Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed
Risk It All on Nov 16, 2009 03:56 pm
once again, all i can say is WOW!!. the food at the charity dinner sounded amazing [i love anything with nutmeg in it ;)] the chocolates sounded...wow and the smut was, again, wow. i think she is preggers now cuz they havnt been using condoms sothat seems plausible. i hope har and grace are ok but its a good thing they have the villa. i still have dreams about that circular floating bed...i think this chapter is one big orgasmic wow.
Author's Response: i must have been hungry when i wrote all the food part. yeah, i was! ok. if i say that you're right then that would be boring and give the story away. but if i say no then that will give it away too. i guess we'll just have to wait!
Name: dennisgirl reviewed
Risk It All on Nov 16, 2009 01:59 pm
Thanks, I love your stories. They show Draco as he can be not some fluffy boy all the time.
Cheers, dennisgirl
Author's Response: thank you. i like to have a very wide array of character emotions that they show at one time or another!
Name: Boogum reviewed
Bad News, Bad Advice on Nov 15, 2009 04:14 pm
Lots going on in this chapter. Draco is so adorable in his teenage ways. I love the fact that he kisses her, is disgusted at her still being confused, and says that he will clear it up for her. Interesting about Snape and Har. I do wonder how this will all play out.
Author's Response: thank you. i find him rather adorable too! i could tell you how it plays out, but that wouldn't be very much fun!
Name: Boogum reviewed
Reluctant Friends on Nov 11, 2009 11:10 pm
Loved this chapter. The dance scene was lovely, as was their banter in the pub. I like the fact Draco is confident and yet not. It makes him feel more like a teenager. Ginny is quite funny in this. Very spunky.
Author's Response: i prefer a spunky ginny. it gets on my nerves when she goes all passive and doesn't hold her own against draco!
Name: Boogum reviewed
White flags, white skirts on Nov 11, 2009 10:56 pm
“And you suck!” she shouted.
I laughed so hard at that. It's such a Ginny thing to say. Anyway, I love the fact that they're just teenagers in this. It's so rare to find that in fics now, which is just sad. Great chapter!
Author's Response: thank you. i have a very VERY fun time making them dramatic teenagers :D
Name: Boogum reviewed
Sneaking Around on Nov 11, 2009 12:10 pm
Another good chapter. I'm already running out of steam, so I think I'll stop here. I hate giving rushed reviews because I'm tired. Great fic, anyway. I'm really enjoying it.
Author's Response: thank you! i hope you enjoy the whole thing!
Name: Boogum reviewed
To Deal With Draco on Nov 11, 2009 12:03 pm
I'm loving the interactions between Draco and Ginny, especially when he said he wouldn't tell if she held his waist. *laughs*
Great chapter!
Author's Response: i like a snarky draco, that's for sure!
thank you!
Name: Boogum reviewed
Welcome to Tuscany on Nov 11, 2009 11:57 am
Nice beginning. I've seen this story around, but never really took the time to read it. I can tell already that I have been missing out.
Author's Response: thank you. that's a very nice thing to say :-) the next chapter will be up next week (yay) so i hope you enjoy that too.
Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed
Faith and Desire on Nov 04, 2009 04:42 am
a beautiful chapter as always....
Author's Response: thank you! :)
Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed
Eat, Drink and be Merry, for Tomorrow You'll Be Hungover on Nov 04, 2009 04:17 am
a great chapter....
Author's Response: thank you so much!
Name: pask611 reviewed
All The Things That I Wanted To Say on Oct 30, 2009 06:10 pm
omg i was in shock wen i read him porposing...i need to know wat happens nxt. amazing chapter btw keep u the awesome work
Author's Response: LOL! i thought i had given enough hints but i guess not. thanks for reading :D
Name: nacilme reviewed
All The Things That I Wanted To Say on Oct 22, 2009 03:57 pm
As I promised a review for this chapter here it is! It took me forever to read it 'cause right now I'm really caught up by my college final paper. Crazy stuff. But I've managed some time to R&R.
An again, all the DG interaction is great.
And for Ginny's answer in some future chapter I'll only take a big and sexy 'Yes!'. Any answer other than that and I'll stop even reading your fic. And that's another promise. u_u
Waiting for the next chapter anxiously!
kissus
Nac
Author's Response: thanks much for the review. Ginny keeps trying to tell herself that they are way too young to get married, but that draco... he just won't listen!
Name: Dark__Angel reviewed
All The Things That I Wanted To Say on Oct 22, 2009 02:51 pm
very nice
Author's Response: thank you!
Name: Sporkanator87 reviewed
All The Things That I Wanted To Say on Oct 21, 2009 06:16 pm
I loved this chapter! It's so emotional and well written!!
Author's Response: thanks very much. i feel a bit like preening now! LOL
Name: shadieladie reviewed
All The Things That I Wanted To Say on Oct 21, 2009 10:32 am
wow it was an intense cha. funnily enough something i needed to read. Thanks for posting it
Author's Response: well, i'm glad i could help, even in ways I don't know about!!! :D thank you very much for your comments
Name: Lynx reviewed
All The Things That I Wanted To Say on Oct 19, 2009 11:23 am
Hi! I think everyone know that Draco/Ginny can never happen, but you make it believable!! I like that Draco still has his mean and cold side left, even if he shows a lot of feelings. And I love you writing, your very talented, espacially when it comes to writing dialouges. The story takes interesting turns all the time and it's never boring. Very good!!! Keep it up! :-)
Author's Response: thank you! in my opinion, Draco wouldn't be very fun to write about if he didn't have the cold and mean side! If I wanted to write about a completely non-dysfunctional relationship, I'd write about Harry & Ginny *cackles* Thank you very much for your thoughts :D
Name: JavaStix reviewed
Welcome to Tuscany on Oct 18, 2009 11:58 pm
This story is wonderful. The vineyard idea as a whole makes the entire story very romantic - to me anyway. I hope we learn at some point, about how Grace ended up with Har...you know, the whole blood-traitor meets a death-eater thing seems off, but judging from your skill at writing, you can make it work! Nice job!
Author's Response: Confession! I never really thought much about how they got together, but now I've been thinking about it all morning! I have come up with a solution that is very plausible (at least I think it is! Ha ha) so thank you for that input. Also! I'm glad you like the story :D I liked the romantic vineyard aspect too. Originally this story was inspired by that country song Strawberry Wine. It was going to be much fluff & end with a baby, but I REALLY didn't want a pregnant 16 year old Ginny. Even though it happens, its not the most ideal situation. I seem to have found lots of other ways to torture them! Ha ha! I always wish that stories I read would go smoothly for them, but that would make it boring, wouldn't it?
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
All The Things That I Wanted To Say on Oct 18, 2009 02:46 pm
great chapter. update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed
All The Things That I Wanted To Say on Oct 18, 2009 04:08 am
I can't believe that the earthquake was natural, unless you're just trying to dramatize things. It's too much to be just a coincidence.
And the proposal was really sweet, though Draco's semi-possessiveness is still kind of freaking me out. I'm glad that Ginny has the presence of mind to stop and think about it.
Author's Response: Your response to Draco is EXACTLY what I was striving for, so yay! He's very manipulative, even if he doesn't completely realize it!
As for the earthquake, well, I'm not saying. At least not yet. And maybe not ever LOL! Maybe I'll just leave it to speculation!
Name: Farcical reviewed
All The Things That I Wanted To Say on Oct 17, 2009 10:53 pm
Amazing story, totally different from what I've read before. Please update quickly!
Author's Response: thank you very much :D
Name: TwistedPixie reviewed
All The Things That I Wanted To Say on Oct 17, 2009 11:21 am
I LOVE YOU!!!! Do not fear for the lack of reviews because there are plenty of people who love you and your stories so much.
What a lovely chapter, ok so the earthquake bit wasn't so good but their little heart to heart after was adorable. I loved the start where Ginny was just lying there thinking about her and Draco whilst he slept. Adorable.
Thank you for a great chapter, and good luck with the next one! xx
Author's Response: Well thank you!! I have to admit to was a bit more peeved than upset. I can handle angry & flaming reviews (even though they are pointlessly unhelpful) but a lack of reviews sucks because I don't know how the readers think I'm doing!!!!! Anyway. I'm glad you liked the opening. My beta & I debated on whether it was too much or not & I decided to keep it because I really wanted to show her conflict! The next chapter well under way, & curently the 1st draft has been sent to the betas! Thanks for your thoughts!
:D
Name: zea reviewed
All The Things That I Wanted To Say on Oct 16, 2009 12:10 pm
I'm pretty much in love with this story at the moment. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Why thank you!!! I just finished the next chapter & sent it to beta #1 so hopefully it'll be up in a week or 2!
Name: VioletJersey reviewed
All The Things That I Wanted To Say on Oct 16, 2009 12:24 am
Wow! I knew we discussed a few plot details but I didn't expect you'd pull that "proposal" rabbit out of your hat so soon! Now I'm definitely intrigued as to where the next chapter is going to be.
You're a brilliant writer, my dear! Being your beta is just an absolute thrill ride for me! :D
Author's Response: because of where the next chapter is going, i realized that it was going to have to be put in there sooner than i expected! i am working on the next chapter, so you'll be getting it soon. ish. :D
Name: Jack Tamara reviewed
All The Things That I Wanted To Say on Oct 15, 2009 07:51 pm
jessica k malfoy, i think you are an amazing author. i just love this story so much, i get so hyped when there's an update. and i love how ginny's realizing that she can't be without draco. and i want her to say yes! i mean, in the real world, i would be kind of holding back with the whole, "i'm really young" thing, but since I know that draco and ginny are basically destined to be together since this is dracoandginny.com, i really want her to say yes. but either way, i will love it. please update soon, you wonderful wonderful author!
XOXO,
JT
Author's Response: yes, they are destined to be together here, aren't they. yesterday i read a new story (i saw in the reviews that you did too) where they ended up not together (i think .... she killed herself in The Rose, yes?) and MAN! i was a bit depressed after that! i know i used to write really dark tragic stuff, but lately i am a sucker for a happy ending!!!!! so much so that i'm in the process of writing an "alternate" ending to Lies! anyways, i'm glad you like where the story is going and how they are feeling about each other. the nice thing about having d & g as teenagers here is that when you are a teenager you are able to more easily express 10 thousand crazy emotions and its okay. when you're an adult you have to consider others and try to analyze your feelings and all that rot! thanks for the lovely review!
Name: ginnywitch reviewed
All The Things That I Wanted To Say on Oct 15, 2009 07:42 pm
I love this fanfic, it has a special place in my heart.
Author's Response: thank you very much. :D