Yay! This was just too cute for words! I love that you coninued the first chapter and I thought this was the perfect follow up! I love how they both went in a roundabout way to say that they wanted to date exclusively, very very cute! Great story!

Author's Response: Thanks! It was a lot of fun to write *g* Neither would really come out and say what they wanted directly, because that would mean they'd have to admit that they liked each other *gasp* And we know that just isn't true... *sniggers*

Haha, Pasny and Ron. Gotta love them. And Draco with a conscience! *gasp* I think its so cute that Draco was the one to stop it progressing further. Haha he's probably one of the few guys who have ever been the one to say "I want to wait until its right.." usualy thats the girls job. ;) Love it! Can't wait to read more and see what Pansy and Ron get up too and what other obstacles lay in the way of our beloved Draco and Ginny.

Author's Response: Thanks! Draco doesn\'t know what to make of this conscience thing either, because usually he\'s just about getting into their knickers ;)

Ahh very nice. I like how you didnt just make it same for both and how Draco got upset. Cant wait to see how Draco and Ginny react next time! Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks kellbell! I was thinking that it would be hard for me to have sex with someone I hated, especially if it was my first time.

Great chapter! Its so like Draco to be mean and uncaring and than realise what he was doing. Very nice characterization of him I think, a lot of people tend to make him too...lovey dovey during those types of things and its nice to see youve kept his 'rough' side. And I love the whole Madam Snape thing :D Great chapter and I cant wait to see what comes out of the conversation Hermione heard! Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks Kellbell! Yes, I agree. I could see him doing that so clear in my mind.

I could see Severus not wanting to say Hermione, but she's not really Miss Granger anymore! Hermione won't actually mention it to him until chapter 5...

Ouch, Angry Husbands. Haha its like paying a dollar and getting back a dime. I cannot wait to see what happens when Snape and Draco find out what really happened. I would not want to be on the receiving end of the Slytherin OR Gryffindor temper. Snape and Draco better be ready to grovel for their lives. :D. Hehe cant wait to see what happens next! Brilliant chapter and update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you kellbell! They are going to find out, but it won\'t be from Hermione or Ginny. Pride is going to get in the way there. They are all four too stubborn! When they do find out, it will be very hard on them. A big fight between the couples will be up next, which I am writing now.

Ahh! Another brilliant chapter. And Severus is a very lucky man that Hermione is rational and understanding....Draco on the other hand has a lot more work to do with Ginny. I can't wait to see how he makes it up to her and where our couples go from there. I love this story! Update soooooon!

Author's Response: Thanks so much Kellbell! I am so glad you\'re enjoying my fic! Severus is lucky! Poor Draco got the emotional red-head! teehee! More up soon! Oh, I would love for you to friend me. I will friend you, too!

Sneaky Lucius! Ohh I almost dont want to know what he has planned for later, but of course i really do. ;) I'm glad Ginny is ready to forgive Draco, its good both couples are moving on. And Pansy and Harry! How cute! Cant wait to see what comes next. I hope everything stays ok with the babies. I wonder what will upset our couples next. (because lets face it, something is always wrong LOL) Haha, cant wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Thanks Kell! Actually, I am going to try to redeem him a bit in the next chapter. Yep it was time to move on and get them out of the woods! I like HP/PP at times. We (or I do) put our ladies with Slytherin men, so why not the guys with the women? ;-) THe babies will be fine! More up soon!

Actually I loved this chapter so much I thought I'd leave two reviews.

"After she was out of sight, Lucius turned to clear the air with his son, but as he looked at Draco, his heart shattered.'

I think that was my favorite line. I really liked that whole section and it was fabulously written. Full of raw emotion and feeling and wonderfully written. I loved that part!

Author's Response: Thanks Kell! ;-) I never mind reviews! LOL I am happy you liked that. I was going for his ache, his pain. It was emotional, and a little hard to write.

Aww!! I LOVE the idea of Lucius taking on Peter. It's such a great idea for him and I think it'll really help both of them in alot of ways. I'm glad that Pansy and Draco worked out their problems as well. Haha I loved that Ginny could stop Harry like that. She totallly has him whipped. I can't believe the story is almost over!! I dont want it to end! But I'm definitely looking forward to the births! I cant wait to find out the sexes and names of the babies! And what happens after of course. Brilliant chapter! Update soon! ;]

Author's Response: Thanks Kell! I thought so too! ;-) Well, they were friends for such a long time and dated as well, I think it\'s more habit for him than anything. That and he does care for her... Births are up next which I hope to start tonight!

Ok, that was weird, it cut off my review...anyway...

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Author's Response: LOL Thanks for trying Kell!

Wow. Once again you have totally rendered me speechless. This is really well done. Your characterization is spot on - no worries. I really like the idea of Ginny leaving Draco and you described why really well and you made the story fit to the song and flow, which is hard to do sometimes with song fics. I love your fics. Even though they usually make me tear up, they're incredibly well written, and this one is no different. It makes me sad that they're all one shots and that you said there probably wont be a sequal [insert pleading and begging for a sequal here anyway] because they're all brilliant plots. Great writing, and I hope you continue to do so!

Author's Response: I, for the life of me, cannot seem to wirte a happy ending story. I think it might be an issue that I like making people cry! Ah well. Thank you so much for all of your kind words!! I do have several other one shots that need to be betaed and re -evaluated before posting, and several more that just need to plan get finished! (Including a prequal and sequal to SCREAM) But that is insider information ;-) Shh don\'t tell. I hoe you come back for more

I love it! Absolutely everything that the epilouge should have been! All the references to the unmentionable part of that book were hilarious as well. Brilliant idea!

Wow. This was excellent. I was hoping you would write a sequal to Scream, and this is definitely a great follow up. So heart wrenching. I love the last two lines. They're brilliant and pretty much sum everything up beautifully. You write such sad stories! But for that, I am grateful, because not every story can have a happy ending.

I'll anxiously await the prequal.

Author's Response: I\'m very happy to hear that you liked the last two lines. This story was going to end differently, Ginny was going to have the baby - Draco was going to flicker into her sight, and then disapear, no longer being able to see or hear anything. I am more satisfied with this ending though. And yes, prequal will hopefully be out by the end of September!