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Real name: Laura
Registered: Jan 27, 2007
Membership status: Member

Was a writer, now a reader. I prefer to write my own things now.
Reviews by toothpick

Exquisite Irony by Myanceris    (Reviews - 318)

Harry is dead; Voldemort won (or did he?); Ginny Weasley is all alone, left to the mercies of the Malfoy family.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: D/G Offspring, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Lucius Malfoy, Molly Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy, Other Characters
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Angst, Romance, Smut
Warnings: Blood, Character Death, Sexual Violence
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 19 | Word count: 80110 | Read count: 92342 | Published: Aug 11, 2004 | Updated: Jul 05, 2022
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Reviewer: toothpick Signed
Date: Aug 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 18: Compromise and Cogitation

Oh, I almost gave up on this fic! I'm so glad I stumbled upon the link today.

I'm glad you haven't given up on this fic. It's reassuring to know you want to continue and finish it. It is a wonderful piece and I'd love to see how Draco and Ginny and all the other characters get through their situations :)

Sex God by Mynuet    (Reviews - 62)

Draco Malfoy, beleaguered sex god, meets his match.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 5013 | Read count: 4858 | Published: May 13, 2005 | Updated: May 13, 2005
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Reviewer: toothpick Signed
Date: Jul 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: JMo's Fault

LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!

Draco Bells by No Stranger    (Reviews - 10)

Ginny sings Jingle Bells with a twist...
Category: Poetry
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 124 | Read count: 2685 | Published: Dec 17, 2005 | Updated: Dec 17, 2005
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Reviewer: toothpick Signed
Date: Jul 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Draco Bells

LOVED IT! I think I'll sing it when Christmas rolls around ;)

The Storm by Glass_Mermaid    (Reviews - 37)

In her nightmares he comes to her.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Blood
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 12510 | Read count: 4375 | Published: Jan 02, 2007 | Updated: Jan 02, 2007
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Reviewer: toothpick Signed
Date: Jan 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Snippets

Even though you aren't writing the complete story, I still appreciate the snippets :) It sort of allows the reader to put things together on their own, considering what you've given us in the snippets and from the story before this.

So thank you for posting this :) It's so much better than abandoning it completely.

Ten Years Later, or Pud's Rewrite of the DH Epilogue by Rainpuddle    (Reviews - 191)

*DH SPOILERS* Consider yourself warned.

This is my attempt to correct some of the wrongs...
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Future AU
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1128 | Read count: 11121 | Published: Jul 23, 2007 | Updated: Jul 23, 2007
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Reviewer: toothpick Signed
Date: Jul 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

YES!

While I was fine with the epilogue, I couldn't help but feel a little down about D/G. I mean, did we HAVE to have an epilogue? Anyway, this certainly made me happy - I shall forever believe that THIS is what really happened :D

Author's Response: No, we didn\'t have to have an epilogue so I have chosen to ignore it completely :)

Occam's Razor by Mourning Broken Angel    (Reviews - 204)

Who knew happily-ever-after could have an expiration date? New beginnings are hard, but when they happen in the middle of your life, they're infinitely more so.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Arthur Weasley, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Lucius Malfoy, Molly Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy, Neville Longbottom, Other Characters, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: Fully compliant
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 7 | Word count: 22892 | Read count: 37804 | Published: Aug 02, 2007 | Updated: Mar 17, 2010
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Reviewer: toothpick Signed
Date: Jan 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Haha! Very nice. Ginny's bits with the children, the children with Draco, and Draco's constant biscuit eating...very upbeat chapter :)

The Devil You Know by CCC    (Reviews - 1004)

Ginny is twenty four, and the war rages on. Draco is a Death Eater, and he needs her help. Of course, he doesn't give her a choice. Now she's surrounded by the enemy. She begins to see that not everything is black and white. Can she come to terms with her new role in his life?
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Action, Angst, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 34 | Word count: 69661 | Read count: 218357 | Published: Sep 26, 2007 | Updated: Sep 28, 2010
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Reviewer: toothpick Signed
Date: Aug 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Chilling. Sweet, but chilling.

I love it. :)

Author's Response: Thank you. I think Malfoys are a chilly bunch.

Reviewer: toothpick Signed
Date: Dec 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh, please update this soon!

This is a beautifully written story. It's different from others I've read. There's the forced marriage, the baby, and Draco as a Death Eater, but all combined into one, with danger and no love (yet), it's something entirely new! I love this :)

Author's Response: Thank you. I was trying to come up with something different from my usual fluff.

First Kiss by Hearts Cadence    (Reviews - 25)

A cold night, a warm embrace, an unforgettable moment.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 616 | Read count: 5776 | Published: Oct 20, 2007 | Updated: Oct 20, 2007
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Reviewer: toothpick Signed
Date: Oct 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

When I saw you'd written something, I had to read it. And I'm glad I did! The moment was absolutely...breathtaking. You're lucky your first kiss was like this!

Interlude by Mourning Broken Angel    (Reviews - 145)

*Final chapter added* Parenting can be overwhelming, even for wizards. Especially when there are teenagers involved. Draco and Ginny, summoned to Hogwarts for a conference with their children's Head of House, share an interlude neither can forget.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: D/G Offspring, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Neville Longbottom, Other Characters
Compliant with: Fully compliant
Era: Next Generation
Genres: Angst, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: The Interlude Arc
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 6828 | Read count: 16729 | Published: Dec 20, 2007 | Updated: Dec 31, 2007
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Reviewer: toothpick Signed
Date: Jan 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

GAH!
BRILLIANT!
LOVED IT!

My True Love Sent To Me by Lyndsie    (Reviews - 30)

Twelve days can be a lifetime, yet Epiphany must always come.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 4103 | Read count: 2367 | Published: Dec 20, 2007 | Updated: Dec 20, 2007
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Reviewer: toothpick Signed
Date: Dec 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: On the first day of Christmas...

Beautiful piece!
It kind of reminds me of the movie with Robin Williams: What Dreams May Come. Actually, that's more on the basis of Dante's Inferno, BUT some elements are still similar (two lovers, a lost child they find in heaven, denied death at first, etc).

WONDERFUL piece, I loved it :)

Author's Response: Hm, that\'s interesting. I\'ve not read Dante, and I saw the first ten minutes of the movie and then gave it up. I was sort of thinking of \"The Little Matchstick Girl\" at the beginning, actually, and from there went on to play with real/unreal. (That\'s something that fascinates me, actually.) Thanks for reviewing!