Harry is dead; Voldemort won (or did he?); Ginny Weasley is all alone, left to the mercies of the Malfoy family.Category: Works in Progress
I absolutely love your story, I love the relationship between Ginny and Narcissa, the lack of relationship (and rightfully so) between Lucious and Ginny and the developing one between Draco and Ginny.
I've read your story a few times, this has got to be one of my favorite chapters, I love that Draco gives Ginny the space at the gravesite and I'm not sure what, but there is just something about this chapter that moves me.
When Lucius comes to her rescue- that was fantastic!
I think you've done a great job with the characters, I love that Draco is so protective of his little family.
This is going to sound weird, but are you going to do something with her virgins blood? It seems like there were several references to its importance and I keep waiting to see what the hell it would be needed for...maybe nothing, or maybe used to turn the tide on Voldemort.
Whatever you do, your writing is great and I hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you. I am pleased you are enjoying my story. Your question about her Virgins blood is perfectly valid, and I am surprised that it's taken this long for someone to ask. There were originally a number of different ideas for the use, one of which was to hasten the death of the dark lord, but after a discussion with Dragonsangel68 (author of 'Dragon and Angel'), I have devised a much more emotionally challenging and high-impact idea that works much better with the overall mood and development of the story. And I'm not saying anything more than that. Yes, it is important, and the references are there to keep the idea on the periphery of the reader's conciousness with respect to the story so that when I finally write and post the scene I am planning, you will all go 'Ahhhh, I see. Thats cool.'
;-)
Lex.
A Draco/Ginny fic in the view of, mainly, the trio...Ginny's got a secret, and the trio's determined to find out what it is...Rated for profanity in later chapters.Category: Long and Completed
Chapter 1: The trio discusses Plan A.
I love the way you are telling your story, I'm surprised that Hermione hasn't picked up on this yet...anyhoo, love the story...and can't wait for reactions at the ball!
It's about damn time Hermione!
I love that Draco is respectful, polite and yet still has his little Slytherin ways about him. Great chapter.
Great story, please update soon. I have to admit, picking the names of the children bugs me...geez, they aren't even married yet...and even that is 2 years away...anyhoo, I like that Molly and Narcissa are getting along...and I LOVE that the Weasley boys have to be nice to Draco.
After her first year, Ginny keeps a very tight circle of friends. A chance meeting in the Potions Hall sets off a chain of events that will burrow her into Slytherin, and ultimately, Draco Malfoy.Category: Works in Progress
I have a few comments, first I wasn't sure I liked the idea that Ginny would let Blaise make her over, but seeing he has it for Hermione and that doing this for Ginny just might help his cause, I'll hold judgement for now.
Secondly, please keep Pansy away from Harry and Ron... I am a firm H/R believer and frankly, I don't care who Harry ends up with, but I think Pansy would be too much woman for him... I could almost see Pansy with one of the Weasley twins...almost.
Lastly, I absolutely LOVE, LOVE, LOVE the interactions between Pansy and Draco, I'm not a Pansy fan, but this is the first story I've read where Pansy doesn't come off as a complete idiot/whore/etc...and her relationship with Draco seems true to their characters.
Hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I've like Pansy the whole time, and you can see now that she is NOT ending up with Harry or ROn. I've stated that, but finally somebody backs me up!!
I’ve been mulling this over since I read Mynuet's essay, which by the way, Shar, was very well done. Mine is taken from a different angle. Just a bit of rambling, really . .Category: Essays
I love the Han/Luke theory...also, I didn't pay much attention to Draco in the movies until PoA...but in these fan fics I picture him as a less sculpted Spike (the character from Buffy the Vampire Slayer). I think that Tom Felton will be one cutie when he gets older (and legal) LOL! I have always liked the darker characters, they are way more interesting.
Ginny looks to Malfoy to solve a... problem for her. Unfortunately, he creates an even bigger one for the both of them.Category: Works in Progress
I like this little chapter, I like that Ginny is bold and I like the rules they lay out for each other. Just for the record, I never minded all the 'little weasel' and 'weaselette' comments, they seem appropriate for his character. I hope you update soon, I can only imagine how Malfoy will use this little encounter to either further a relationship with Ginny or torment the Trio (which is always fun!).
Draco decides that he wants to go for the Cup and challenges Ginny to the next match.Category: Long and Completed
I absolutely love your story...I love the interaction between Blaise and Luna. I loved the letter that Draco wrote to Ginny and I think it's great that you had them communicate via tape recorder. I am glad you didn't have Ginny take back Draco just because his mom (btw, love how you wrote her!) and Blaise came to her house...it's good that she is building up the trust again. I can really feel the emotions of these characters through your writing and I am looking forward to Draco meeting with the Weasleys.
Great chapter, I was so thrilled when I woke up and saw this little gem waiting for me! I hope you are staying safe and dry, I'm in Phoenix, we are just getting your storm. BTW, I love that I can feel all the emotions, you write beautifully.
In a world where Death Eaters reign and good wizards hide in plain sight, preconceived notions must be redefined. AU for post-Hogwarts setting. WARNING: Allusion to H/Hr since I posted this at Portkey. Please don't bludgeon me; I almost did it myself.Category: Works in Progress
I really like your story...I love Draco's expressions regarding the Weasleys. I am excited to see what happens next.
Ginny breaks up with Draco. Draco doesn’t take it very well. The trials and tribulations of their relationship.Category: Works in Progress
I laughed out loud (and still chuckle when I think about it) when Draco asked Harry how he got a girlfriend... it was so very funny. I am glad that Blaise turned Ginny away, I didn't want to venture down that road. Hopefully D/G will talk in the next chapter. Update soon, please.
"He had never actually told her that he loved her. She supposed she should be grateful for that much, at least..." Post-Hogwarts. Auror!Ginny, vs Under-suspicion!Draco.Category: Long and Completed
I am really enjoying this...I love the tension between D/G...and I like the Higgins character... it's good that Draco has someone in his court. Hope you update soon.
War never leaves anyone unchanged.Category: Long and Completed
I really love your story...I like the friendship between the two.
I like what Draco wrote in his journal... I think this is one of my favorite D/G stories so far...I'm excited to continue reading.
I think this has to be my favorite D/G story, it just seemed true to the characters...anyhoo...great story!
Complete! When Draco wakes alone the morning after, he devises a plan to bring her back to him.Category: Long and Completed
Draco is a bad bad boy and he is going to be sorry when Ginny gets a hold of him! LOL! Update soon.
Ginny can't forget what they had, and before she moves on, she has to know if he remembers.Category: Works in Progress
Great chapter...nice and heart wrenching. You really know how to torment your readers (in a good way!). I love the bit about breaking her heart without saying a word...seriously...great chapter.
Masterless, loyal to nothing and no one, Draco still has one tie that he cannot abandon - his marriage in name only to Ginny Weasley.Category: Long and Completed
I like this story, it's quite intriguing and I hope you can update soon! BTW, loved the line about his look not being brotherly!
Draco is ill. Molly Weasley insists on ensuring he has his Pepperup Potion and is dressed appropriately. D/GCategory: Completed Short Stories
I love the interactions between Draco and the Weasley matriarch. Looking forward to more chapters.
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
Ginny graduates. Draco attends. Mayhem ensues.Category: Works in Progress
I think Draco being confronted by Ginny's brothers would be a great moment, because no matter how right they are with Draco, they are Ginny's bros. first and foremost.
Great story, update soon.
btw, although I am a fan of R/H, I like that Harry ended up with her in your story.
Author's Response: Aww, thanks. I submitted Chapter 4 yesterday (which is why my story jumped to the top of the list again...lol), so hopefully there will be an update available within the next couple of days given the mods aren't too busy with their real lives! Maybe if we sent them presents they would give up their real lives and just update fanfiction for us! LOL!
The wind was cold outside, the snow falling lightly against the windowpane.Category: Completed Short Stories
*An experiment in collaboration between Liss and Cindy for The Feast D/G Challenge*
Nice story... and thanks for the recipe! I'm curious as to what Draco thought of the Weasley jumper.
In a war-torn world, love is scarce. Hold on to what you have, but eventually, choices must be madeCategory: Completed Short Stories
I loved it, you have a unique style and the ending was perfect.