Reviews For Mummy's Story
Name: sweet gurl reviewed Change of Heart {flashback part 2} on May 28, 2007 12:49 pm
omg plz update asap!!!!!!

Author's Response: I sent in the next chapter :)
Name: Ice_Dragon reviewed Change of Heart {flashback part 2} on May 28, 2007 06:26 am
i love it. write more

Author's Response: Haha, I shall! Glad you're enjoying it :)
Name: Bitter_thymes reviewed Change of Heart {flashback part 2} on May 28, 2007 04:51 am
Sorry - you can delete this one, but to clarify, my "intro" comment was for your way of bringing D/G into the present.

Author's Response: Lol, nahh, I'll keep it. Thanks for the comment! Yeah, I really like the way this chapter turned out layout-wise, like, the way it flowed even though it's kind of choppy and jumpy. Thanks for the comment!
Name: Bitter_thymes reviewed Change of Heart {flashback part 2} on May 28, 2007 04:47 am
Good intro. I look forward to more.

Just saw one typo - last ΒΆ, I think you mean "bending down beside him..."

Author's Response: Good eye ;) Thank so much!
Name: liquid glass reviewed Change of Heart {flashback part 2} on May 27, 2007 09:55 am
That's the end. Oh, it's so good, keep going. I've been neglecting chores to read this. Now that it's done, I have to go mow the lawn, because I have no excuse not to! Is there some amazing chapter that you can throw up in here in five minutes?

Author's Response: Awww! I posted another chapter just now! I'm glad you like it! :)
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