Four men whose destiny was bound before they were born, four men who will become the brotherhood, natural born killers sworn to protect the populace. Their lives will intertwine with two higher level demons who are oath bound to protect their daughters. Old friendships are tested as new alliances are formed, the world as it was will never be again.Category: Works in Progress
At first I was a little iffy about this story. It was a bit confusing during the first chapter, but I stuck with it as I am a fanatic for this type of AU story. The dynamic between Cass, Kiara and Ginny is a little unclear when you first introduce the three of them together, but that was cleared up a bit during the bar scene. Altogether, this is a really interesting plot line and your spelling/grammar is good. I hope to see you continue with this, because as much as I abandon stories halfway through, I can't stand to see other people do it. Besides, I'm not that great of a story-teller. Anyway, this is a comment full of rambling. Just know that I like the story and hope that it continues.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you stuck with it. Also, thank you for your review, it is appreciated. I understand your concerns over the beginning, but I had my reasons. Had I revealed everything at the startup the story would've become incredibly redundant not to mention long. The story it self is already drafted up to being quite long and is seperated into three parts. The first is almost done, I have a few chapters to go and it'll move into the next which will be a year after where it ends in this one.
The only reason the spelling and grammar are good is because of my beta who has the painstaking task of clearing up after I butcher the English language.
Lastly, I don't plan on abandoning the story. It's been a while since I've updated and might even be a while before I do so again. I'm in my final year at Uni and have very little time to write. I'm picky and so is my beta so it takes us a while to come up with a draft we are both comfortable with posting.
Once again thank you for the review!A rumor about Draco Malfoy is going around Hogwarts and Ginny must discover if there is truth to it. (Formerly titled, Ginny Weasley and the Slytherin's Trouser Snake.)Category: Completed Short Stories
They’ve both been looking for something grand, but once they finally find it the war and family tragedy keep them apart. They want victory not only for the men and women dying… but so they can finally have their happy ending.Category: Long and Completed
Not many stories can make me cry out of happiness. You have succeeded. I have always been a sucker for WWII romances. I guess it's because that's how my grandparents met. It's a wonderful ficlet and once again I am reminded of how your stories never cease to amaze me. Good job.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really loved this story... it meant a lot to me and as soon as I saw the prompt I was inspired. Thanks for reading and leaving a brilliant review! ;)