Name: slitherhither reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jul 30, 2011 05:22 pm
I really like the way you are fleshing out the details of Draco's point of view leading into the events of book 6. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks, haha that's my favourite part! Making all these connections between canon and fanfiction is alot of fun. I do it even more in the next chapter :) I'd love to read your reviews in the future.
Name: Boogum reviewed
Chapter 2 on Nov 16, 2009 08:53 pm
It was not a bore. :)
I like the way you're developing Draco's character. I find it funny he said his name was Dennis. So I wonder if Roger will play a more significant part in this later. Guess I'll have to wait and see.
One thing I was a bit confused about. You have Roger say to Draco that he'll get his mum to take Draco back to the manor. The thing is that Draco never once said he lived in a manor.
Author's Response: LOL, haha, my my, you're so observant! I must admit, plot holes and grammar are my main weaknesses. It's deff. something I need to work on. I'll add that one to my list ;) And thanks...lots of people seem to have liked Chapter 2, which comes as a surprise to me, as I thought most would be upset at the lack of DG development. Haha, can I trust that you will review my next two chapters? Hopefully so! :) Thanks, Imaiya.
Name: Rebecca Ripple reviewed
Chapter 2 on Nov 05, 2009 12:45 pm
Interesting... I gotta read bmore right away! :D