This is simply one of the best fanfics I've ever read!!! I'm loving it! Loved the brotherhood, loved the demons, the feminine gang, everything! Excelent job!
Please update as soon as possible...this is really awesome!
Author's Response: Good to see that you enjoyed it so much. Unfortunately life has been a bit hectic for me so I haven't been able to update - I hope to rectify that soon.
This story is so good! I hope theres more draco/ginny action comming up!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. There is more Draco/Ginny action, however it'll take some time in coming.
This is a brilliant story! I hope it continues because I am hooked. It is very rare to find a fanfiction that actually uses literary devices. Your use of imagery and language is beautiful. I also adore you use of mythological folklore and demons! Please update soon.
Author's Response:I'm glad you liked the story so much, it's quite humbling. I haven't forgotten the story, nor do I plan on dropping it, suffice to say it will continue.
Thank you for your kind words :)
At first I was a little iffy about this story. It was a bit confusing during the first chapter, but I stuck with it as I am a fanatic for this type of AU story. The dynamic between Cass, Kiara and Ginny is a little unclear when you first introduce the three of them together, but that was cleared up a bit during the bar scene. Altogether, this is a really interesting plot line and your spelling/grammar is good. I hope to see you continue with this, because as much as I abandon stories halfway through, I can't stand to see other people do it. Besides, I'm not that great of a story-teller. Anyway, this is a comment full of rambling. Just know that I like the story and hope that it continues.
Author's Response:I'm glad you stuck with it. Also, thank you for your review, it is appreciated. I understand your concerns over the beginning, but I had my reasons. Had I revealed everything at the startup the story would've become incredibly redundant not to mention long. The story it self is already drafted up to being quite long and is seperated into three parts. The first is almost done, I have a few chapters to go and it'll move into the next which will be a year after where it ends in this one.
The only reason the spelling and grammar are good is because of my beta who has the painstaking task of clearing up after I butcher the English language.
Lastly, I don't plan on abandoning the story. It's been a while since I've updated and might even be a while before I do so again. I'm in my final year at Uni and have very little time to write. I'm picky and so is my beta so it takes us a while to come up with a draft we are both comfortable with posting.
Once again thank you for the review!
Ooo can't wait for the next bit. Great so far.
Author's Response: Glad you like it so far. The next bit has been held up due to school and work, but worry not, the story will go on. :)
By the way I love the picture you posted on your page... they really look like Ron and Company....do you think that you will post one for the last generation of the Brotherhood?
Hope the next chapter is coming along okay....
Author's Response: I was fiddling around with Photoshop and came up with that, I'm glad you liked it. I don't know about posting one of the older generation, I might if I get the time to do it. The next chapter is coming along well, I just need to fix a couple of things and write a bit more - it should be up in about two weeks or less :)
Wow - I almost didn't click on this story... But it is rediculously engaging! I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Well then, I'm glad you did and that you found it engaging. The next chapter is in the works. :)
Wow - great chapter! Update soon please!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Next chapter should be up shortly. :)
You are taking this story to interesting places.....very unusual storyline and I am really enjoying it!
please continue, I'll be waiting for your next update!
Author's Response: I'm taking it a chapter at a time to be honest. I have the general idea of where it's going, but plot bunnies keep jumping at me and it ends up going in a different direction. I'm glad you like the originality of it though.
wow...update fast please!! dont leave us hanging!
Author's Response: Sorry, didn't mean to leave you hanging, but there was too much going on in the next chapter for it to all be consolidated into one. Next chapter won't take so long, promise :)
Well. Those Death Eaters weren't so impressive! Sissies! They are going in to kill teenagers.... come on!
I can't wait for more=)
Author's Response: lol, they aren't meant to be impressive, anyone who hides behind a mask can't be all that scary. As for killing the teenagers, well, don't pass judgment on that yet. ;)
oooh! i want more!! that was awsome!!!!!! i can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. :)
This is unbelievably amazing! I love all the detail that you have included, and all the character history, and especially all the sexual frissons that are flying about.
I cannot wait to see the rest!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. It's actually a three part series so there is plenty more to come :)