Name: b1elliot reviewed
Part Three on Aug 02, 2015 02:54 am
I like how you progressively showed Draco's disinterest in becoming a Death Eater. Amazing writing! Thanks!
Name: Boogum reviewed
Part Three on Jan 23, 2011 09:47 pm
Brilliant as usual. You write Draco so well.
Name: Dementors_Kiss reviewed
Part Three on Feb 16, 2010 05:08 am
Sweet.
Cold showers seemed necessary at the start. I have a feeling they may be necessary at the end of the next chapter? I smell a heavy make out session...maybe some fondling?
One can only hope!
Great chapter.
Name: Ceridwen reviewed
Part Three on Aug 24, 2009 05:31 am
Ah, hehe, that was cute. Confusion, disappointment, Draco's thoughts (for example the constant comparison to Pansy) were just entertaining! And Ginny's weren't much unlike, were they?
"It was a startling thought, that Draco might be human, that he and she might share something in common besides a fascination with Tom Riddle and a penchant for wandering the halls at night." - very well written, that passage :)
But then, of course, a small regression... their argument was really good (well, as long as you can call something like that good). And when it just lead to the next kiss - wow. I was taken aback by that, too. Real... logical development.
Draco's mum seemed to be rather nice (in contrast to Lucius *shudders*), I suppose. The broom... and then the Goyle news, oh, well. It's strange to see that you killed Goyle, Fearthainn, while Jo got rid of Crabbe. Hm.
This comforting scene was wonderfully deep and... fitting, and somehow, it really needed a break after it. I would never have expected that a summer described in a (Harry Potter) fanfic could be so gripping and realistic. I liked the idea that Draco has even got "bored" with the deatheaters. :D And then the meeting with Voldemort - he didn't seem that frightening, I don't know why. Perhaps because we already saw, during the last two books, that he isn't friendly at all to his followers?
It was a bit strange, but still okay for a character sketch. Nothing to worry about (looking at the writing, I mean). What was fascinating for me, as a reader, was Draco's strengh. His last words did seem notable, and it was a very good and justified idea to let him be against the whole thing right away. Draco learned something, Draco knows it's bad and illogical! Yay!
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed
Part Three on Jul 15, 2009 11:12 pm
"Draco listened, nodding when his Father did, wondering silently if they could start the 'purification' with the monstrosity that was leading this circle."
LMAO!
Name: Dracos'girl_4ever reviewed
Part Three on Mar 23, 2007 01:07 pm
i like that Draco would never take the mark but is he ever going to go to Ginnys house?
Name: Myst reviewed
Part Three on Sep 10, 2006 08:02 pm
*claps excitedly* Bravo! I love it. Indulge me as I mention a few specifics and comment:
> "Shit," he whispered softly, "shit,
> shit, shit."
*laughs her arse off* His confusion and consternation here was positively delightful. However, I cannot like how he was rather sugary over her lips meant for kissing, hair meant for twirling, etc. Bleh. Bit too far off too soon. But no matter, the rest was lovely.
"odious" -- Oh I do so love this word! So aristocratic and pompous and yay! *giggles*
Calloused fingers? Hardly. Where on earth would he have gotten them? Certainly not from manual labor, nor Quidditch, wherein he wears protective gloves. Merely being male isn't enough, either. Those born with a silver spoon frequently have quite soft hands, some even going to an extreme of getting a manicure. Quite a few male professionals in the world see a manicurist on a regular basis. I myself go frequently, and my nail ladies have mentioned this to me. I could see Draco having a servant do his nails. No polish, but certainly clipped and filed and smoothed and buffed.
On a purely physical note, I do so love how you write their kisses. Yum! *grins* Yes, I'm very female. Romance novels are not below me (brain candy indeed!), as I enjoy a bit of pure seduction from time to time, and this qualifies nicely. =)
Finally, depreciations? Perhaps deprecations? Either would work, I suppose, however the latter has a better connotation for that context.
*skips off to the next chapter*
Name: abby reviewed
Part Three on Jul 13, 2005 06:08 pm
oooh i liked the last part...so intruiging! i would like to see a bit more or ginerva though....=D