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Ashen by Ludi New!   (Reviews - 149)


Malfoy was curious. Curious and angry. “So, what do you want from me, Weasley?”

It was the admission of his defeat. Ginny felt the taste of victory - and it was bitter.

“I want influence. I want protection. I want safety.” She stopped, giving him time to assimilate her words, before she played her final card. "I want your name. " When saying the last sentence, however, she could not help the blush that spread across her face.

Malfoy's countenance changed several times in a very short time. Annoyance turned into wariness, then into confusion, and finally, when he really understood what Ginny had implied, his face showed only a profound horror.

I want your name.

I want a marriage.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Blood, Graphic Violence
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 32 | Word count: 229136 | Read count: 8685 | Published: Jul 09, 2020 | Updated: Apr 13, 2024
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Reviewer: MVC Signed
Date: Dec 06, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Life Goes On

I'm quite intrigued by the story, I really liked your approach of developing the narrative and background of the world setting and premise before giving into de Drinny part. I also enjoyed that you are using some of the HP canons but adding your own twists and spins on it. I Feel that because of the way you are constructing the story consequently Dracos's and Ginny's relationship it's going to blossom more organically. I enjoyed the story so far and can't wait to read more of it.
PS. Sorry if my writing it's faulty, confusing, or not so eloquent; English it's not my first language.

Author's Response: Hello, dear! Thank you SO much for your words. I'm happy to know you feel so moved by this story. I'm a great paladine of the canon and I intend to stick to it as much as I can, haha. I suppose it will accompany me until the very end of this story. Yes, ORGANIC is the word I'd use to describe this story. I really appreciate things flowing naturally and it includes the DG part, of course. Let me tell you a secret: English isn't my native language as well. I struggle with it A LOT. For that, don't be sorry nor feel ashamed by your english (it's VERY good in my point of view). I'm looking forward to hearing from you in the next installments. See ya soon, darling.