Name: tinamarie reviewed
Like Two Ships Passing in the Alley on Apr 17, 2010 01:49 pm
I was just about to comment on how I liked how Harry was portrayed in this story (not something I can say often) and then you pull out the wife beather card. I am enjoying this story regardless and can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: No! Harry actions are only aggressive forplay! As I have said many time Harry is not a bad guy in this story. He is just A man who does love his wife! I do normally like Harry, after all I read seven books about the guy, and I crused him out for endiing things with Ginny.And was happy with the end but Ginny and Draco is just so much more fun!
Name: andi822 reviewed
Like Two Ships Passing in the Alley on Feb 08, 2010 05:23 am
I love how you've written this as Draco is the one who is most effected by the marriages.
Name: Boogum reviewed
Like Two Ships Passing in the Alley on Nov 03, 2009 10:00 pm
*laughs* Poor Draco getting all upset over the bruises when it was just Potter getting a bit to excited for his own good.
This chapter was better than the first, though some of it did feel a bit like a summary. Again, I know that you're setting the story up and still getting past the beginning phases, so I won't hold it against you. It's always good to balance the description with the dialogue/events, though. Perhaps try to get more into the scenes and use more imagery, or even explore the characters' feelings a bit more. I think it would help. :)
Name: headred33 reviewed
Like Two Ships Passing in the Alley on Aug 20, 2009 02:12 pm
i hope harry dies or something cuz i want d and g to be together! lol great fic, u have excellant writing skill and its an interesting plot. update soon!
Name: marahlynn reviewed
Like Two Ships Passing in the Alley on Aug 18, 2009 08:48 pm
ooooo I love the secret codes!! cant wait for more drama to come!
Name: shezachica85 reviewed
Like Two Ships Passing in the Alley on Aug 18, 2009 01:55 pm
Awww poor lovers
Name: readhead1755 reviewed
Like Two Ships Passing in the Alley on Aug 17, 2009 05:02 pm
Is it wrong that I want Harry to be mean so that Draco can save her?
Author's Response: Don't hate Harry. He is as much a victim in this as Draco or Ginny. I mean honestly Ginny should have told him the truth before she married him. Don`t get me wrong I love Ginny with Draco, Lucius or even Severus. Harry and Ginny stories are just to boring. But I think you will love whats to come!
Name: choravenclaw reviewed
Like Two Ships Passing in the Alley on Aug 17, 2009 04:17 pm
I love this whole "Cross secret".
it's beautiful, and at the same time is like they are cheating on Harry's face, it's quite something, feels great to know he's been cheated on without even realizing
Sorry sometimes i let my hate for Harry talk higher and bring things out of poportions.
This chapter was a bit fast though, like everything went by in a blurr.
i do hope they end up together, it will be just cruel if they don't.
If they don't then please write an alternative ending, it's just plain cruel to see them apart!
kisses
Author's Response: I don't like Harry in fanfiction myself. well this story is not full written I believe you will be happy with the end!