Ginny is twenty four, and the war rages on. Draco is a Death Eater, and he needs her help. Of course, he doesn't give her a choice. Now she's surrounded by the enemy. She begins to see that not everything is black and white. Can she come to terms with her new role in his life?Category: Works in Progress
Excellent chapter. I want more!!!
Author's Response: Thank you. I will try to write more soon.
Glorious chapter!
Author's Response: thank you : )
Gah! Looks like they just won't catch a break here. Good chapter. Oh, the drama...
Author's Response: Thank you. I never knew angst could be so much fun.
HA! I know I shouldn't laugh but really. What a note to end the chapter with. I'm really looking forward to those explanations.
Finally! Haha, great chapter!
Twisted... but amazing! Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you. I imagine Lucius is a bit twisted by this point.
Great chapter! I just love a scheming Hermione!
I love plotting women! So amusing...
Welcome back! What a hopeful chapter... I enjoyed it!
When Harry leaves Ginny for Hermione, Draco decides it's time to fulfill an old fantasy. Twenty five is a little old to experience her first one night stand, but Ginny thinks she can handle it.Category: Works in Progress
HA! I'm so glad you brought Blaise in!
HA! I'm so glad you brought Blaise in!
I'm glad you didn't have them immediately jump into the sack together. Well done for sticking with your characters true personalities. Good chapter!
Draco finds himself spending obscene amounts of time with Ginny Weasley, thanks to Blaise and his love for drama and hatred of boredom.Category: Works in Progress
Haha. Cute beginning.
Author's Response: Thank you. :) It took me foreeeeeever to get this one out!
Ha! The plot thickens even more! Excellent job!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Cuteness! Loving the drawn out friendship/ relationship!
Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m determined to draw out the relationship - gotta try to make it somewhat believeable I guess!
Looking forward to this theory!
Author's Response: Yay I\'m glad! Thanks for reading.
Excellent chapter. I especially enjoyed your flavor of bantering. I like how you portray Draco and Ginny. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thanks! The banter is the easiest part, it\'s the pesky plot that keeps giving me hell! :)
Ginny's late night visits to the kitchen lead to a potentially dangerous run-in with Draco Malfoy. Angered by his dismissal of her, she decides it's time to show him how the game is really played.Category: Works in Progress
Good start! I hope you'll do more character depth in the next chapter. =)
Author's Response: Definitely. This first chapter was kind of like a prologue. Thanks for the review.
Hmmm, I wonder what will happen next? Can't wait!
Author's Response: Chapter Three is coming soon, I promise. Thanks for reviewing!
Woohoo! Getting interested. Try adding a bit more description (not just physical) to our fave characters so that readers build a connection with them. This chapter was very good!
Author's Response: Thanks for the advice! I\'ll work on it. Thanks for the review!
Nice chapter. Hoping to see even more of Ginny's fire in the future. The games have begun! Woot woot!
Author's Response: Things are really going to start in the next few chapters! Keep reading and thanks for the review!
The stakes are getting higher... I wonder who will break first? Nice chapter
Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m trying to update as fast as possible because I\'m just as anxious to hear your reviews as you are to read the chapters!
Ah! The hook up! Woot woot! Interesting revelations about their true feelings. Your use of dialogue was right on. Make sure you don't rush the plot. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: The real revelations are yet to come. I\'m glad you like that dialogue, and I\'ll definitely try to keep up a good timeline. Thanks for the encouragement!
Woah! Your Draco has some serious chops in this fic. It's a wonderful change. I look forward to their developing relationship.
Your use of dialogue is excellent. Try to add to some of your descriptions about the characters thoughts. I believe it would make you an even more well-rounded writer.
Love the story. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m glad you seem to like it, and I\'ll definitely look into that suggestion. Keep reading and reviewing!