For all their acidic wit, they were pathetic when it came to real talking...Category: Completed Short Stories
Damn lady - you're good. That was lovely. Hot and sweet and a little sad and hopeful and funny all in one. Yay!!!
Author's Response: Hee, thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!
Harry Potter defeats Lord Voldemort, and the wizarding world rejoices. Ginny Weasley's hopes and dreams seem to come true, at last; Draco Malfoy's end in Azkaban prison. But there is more to life than the obvious choices, and as Ginny and Draco struggle to redefine themselves in a post-war world, a chance encounter leads to more than either of them could ever have imagined...Category: Long and Completed
Wow - that was great! What a great premise, I love the characters. Very real, great dialogue and I can totally see Ron and Hermione being like that/ Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you, I\'m happy you thought it was realistic. More to come very soon! :-)
Sequel to Break in the sun (till the sun breaks down). For a few blissful hours, the differences between them did not matter. But as Draco and Ginny struggle with their budding relationship, they must soon discover that many things separate them still - family, friends and society as well as their own explosive tempers. The future they want for themselves comes at a price, and reconciling what they each want out of life is a challenge that might just break them apart...Category: Works in Progress
I haven't reviewed in ages but wanted to say that I am still loving this story. What stuck out to me in this chapter was Draco's thoughts and reactions - very realistic for the character you've developed. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you, glad you still like it :) Draco has come a long way (well, Ginny too, but he even more so, I think) so I sometimes worry about him becoming ooc. Happy to hear you think his behaviour is consistent and realistic :) Thanks!
Everyone makes mistakes. Some people are just better at escaping the consequences- through three centuries at least.Category: Works in Progress
Long live the king.
Im dead tired so this review won't be long but I wanted to say that I am really enjoying this. Like Malfoy's characterization and I look forward to more.
Fantastic! One of my pet peeves is ill written fan fic where Draco says something nasty to Ginny, then she replies back with "F you Malfoy, I've dyed my hair blonde and now I'm fabulous" and then Draco says "when did the girl Weasley grow a backbone". My point? Here you've actually shown us how Draco would come to see how Ginny has matured and realistically show him getting closer to her slowly. I really liked it and thought the characters were well done.
Written for Challenge 2 (Persuasion) at the DG.com Forums. Draco and Ginny are both pretty darn good at persuasion, but just who is persuading who?Category: Completed Short Stories
Fabulous! Would love to read about the party itself. I've always had a soft spot for Pansy - I think she could turn into an okay girl yet.
Author's Response: I might have to write that one of these days! Thanks for taking the time to review! ~Ves
Draco is happy with this life.Category: Completed Short Stories
Oh poor Draco! But well done. That was great!
Bill discovers his little sister is in a spot more trouble than he ever imagined.Category: Works in Progress
Oooh - how intriguing! A great start. I so don't want them to be involved in anything bad. Looking forward to more.
P.S. I think its great you're taking a break from the Tangled Web series. Its a great series but lovely to see your creative muse inspired.
Author's Response: You\'ll just have to wait and see how bad it will be for the dynamic duo :)
Oh Draco - what have you done?!?!? This is great - its nice to see their viewpoint which explains why they got into this mess. Its obvious that Draco loves Ginny but maybe going back to England is what they need? I hope BIll can help them!
Author's Response: Going back to England isn\'t an option for Draco, or at least that is what he believes.
WarPhotographer!Draco. In khaki and stubble.Category: Completed Short Stories
Oooh - thats interesting. I hope that's not all - it feels like there needs to be more. But very evocative.
How far is love willing to reach just to be felt? And which is the greater offering upon its altar: dying for it or living for it? He would know. He lived the miracle.Category: Works in Progress
Ooooh, I'm intrigued. This is very promising and I'd like to know more!
After eight years in France, Ginny finds herself a stranger in her own family. When she returns to Britain, she goes to work as a barrister. And that was how she ended up defending Draco Malfoy against accusations that he murdered Harry Potter.Category: Works in Progress
Eeee - great start! I love your stories and can't wait to read more.
Non-connected drabbles from varied D/G prompts, which aren't long enough to post separately.Category: Completed Short Stories
The first one is sooooo sweet it almost hurts my teeth. But its all good! :) I like it - it really evokes a mood.
When Ginny is compelled to do her duty for the Order she gets much more than she ever bargained for.Category: Works in Progress
Oooh so lovely! Great idea to have Draco drugged up on Veritaserum. I'm not sure I like the whole "oh Ginny - its so unsafe you must stay here". It felt patronizing to me - everyone else can risk their lives but Ginny needs to be tucked away because she's an ickle girl? FWIW that was my feeling but I really like this - well written (as always!).
Author's Response: Ginny being locked away for her safety is patronizing, and she\'s quite unhappy about her situation. She wants to get out there to join her family and fight the good fight, but she does have a duty to do.
Ginny Weasley was Draco's ticket out - his way of reaching Dumbledore, getting the Malfoy fortune that he deserved, and leaving the war firmly behind him. Unfortunately, fate had other plans for both of them.Category: Works in Progress
Hee hee. I read this ages ago (a link from your blog?) and really enjoyed it then. Its very lighthearted but still well written. Very nice distraction.
Who knew happily-ever-after could have an expiration date? New beginnings are hard, but when they happen in the middle of your life, they're infinitely more so.Category: Works in Progress
Woohoo!! Love it. Its such an interesting setting for a story because its the idea that no one follows - what if everything in DH did happen. I love the idea that Ginny can find love even after 3 kids. :)
Loved this becuase it was such a cool glimpse into Draco's world. I forget that he is a dad too. The characterisation was great!
One chance encounter changes the direction of two lives. Years later, their lives collide again, and the past begins to haunt, as it so often does. [written for the Spring 2007 D/G Fic Exchange]Category: Long and Completed
Wow! I did not see that coming. Amazing as usual. I just don't know how Ginny would ever be able to forgive Draco.... Hmmm, I look forward to future installments.
A chance encounter leads to very unexpected beginnings. Note: Written long before DH came out.Category: Completed Short Stories
So sweet! I really liked it. I'm a sucker for Draco is impoverished and needs to learn humility stories. That put a smile on my face.
Author's Response: I\'m glad you liked the story. It was fun writing Draco in a more humble stance. :D
Ginny wants revenge on Harry for jilting her at the altar (right?) and Draco simply wants to make the Boy Who Lived suffer as much as possible. When the two come together for a rather shady deal what could possibly go wrong? What couldn't?!Category: Works in Progress
Love it! There is always an element of insanity when setting up a DG plot but this was feels very plausible. Ginny is a real free spirit in this - i look forward to more.
Author's Response: AW, you think it\'s plausible?! Well, I\'m glad, because I didn\'t want it to seem too \"gosh, look, Draco happens to be in the right place at the right time and he\'s all compassionate and understanding and sensitive and ready to take on a comitted relationship\". Good to know :) thanks for your review!
This is great! You have a unique writing style and i like how you tell the story. Watch out for some of the longer sentences and its easy to lose the meaning and have to re-read it to follow along. But i really like this, especially the humour. Also the way you started and ended it with the same line was great!
Author's Response: wow, gee, thanks!!! This is definitely the most constructive and helpful reivew I\'ve recieved so far! And it actually might help my writing! Thank you :)
Ginny shows up to Draco's residence claiming she is done with their years-long prank war and would like to call a truce. Secretly, she has no intention of allowing Draco to get away with his most recent prank and is determined to get even through good old fashioned blackmail. Draco, on the other hand, has plans of his own.Category: Completed Short Stories
Fabulous! I always love the interplay between Draco and Ginny and you've captured their history here without having to spend pages on it. Also the attraction between the two was very evident and very hot!
Five witches agree to an unusual wager: to be the last in their group to marry.Category: Works in Progress
What a great start! What a great idea and I fully approve of using canon as you see fit - can you make TOnks and Lupin be alive too please? Maybe they (and Colin) were all under the same curse that they thought they were dead for 3 hours. :)
Author's Response: I always worry just a bit that there are some who get very wrapped up in canoninity (yup I totally invented that :P) of stories and have gotten reviews pointing out the smallest of details that aren't totally compliant so I figured at least pointing it out will let people know that I am aware that I've fudged a bit on those little details. If I find a use for Tonks and Lupin in all this, I will insert them - in my mind they are all alive and well in any case. :D
Oh I love it! I've always liked Pansy in fanfiction (even though she's a right cow in the books). You've done a great job of moving the story forward several years in one chapter. Am interested to see how you put Draco with Ginny and how Pansy is going to feel about that.
In order for Draco to regain control of his assets after the war, he is required to marry. For Draco, this can mean only one witch - Pansy Parkinson. Who, you may ask is the Ministry liason for both Malfoy and Parkinson? Ginny Weasley.Category: Works in Progress
I always love your stories and this is a great beginning. I like draco and ron not being all over the top.
After frighteningly realistic dreams lead Ginny to France, she finds herself thrust into the middle of a war no one knows about, led by a man no one would have ever suspected. Can she save him from an unimaginable fate? Will she make it out of France alive?Category: Works in Progress
I am just loving this story. More people need to read it! I've been completely engrossed by it. Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I\'m glad you\'re enjoying it :)