It wasn’t simply her exquisite face, her lustrous hair or her graceful curves that moved the cynical poet within him – it was seeing it all bound before him, bent to any of his dark whims, and the slow death of the fire in her eyes that stirred his shadowed soul.Category: Completed Short Stories
Unredeemed!Draco - smut-free, but too dark for firsties.
As I told you, the story does draw you in and make you want to pay it attention. It mirrors Draco and his sordid need for attention from Ginny nicely. The decriptions in this fic are awesome, I'm always so concious of descriptions in fics as I can never get them right, but you've got it spot on. Enough to leave you with an impression but not so long as to make the story drag.
*jealousy*
=D
Author's Response: *Huggles*\r\n\"sordid need for attention\" - that\'s a beautiful way of putting it, I may have to steal it for something else I\'m writing.\r\nI\'m glad you like my descriptions, I\'m always worried I\'m a tad too long winded (as I am in RL). \r\n*love*\r\nCan\'t wait for you to submit your own!
oOo!!!
How delightfully cruel he is...
You make me ashamed of my work with your eloquent sentences, I hope you know!
Mwah!
Author's Response: OI. Firstly, don\'t be ashamed of your work! Everyone has their own style, and you\'re an eloquent, sophisticated thinker who has her own, unique way of expressing herself. (Ie, hurry up write some more!) I think \"delightfully cruel\" is the perfect way to dsribe him. Hurrah! *Loff*
The privilege of being Head Boy comes with specific obligation. Will healthcare and hi-jinks ensue? One can only hope…Category: Completed Short Stories
Winner of the FIA Forum's November Challenge “Infirmary”.
"...and generally standing around practicing his nonchalant pose."
I can TOTALLY see him doing this. I had a bit of a *gigglesnort* moment there... I'm off to continue reading the fic>
Author's Response: He\'s so vain, he probably thinks this fic is about him! And honestly, how did he get so good at all those poses unless he practiced them in private beforehand? Being suave is a full-time job.
*seethes with jealousy of Miran's talent and huffs off to attempt to finish own work...*
Author's Response: Pfft. *Snorts at combosolo\'s ludicrous, baseless self doubt and encourages her to work on her own stuff* :D