What really happened in the DH Epilogue of Doom. Poor, poor Harry, so very clueless...Category: Works in Progress
Chapter SIXTY-NINE quote of the day:
Ginny scowled at him. “You don’t know me very well.”
Draco shook his head, his eyes more sorrowful than ever. “No. I don’t. Eternity wouldn’t be long enough for that.”
“Why do I feel as if we’ve suddenly wandered into the set of a men’s cologne commercial?” complained Lucifer.
“Can’t you keep your damn mouth shut, Lucifer?” spat Draco.
“Please… really… I don’t think you should talk to him that way,” whispered Ginny.
Oh my goodness.
I cant even guess whats going to happen next. This is freakin amazin.
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WONDERFUL.
Oh my goodness. So, thats what really happened, but the part about Narcissa is not in Harrys memory but that Ginny is actually in past and so can still see everything happening?
Then where was Narcissa all this time? Because, the way it seems, Ginny was supposed to come back into the past in order for her future to play out... Wait, no. Dracos revenge was his mothers death, but shes not dead... Oh my goodness I make no sense.
WONDERFUL.
Evevythings going to turn out exactly the same way it did in the future, isnt it? Because its just like your example. You want to change something, but that change will affect something else, and etc, etc, and in the end, you might end up exactly where you left off.
I loveeee Draco. Hes so in love with Ginny, and she him, but then theres this wall there, and ARGH. I want them to get back together. But then I dont. I want Draco to suffer a bit... or a lot.
But then Ginny needs to forgive him after lots of groveling.
WONDERFUL.
Woah. Wow. Smut. Angst. Amazing! I loved it, but how does this afffect everything now?
WONDERFUL.
Noooooooooo! What is going on?? So much angst!
WONDERFUL.
Eeeeeek. Whats going to happen!!?!?
WONDERFUL.
This story is so long and complex that sometimes I forget Ginny is in the past because her Draco in the future betrayed her. Its like some alternate universe 3 times over.
BUT, OH NO. LUCIUS CAN SEE GINNY?!!??!!?
Wonderful!
Oh my god. So many twists and turns!!!!!!!!
Oh my god. Why is this so complicated??!?!?
Wonderful!
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WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I wonder whats going to happen... But, I kinda get it now. I mean, everything thats happened is doing a complete turnabout, and I can sorta make connections, and go, "A-ha!"
Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat?!?!?
Some things are meant to happen, I guess.
Playboy Auror, Draco Malfoy, collects women like some people collect stamps, until an unforunate incident with one woman. Turned virtual recluse, Draco is only lured back into the social world when his partner steps in and sets him up.Category: Long and Completed
Gasp! What has happened to my poor, gorgeous Draco?
This is off to a wonderful start! I love it when Draco didnt know who Ginny was, and then was attacking Harry with questions about her. That made my day! ;D
Wonderful!
Author's Response: Thanks! Poor Draco, he didn\'t quite seem that crazy one coming ;)
I love Ginny. Shes hilarious, even if she doesnt mean to be. She says everything she wants, and is just so cheery. I love the line, "I make excellent broom noises and my imitation of the Hogwarts Express is near perfect." OMG, I absolutely love it.
I do feel bad for Draco though. I mean, he has a crazed, odd witch as a healer, and he was a play doll for his insane stalker. I wonder what the stalker chick used on him anyway.
Wonderful!
Author's Response: Thanks! Ginny has a lot of experience getting males to cooperate and she isn\'t above using humiliation to get her way ;) Draco has much to be worried about, as he has discovered ;) The stalker used so many hexes on him the healers are still trying to untangle the web.
Hedwig! Yay!
I absolutely love you. These chapters are coming out so quickly, and its giving me something to read. And I just love this story!
Go Ginny and Draco! And Harry and Ron! I cant believe that Harry and Ron actually set the two up, though, it was probably all Harrys idea. Ron doesnt seem to keen on letting is little sister date a womanizer... Dracos not a womanizer anymore.
Im confused just bit though. Whats the plan? Is it that Draco and Ginny are going to pretend that theyre dating and are in love? Or is it something else?
Wonderful!
Author's Response: Thanks! The story is actually written and I\'m simply posting one chapter at a time ;) The set-up was more Harry\'s idea than Ron\'s *g* Draco\'s not a womanizer anymore, but Ron will believe that... well, he might never believe that ;)\r\n\r\nThe plan will be unveiled in the next chapter ;)
Sweet! Another chapter! And another review! (Though Im sure youre getting sick of my long-ish reviews.)
Go Draco and Ginny! It was absolutely hilarious, the plan of theirs.
"Wheres your wand, Potter?"
"Its right here."
"Yes, we can see your wand..."
That was the funniest and most evil revenge scheme yet. And poor Ron! Spiders everywhere! Draco was really funny. "I cant believe youre afraid of spiders."
And now, theyre dating! Or pretend dating, but it wont be pretend for much longer, right? At least they kissed. And Draco enjoyed the kiss. And so did Ginny, so all is well.
Wonderful!
Author's Response: Thanks! For the record... I love long reviews!\r\n\r\nI actually wrote that passage quite innocently, and then realized the double entendre ;) Ron and his spiders... again, I just couldn\'t help but torture him in the worst possible way. Yes, they\'re pretending to date at the moment (sort of *wink*).\r\n\r\nThanks!
I love the Weasley men! And the thing is, none of them are dead! I love the confrontation between the Weasleys and Draco. It always amuses me how Draco, a Slytherin, can be intimidated by a bunch of red-haired men... On second thought, he probably does have a right to be intimidated.
Theyve been going out for ten days! They are dating, right? Or is this still part of the plan? I hope not. I want them to fall in love and have cute PHBs. Maybe at first it was part of the plan, but then they couldnt deny the attraction, and then it was not part of the plan.
Wonderful!
Author's Response: Draco has every right to be intimidated, especially when the boys are all together ;) Well, Draco is playing along with the plan, because he thinks that\'s where Ginny is at, but he has other ideas *g*\r\n\r\nThanks!
Wait!!!! What if Golye is a bad guy!!? Shoot! He could be working on the inside and whatnot! Ah, my mind hurts from all the thinking. But seriously! Draco could be putting Ginny in danger!!!! I wonder why its so important that he has to hide her...
Oooooh. Two months! Yes, some DG action. I love that Draco is so protected of Ginny. Hes thinking ahead, and is scoping out the bad guys first.
Oh! And I love Blaise. I wish he was in the story more. Your Theo is exactly like how I picture him! Are you a mind reader? Hes a womanizer, but hes fun to be around. I wonder what he looks like... And Pansy! I like your Pansy a lot. Shes not a simpering twit.
Wonderful!
Author's Response: Don\'t worry, Goyle is a good guy :) Draco just wants Ginny to be safely inside her own apartment before whatever it is he and Harry have to deal with starts ;)\r\n\r\nUnfortunately, Blaise, Theo and Pansy only make small cameo appearances this time, but I did enjoy writing them that way. I love strong Pansy! She knows Draco inside out and isn\'t afraid to force him to do what\'s good for him (even if he hasn\'t determined what that might be yet). This is the first time I\'ve written Theo, so my picture of him is a little incomplete, but he\'s got to be a womanizer *g*
Oooh! I loved it!
Its a short review, but instead of studying (and doing my book report,) here I am, reading this great chapter!!!
Wonderful!
Author's Response: Thank you :) Hope you get your studying done ;)
Its over? OMG!
I loved it! Every bit of it!
Author's Response: Yes, over ;) Thank you *g*
Who knew happily-ever-after could have an expiration date? New beginnings are hard, but when they happen in the middle of your life, they're infinitely more so.Category: Works in Progress
That was really,really well-written. I love that its written in first person. I cant wait for the next one!
Wonderful!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I\'m not usually a first person narrative fan, but this story works much better in this format than in third person limited. More should be up soon; I\'m working on it now!
Theyre getting a divorce! Im surprised I havent cried yet.
This is so beautifully written, and I think Ive said that before. I love the way everyone is characterized, and I love the way you pay attention to details.
I hope everything works out between Harry and Ginny and that their divorce is amicable. Id hate the kids (Lily, Albus Severus, James) to have horrible memories of their parents.
At least, now, we're able to have some DG action.
Wonderful!
Author's Response: Isn\'t it sad? *sniff* Even though it\'d be the worst D/G fic ever if she didn\'t leave Harry, I still find myself really blue about writing it. I suppose that since most of us have had a close experience with divorce, the topic really hits home. Thank you for the wonderful, thoughtful review!
Aw! How cute! I loved it!