Name: Boogum reviewed
Chapter 4 on Nov 03, 2009 10:23 pm
Well that was depressing. I'm still not really sure how I feel about this story. I'm getting irritated at both Draco and Ginny, but more Draco. I'm not a romantic enough to feel he's justified in his behaviour. He's only hurting them both by dragging this on and constantly saying how much he loves her, etc.
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed
Chapter 4 on Oct 21, 2009 01:38 am
its so deliciously heartbreaking. i want more...i love them silently pining for each other. plz update soon :D
Author's Response: More is comeing!!!
Name: Teacup reviewed
Chapter 4 on Oct 17, 2009 05:08 pm
I have no idea why this fic is receiving so many negative reviews. Yes, so far, Ginny and Draco are not together, but that fact is stated fairly clearly in the story summary ...
I really enjoy the mood and atmosphere of this story. You write very well; my only wish is that you would lengthen chapters. I don't really mind the jumps in time, but I would like to have more details about their daily lives, rather than just quick fill-ins about landmark events every few years. Right now it almost reads like just a series of vignettes, and I am too intrigued to not want more!
Please give everyone a happy ending! They all deserve it. I am also interested to see what role Lucius and other family members may play. Looking forward to your next update!
Author's Response: I'm trying to show that live goes on. I'm trying to get to the end of the last book then I promise things will slow down. I hope to have the next chapter up in a couple of days!
Name: choravenclaw reviewed
Chapter 4 on Oct 17, 2009 01:12 pm
Please leave me a review, tell me what you like and don't like!
i don't make it a habit of lying on reviews and i won't start now
i hated this!
how come he doesn't get to keep her?
what are you gonna do?
let them be together right before death or sth?
a kiss to a dying erson's lips?
that's a load of crap!
i hated that you kept them apart and miserable for their whole lifes
i always suggest great fics to people, but this one lost the even worth reading rank
it's not!
this chapter screwed everything up!
she should have had a miscarriage, Astoria could die of child birth along with Scorpius and Harry could have fucking ied by a bus hit for all i care
i hated this, it's a horrible ending and even if it isn't the end it's already fucked up beyond repair unless this chapter is completely re-writen.
On a positive note; you write very well despite the fact that you skip time too much.
Author's Response: All good things come to those who wait. I mean how borning would the story have been if they got together by chapter two?