The War left Ginny Weasley broken and hallow. The one man she turned to for salvation did more harm then good. But Draco Malfoy refuses to let her stay broken, he is more than willing to cut himself to peice back together what someone else has shattered.Category: Completed Short Stories
This story is dedicated to every girl and woman who has ever suffered either physical or emotional abuse in a relationship. And to every guy brave enough to try and rebuild what someone else has broken.
Another great heart wrenching master piece. Truly, your stories are the perfect little piece of angst to really make people go, "wow," and think. I absolutely love this. And as much as it really isnt funny whatsoever, I love Harry's live that he's "a god damned hero." I love how at the end you give us that little peice of hope, and as always your ending sentences are positively and delightfully philosophical and the icing on the story.
One pick point - the incident with Ginny and Tom and the diary happened in her first year, not her second - it was the trio's second year.
And now...
Pleaseeee write a sequal! I would love to see how Draco helps Ginny, and how everything turns out later.
As always, wonderful writing.
Author's Response: Oh my God, I can\'t believe I screwed that one up >_<. And I call myself a fangirl, yikes. As always thanks for your review. AND! I made a happyish ending :-)\r\n\r\nAnd be honest with yourself - what are the odds of *me* doing a sequal. How long did Shattered take. I will of course think about it - but don\'t hold your breath, I\'m horrible with sort of thing. You are amazing Thank you for your review
“Draco Malfoy! Don’t walk away from me!” She called, for once in their six month relationship, she was the one afraid of being abandoned, realizing now that he could leave her. Her words made him stop, but when he turned his metallic gaze upon her, she could see the damage she had done shinning angrily back at her. Just like everyone else, she had let him down.Category: Completed Short Stories
I didnt think he was that OOC at all. Everyone has to be vunerable at some point and you still had the harsh quality to him that we all love. Another fantastic story! It didnt make me cry, but it was still agreat angsty one shot (and another one that needs a sequal! :P) you know I'll always ask you for sequals. Wonderfully done! I love how you have Ginny as the one making the mistake. Too often, as most fanficton writers are women, we have Draco making the mistake because it works with us, but I like this spin. Well done! Please write more soon!
Author's Response: Ohhh kellbell...you and your sequals...not going to lie, the chance that that\'ll happen is wicked wicked small, but I think you know that :-P Yeah, with the crying, I don\'t really think this was a crying story, it wasn\'t y goal this time, just more of a \"make your heart hurt\" sort of thing. Thanks for the review as always ;-)
“What do you think you’re doing here?” Her voice broke me out of my reminiscing, startling me. I hadn’t even heard the door open. Her eyes were alight with a fire I had seen only twice before, both during the best times of my life. Now… well, I could hardly see how this could possibly turn out to be one of the best moments of my life. In fact, it seemed like it would be one of the worst.Category: Completed Short Stories
The product of a bet that I lost to Pipperstorms (and just a really, really bad day)
This was really good! I really liked it. Just enough angst without going overboard and a believable plotline. Very well written!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review. I\'m glad that you enjoyed the story as much as you did.
Ginny is tired of the pretty poetry and words she thinks are lies. All she wants is something real. “Don’t quote me pretty lies, for they injure my soul, don’t sing me pretty songs, for that ‘twasn’t my goal.”Category: Completed Short Stories
“Draco,” she begged, “Please, just tell me something that’s real.”
Yay!!! Something actually not angtsy and tear ridden! I loved it! Amazing, and i dont think that Draco is out of character. That's why I love your Draco's. They are never exactly the same, but are never OCC. They always have your own unique spin on them. Great story! :]
Author's Response: I didn\'t know how you\'d take the lack of angtsy and tearness. I\'m so happy to see that you liked it. And thank you for your Draco comment :-) And for your continued support.
You have already, of course, heard one of their many stories. Heard it from him, or heard it from her, in every gratifying detail. Or at least you think you have. For now, it is my turn to tell a tale. I, who grew up with him, and I, who noticed her before he was bright enough to do so. That’s right; I, Blaise Zabini, will be your host tonight. It’s my turn to tell you the story of Draco Malfoy and Ginny Weasley, because frankly, their story has never been told like this before.Category: Completed Short Stories
I think this is another fantastic master piece. Having Bliase as the narrator puts a different spin on things, and lets us see the couple through another's eyes. I wish it was longer! Although, it was to the point, and we pretty much got the whole story. And I must say I love your Bliase. I had him pictured in my head this whole time almost as if he was standing and looking out of a window while telling this story, shaking his head and smiling as he told it. Very real. Loved it!
Author's Response: I am very pleaed you liked it Kell. Because it was something very different from what I normally write, I wasn\'t sure that the people who normally read my fics would like it. It means a lot. I must say i thought of him more as lounging on the couch, but yes, a window would have worked well too. :-) (and you always wish it were longer:-P )
Each and every time I heard his knock upon my door, I used him in my own absurd fantasy, pretending, if only for the hours he was there, that I was in a normal relationship.Category: Completed Short Stories
Ahh! Is he really gone for good? How deep is his love for her? This screams for a sequal. :P No pun intended. I adore your little stories. They just encompass so much in so little. They're wonderful! You really should try your hand in a longer story - it'd be fabulous I could tell you now, but as I also just got into college, I know the difficulties. ;) Anyway brilliant once again. I'd love to hear more!
Author's Response: I\'m thinking about it ;-) And I love the pun -and anyone else who gets it! I\'m actually working on one, a real life multi chapter fic. I have about two or three chapters done now, but I won\'t post for fear that I won\'t finish it! We\'ll see girl, we\'ll see. Thanks for the review! It\'s great to see you back.