Draco owns the Furies, a quidditch team which just happens to have a certain Ginny Weasley on the roster. After some flying in the rain, their relationship turns physical and may eventually develop a smidgen of plot.Category: Long and Completed
Fantastic work as usual. I have been hanging on every word and cannot wait for the rest of the story. Thank you for always keeping my mind occupied at work. (I know I should be working, but we won’t go there)
You know the rhyme... first comes love, then comes marriage... Except it doesn't quite work out that way for Draco & Ginny.Category: Long and Completed
I really enjoyed this story but there were a few times I had to think about. When he is talking about his family while they are having dinner, he says some things that don't make sense. Also, when she meets his mother, she is a real b*tch, I don't know anyone who would stick around for that. Thats just me though so please don't think I am being horrible. The fact is, besides one or two little things that bothered me this was really good. Keep it up, I am very interested to know what will happen.
Ginny receives a letter from Draco early one morning. The information it contains will change her life forever. Previous one shot - now with a brief sequel from Draco's POV and perhaps more... Angst and Romance.Category: Completed Short Stories
I can only say one thing in this review....write more please. I have been behind my desk (not working) and reading your stories all day. Not enough though. Get a move on.
Draco Malfoy inadvertently comes to Ginny Weasley's assistance during a game of Quidditch. The reverberations from his actions will rock his world for some time to come. Snarky Humor and Romance.Category: Long and Completed
Absolutely bloody fantastic! I find with many stories (mine included), Draco is so out of character that he become just Joe-Lovestory-Person. He becomes the anonymous face of “cute guy” and not who he is. In your story, he is Draco Malfoy, bastard extraordinaire. I likey!
Ginny Weasley is about to start her 6th year at Hogwarts. Little does she now that it will be filled with many surprises. Hogwarts School has decided to start a program called 'Community School Hours'. Ginny Weasley is excited about her choice...that is until Draco Malfoy came along.Category: Works in Progress
As requested I have read and am now reviewing your work. I must admit that it would not be a story I would read of my volition. The story repeated itself and if you read it through, you will see that are many mistakes with regards to mixing the story around and continuity. The sentences are short and feels rushed so the story does not flow well.
Otherwise, the story idea itself is good. I am glad to see that your non-consensual sex is not graphic, as is not something I enjoy, but if the story calls for it, at least yours is not too graphic.
To end, I think you should continue but just think about your story flow and some of your writing style. I would love to read what come next.
Author's Response: Hey,
Thanks. I'll try making my sentences longer, and making sure that they flow. Thanks for the review. I love your story.
An essay written by your Site Mommy on the topic of things that those of us who read through and approve your fics wish you wouldn't do.Category: Essays
Heck, I submitted without logging and thought maybe I would add two more cents now that I am. Some people have mentioned that it would be too scary to add a story now that this essay has come up and I would have to disagree. Some things in the essay may make me frown (slight disagreement) but for the most part it is common sense. Think about it. Never be too scared to try something new. If they say NO!, how is it hurting you. You tried, you put yourself out ther and if it sucks to them its okay. There are very many more people out there that would never have gotten up the courage to even try. That being said, there is no excuse for writing crap for the sake of being seen. My above comments only apply to those who bother at least a little. Nuff said!
Draco reflects on the day that Ginny told him she was going to have his baby.Category: Completed Short Stories
I thouroughly enjoyed this. It seems to me exactly like the two of them. Well done and thank you for writing.
Draco pursues Ginny, hoping to bring her back into his life again after tragedy strikes. This story contains a post fic Psych 101 class if the reader feels so inclined.Category: Completed Short Stories
Beautiful! Well written and edgy! Thank you!