haha very nice, and all men should take a tip. the 'its not what it looks like, I can explain," line, never works ;) hehe great so far!

Author's Response: Thank you. I agree. That excuse is right up there with 'it's not you, it's me.'

Aww i really like this story so far! Cant wait to go on! Are you a french native? seems like you know a lot about that...anyway great story so far!

Author's Response: Yes, I am French... which accounts for a number of mistakes my beta are used to pointing out :) I'm glad you're enjoying this, and thanks for taking the time to leave a review!

Oh wow that was deliciously angsty! This would be great if you expanded it to a chaptered story!! Pretty please *bats eyelashes* Lol, well I tried. Brilliant story, you write wonderfully. You can feel her pain as he comes in. And I like how you've made her still rebelious. A lot of fics like this have her broken but you've kept her spirit in her and I like that! Great story!

very well written. so sensual and flowing. great shot!

Wow, very great writing! I loved Ginny's outburst, "too much of a sniceling coward to do a decent job of being evil!" great line! cant wait to keep reading!

Awww, I love the extra thing with the candle, its so cute :D

I dont think this chapter is mediocre! It seems like it was hard to write but i think you did it wonderfully. And you really do have a way with the quirky sentences might I add. Very well done!

very nice! you really worked the plot brilliantly and everything flowed really nicely! keep it up! (i know im going a little review crazy but hey i love reviews and its a good story ;)

wow. you id more than give it justice! That was brilliant! I dont think anyone else could have pulled that off with the same....brilliance and perfection that you did! It really was great and not overwhelming and gushy in that sense. It was totally perfect for Draco to fight it but than have it hit him. Really great writing!

aww, he does love her! took him long enough ;-). great chapter! I love the way you portray Nott, very mysterious and creepy but not in an entirely bad way. cant wait for the next update!

So I've been sitting here for a long time, thinking this fic over in my head, and all I can say is "wow." This story was one of those knock-you-off-your-seat type ones. It was fabulously well done, and the 3rd narrarator perpective was interesting. It left a lot of gaps that you could fill in on your own. Why did Ginny die though? I have my own thoughts, but it'd be interesting to see what you orginally intended. Short-and to the point with enough angst to make your heart clench but not enough to make you roll your eyes and tell them to quit the drama. Very well done!

Author's Response: I\'d really love to hear your theories as to Ginny\'s death, but mine was always that she simply dried up. Ginny is very hard for me to write or imagine, but I always see her as someone who almost literally depends on her family for life; they provide a well of unconditional love that would be impossible to replace. Indeed, I doubt Ginny has even considered the possibility that her family would EVER stop loving her for any reason, including being in love with a Malfoy. In my opinion, even Draco wouldn\'t even be able to make up for the loss of that love and when she loses her family she starts to waste away.\r\n\r\nThank you very much for your review!

hmmm very interesting...cant wait to see what happens with the baby! this is 8 months after the last chapter right? cant wait for more! update soon!

Author's Response: Hmm let's see... it's about five months after the last chapter; Carina was about three months pregnant in the last chapter. Thanks for reading, next chapter should be up soon!

Ohhh, very good chapter! Ah I cant wait to see what 'hospital' she lands at and what happens to poor Draco! cant wait, and I really think you managed to make that conversationg between the two very realistic and emotional! kudos :D xx Kellie