Love is hard and Ginny and Draco have first hand experience that love can hurt.Category: Completed Short Stories
Aww, poor Ginny and Draco. Can't they just realise that they're meant to be together? Then everyone would be happy! This story has great potential and is full of raw emotion.
Just a bit of constructive criticism to make it even better: Watch for malapropism (the misuse of words), like when you use the word 'prevail' instead of 'avail'. Also, watch your sentence structure. Try reading your story out loud. I find that really helps my writing.
I hope to read more from you!
Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate your review and criticism. It really helps. Thanks! : )
Voldemort has been defeated and Harry and Draco have become reluctant friends. 'His Girl' features a lovesick Harry, a calm and collected Ron, a Hermione that drools over anything male and Slytherin, and a very sexually frustrated Ginny Weasley. When you throw in an after Quidditch party, an illicit love potion, and a couple of threesomes, you have a Hogwarts like you've never seen before! Book six is completely disregarded.Category: Long and Completed
What a great story! I really like light-hearted Hogwarts era stories and there aren't many of those now post-HBP! The characterizations, especially of the Slytherins, were really good and it was refreshing to see Ron okay with Ginny's relationship. You also made me actually like Pansy which is difficult to do. Fantastic!
Author's Response: Thanks. I like it when evil doesn\'t muck up a story sometimes... and I love Pansy. Just not for Draco!
20 Random things about Draco featuring the lovely Ginny, occasionally some other Weasley's, and even Scarhead himself. (with a cameo by two beautiful 'not pink haired' babies)Category: Completed Short Stories
That was surprisingly moving! From the title I was expecting a complete humour story but this had me really feeling for Draco. I love how you wove a narrative into something like a simple list. It shows just how talented you are. And I like Draco's taste in cars. ;)
Author's Response: well Thanks So much! ;) I read a thread on the forum where they were discussing what Draco\'s patronus would be and this just struck me when I thought of the silver car and his eyes... ;) Glad you liked! ;)