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Real name: Devon Bates
Registered: Oct 12, 2006
Membership status: Member

Reviews by devonlillie

Unforgiven by LadyRhiyana    (Reviews - 120)

10 years after the end of the war, Draco returns to England determined to reclaim his place. Unwittingly, Ginny becomes caught up in the affairs and intrigues of House Malfoy...
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Arthur Weasley, Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Molly Weasley, Other Characters
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Action, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 23 | Word count: 74541 | Read count: 122722 | Published: Dec 23, 2004 | Updated: Dec 23, 2004
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Reviewer: devonlillie Signed
Date: Dec 18, 2006 Title: Chapter 23: Aftermath

I'm speechless. This fanfiction has all the wonderful goodness of my favorite science fiction novels. Plus it has all my utter love for being Harry Potter fanfiction. I hesitate to even call it fanfiction, because this is so much more than that. It easily stands on it's own two feet.

In fact, if it wasn't a fanfiction I could see this as a published novel, and a published novel I would own.

Reviewer: devonlillie Signed
Date: Dec 18, 2006 Title: Chapter 23: Aftermath

I'm speechless. This fanfiction has all the wonderful goodness of my favorite science fiction novels. Plus it has all my utter love for being Harry Potter fanfiction. I hesitate to even call it fanfiction, because this is so much more than that. It easily stands on it's own two feet.

In fact, if it wasn't a fanfiction I could see this as a published novel, and a published novel I would own.

The Lush Life by Vesanmyn    (Reviews - 657)

A Vesica/Mynuet Collaboration. If Ginny had even the slightest inkling of what the day would bring, she probably would have called in sick. A disastrous press conference proved to be no match for the spin doctoring talents of Lush's chief and Ginny finds herself catapulted from being a lowly intern to the very eye of the storm, living a double life as a careerwitch and glamorous front woman for a racy new line. Throw in a few A-list events, a few dozen crises, an endless promotional tour with her new co-worker and the last person she wanted to spend time with, and a mystery waiting back home that neither of them may be able to solve….Every day's an adventure when you're living the Lush Life!
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Drama, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 13 | Word count: 27031 | Read count: 82297 | Published: Jan 05, 2005 | Updated: Apr 28, 2007
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Reviewer: devonlillie Signed
Date: Apr 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One – Narcissa’s Assets

Please finish this story for those of us who are going mad wondering what happened.


I'll send you chocolate chip cookies :)

Tantamount by Maleficent    (Reviews - 93)

Sex and men are never easy...
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Luna Lovegood, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 3 | Word count: 16825 | Read count: 14738 | Published: Feb 20, 2005 | Updated: Feb 28, 2005
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Reviewer: devonlillie Signed
Date: Jan 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Part three: A third person's perspective.

What a charming, refreshing, mind-blowingly realistic fic about Ginny's first time. This was so wonderful to read, all, the worries, and insecurities, and doubt. Great job!

Something's Missing by Maggs    (Reviews - 28)

Ginny decides to reform a rake as research for her decided career as a romance novelist. She settles on the Slytherin Sex God.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 4 | Word count: 4572 | Read count: 1185 | Published: Apr 03, 2005 | Updated: May 13, 2005
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Reviewer: devonlillie Signed
Date: Dec 24, 2006 Title: Chapter 4: Part Three: A Visit to the Library

I like the story so far. I sympathize with Ginny as I am also hopelessly addicted to smutty romance novels. Sigh.

Her Dreams by Qweene_of_Argylle    (Reviews - 9)

just a D/G fic...?
Category: Poetry
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 1 | Word count: 95 | Read count: 2129 | Published: Jul 13, 2005 | Updated: Jul 13, 2005
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Reviewer: devonlillie Signed
Date: Nov 03, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Her Dreams

I love it. It's beautiful and touching and it flows really well. It's hard to have a poem that rhymes and have it not sound like a Dr. Seuss story but you did a really good job.

Reviewer: devonlillie Signed
Date: Nov 03, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Her Dreams

I love it. It's beautiful and touching and it flows really well. It's hard to have a poem that rhymes and have it not sound like a Dr. Seuss story but you did a really good job.

Ginny Weasley and the Online D8 by twiddlekinks    (Reviews - 164)

The wizard dating scene is utterly boring. Tired of the same old stuff, Ginny Weasley turns to the Internet, specifically online dating services. Whom does she find?
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 10 | Word count: 38476 | Read count: 5807 | Published: Aug 23, 2005 | Updated: Nov 24, 2006
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Reviewer: devonlillie Signed
Date: Dec 23, 2006 Title: Chapter 9: In Which The Two Meet At A Party

You have excellent taste in literature. Ender's Game and The Phantom Tollbooth are two of my favorite books ever. I also really like your story so far.

Oh, and I'm a window-shopper on the site. Interesting quiz I liked it. It was insightful.

I Potato You by yunnage    (Reviews - 76)

Potatoes are better
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: Fully compliant
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 541 | Read count: 4467 | Published: Oct 04, 2005 | Updated: Oct 04, 2005
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Reviewer: devonlillie Signed
Date: Dec 23, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Potato Potato

That was really cute and VERY original. I potato your story.

Exodus by Maelyn    (Reviews - 38)

Eight years have passed since Draco's sixth year, Ginny's fifth. The Death Eaters rain supreme and the Order is dying out. Has anything changed? Will it ever change?
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Action, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: Blood, Graphic Violence
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 9 | Word count: 25412 | Read count: 2485 | Published: Oct 28, 2005 | Updated: Jun 01, 2006
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Reviewer: devonlillie Signed
Date: Dec 20, 2006 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I'm in absolute love with this story. It's brilliant. I love how you incorporated muggle life into this fic in a interesting yet plausible way.

It's not like Harry pulls up in a stealth jet carrying, an AK-47. I really liked how you referenced to 9/11 and the tsunami and Hurricane Katrina.

I also really like your pacing for the relationship between Draco and ginny. It's not too fast, but it's also not agonizingly slow. Overall, I think this is a great depiction of life during war.

Your story is addicting so update as soon as you can please.

Cheers
Devon

Diversionary Tactics by Mourning Broken Angel    (Reviews - 104)

*Winner of Rainpuddle's Great Draco & Ginny Fic Contest 2006* Covert operative needed- Passport, intrigue and romance required; no experience necessary. Please enquire within.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Action, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 5 | Word count: 18771 | Read count: 11052 | Published: Jul 31, 2006 | Updated: May 09, 2007
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Reviewer: devonlillie Signed
Date: Dec 18, 2006 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I love this story. It brings such a new and interesting twist on the often overused cliche of the mail order bride. I can't wait to read more.

Cheers


Author's Response: I thought it would be a fun take on the theme, but I\'m glad you like it!

His Girl by Persephone33    (Reviews - 47)

Voldemort has been defeated and Harry and Draco have become reluctant friends. 'His Girl' features a lovesick Harry, a calm and collected Ron, a Hermione that drools over anything male and Slytherin, and a very sexually frustrated Ginny Weasley. When you throw in an after Quidditch party, an illicit love potion, and a couple of threesomes, you have a Hogwarts like you've never seen before! Book six is completely disregarded.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Other Characters, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: Character Death, Slash
Completed: Yes
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 1 | Word count: 10967 | Read count: 9113 | Published: Oct 22, 2006 | Updated: Oct 22, 2006
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Reviewer: devonlillie Signed
Date: Dec 19, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: His Girl

This was incredibly funny. You had me rolling on the floor in hysterics. I love how Harry was so oblivious. It's actually rather plausible which is the funniest part. Keep it up.

Cheers


Author's Response: Rolling on the floor? Wow. I had no idea it was that funny. Thanks for the review.

The Infirmary by Persephone33    (Reviews - 69)

What happens when a potions explosion coincides with Ginny's annual, self-imposed trip to the infirmary? Sometimes when you don't know who you're talking to, prejudices are laid aside, and you get to know the person behind the family. This is a response to the November challenge of "infirmary" on the FIA forums.

Disclaimer: I don't own Harry Potter or anything associated with him/them/it. Please don't sue me.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 1 | Word count: 3606 | Read count: 8179 | Published: Nov 27, 2006 | Updated: Nov 27, 2006
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Reviewer: devonlillie Signed
Date: Dec 19, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: The Infirmary

Good story. Nice plot. Great job. I love your stories they're all so good. Keep writing great stuff and I'll keep writing!

Reviewer: devonlillie Signed
Date: Dec 19, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: The Infirmary

Good story. Nice plot. Great job. I love your stories they're all so good. Keep writing great stuff and I'll keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks very much!

Draco's Dangerous Dilemma by Anise    (Reviews - 1418)

All Ginny wants is to get the upper hand just once with drool-worthy hunk of man candy and callous playboy Draco Malfoy before he moves on to his next careless conquest. So how did this simple plan lead to time travel, nefarious plots involving the most infamous whorehouse in the wizarding world, and the teenaged Draco’s achingly sweet, chocolate-flavored kisses? Even Draco Malfoy was innocent once, as Ginny learns all too well…

Chapter ONE HUNDRED EIGHTEEN Quote of the Day:

THE LAST CHAPTER

The minutes ticked by, long enough for Ginny to know that against all reason, all common sense, she still wanted impossible things from him. But she would leave. Even after today, even when her body ached from him and for him, when she could feel that he had begun to shape her to him, she would turn around and leave him. I will, I will, she thought.

“You don’t understand,” said Draco.

“Oh?” Ginny said stiffly. “At least he hadn’t touched her, she thought. She would not be able to find the strength to pull herself away from him, and she knew it.


Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Lucius Malfoy, Luna Lovegood, Narcissa Malfoy, Other Characters
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Action, Angst, Horror, Mystery, Romance, Smut
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: Yes
Series: Ever Since Draco and Ginny: Reflections on Their (Un)Natural History
Table of Contents

Chapters: 118 | Word count: 575068 | Read count: 257191 | Published: Mar 19, 2010 | Updated: Dec 03, 2011
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Reviewer: devonlillie Signed
Date: Dec 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 118

This story is beyond amazing. Thank you so much for transporting me back to the wizarding world. Please continue to write a sequel. Do it for all of us potterheads who have nothing to look forward now! I love that their road wasn't an easy one. I read this basically in one sitting and I was hooked the whole time! FABULOUS!

Author's Response: Thanks SO much! :) I definitely will write a sequel, although I want to work on some other (long-neglected) fics first. Draco and Ginny didn't have an easy time in this fic, but I really think that it couldn't have gone any other way. But one sitting.... WOW. (hands out a medal. ;) There will be more!

The Art of the Insult by Ada Achlys    (Reviews - 33)

Can the love of snarkiness bring two people together?
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 4676 | Read count: 4223 | Published: Jul 22, 2010 | Updated: Jul 22, 2010
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Reviewer: devonlillie Signed
Date: Nov 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Okay so I'm reading this in bed and it was the perfect fluffy but not too fluffy end to my night! Who hasn't felt that way about a guy before right? Great story!

The Mischief Maker by Saskia_181    (Reviews - 29)

Draco is after Ginny and doesn’t care who knows it. As far as Ginny knows, it's just another game.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 1 | Word count: 2618 | Read count: 3820 | Published: Dec 16, 2010 | Updated: Dec 17, 2010
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Reviewer: devonlillie Signed
Date: Dec 08, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Honestly this made me laugh. I love your characterization of Ginny. I'm so like that just without a sexy Draco chasing after me! Seriously, this was a really fun story!

A Day in Court by MemoriesFade    (Reviews - 15)

No one ever knew what they would get when Draco Malfoy and Ginevra Weasley were in court, pitted against one another. But when one witness breeds jealousy between the two opposing attorneys, the shirts come off and skirts drop. A courtroom drama featuring shenanigans and a case of impotence.

Written for alura_embrey for the 2011 DG Fic Exchange. Winner of Best Smut.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 1 | Word count: 8216 | Read count: 5625 | Published: Sep 27, 2011 | Updated: Sep 27, 2011
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Reviewer: devonlillie Signed
Date: Nov 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was great! Obviously I loved the reveal at the end. And also Ginny and Draco butting heads in a courtroom is something I'd love to witness!

Author's Response: :) Thanks! I must say this was just gratuitous smut.