was cool lol.

Pretty good stuff. I just feel bad Ginny's bubble has been burst before Astoria's. I was wondering how the children situation would work out with their switch and all. I mean I knew that the wives would have to deal with falling for the other's husbands, but what will happen to the kids? I'm assuming the wives will want to be with their respective children, but it wouldn't be fair to take them away from their fathers, it's an intriguing plot you have here :) I also like the way you've written Scorpius, it's definitely refreshing I can see both his parents personalities reflected on him. I loved the Yoko reference, I think it fits even tho it's considered muggle music :D

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you like Scorpius and the Yoko reference, but I'm not going to comment on the rest because I don't want to give anything away. Don't worry; you will receive answers, all in due time. :)

I think the pace that you're going at is just fine. You're keeping the audience at the edge of our seats which is a good thing. I don't really like a predictable story, and I really like that their initial disposition has developed but is still the main focus of this story. I think the plot has been developing nicely and I love the banter between the two, very believable :) keep up the good work and I'll be around for the next chapter :)

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and commenting! I hope to keep your interest going forward.

FANTASTIC! anxiously awaiting the sequel ;)

Btw I think you did a good job of keeping them in character. Especially liked that he wasn't trying to hide the dark mark when he was with her.

I think your story is off to a great start. Maybe its just me but I'm concerned with Ginny focusing only on capturing Draco. If she's a bounty hunter shouldn't she be trying to catch the lesser criminals in the mean time while she gets her game plan to capture draco ready? Other than that I liked the way Draco was introduced and threw her off her game, I think it showed that she may have gone about this situation the wrong way. update soon I'd love to keep reading to see how this turns out :)

Author's Response: Oh, definitely be concerned about Ginny - I mean for her to have no idea what she is doing - but remember that she has got a whole file of Seamus's cases to work on, so that will come later. I uploaded chapter four, so hopefully it will be posted soon! :)

Very sweet story. Enjoyed reading it very much, great job :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that you liked it.